,10/29/2020,#,【,概要写作话题训练,1】,科技发展,【概要写作话题训练1】科技发展,1,科技发展,主题语境,:,科技发展关键词,:RC model airplane,语篇类型,:,事物介绍短文词数,:324,语篇难度,:,建议时间,:23mins,阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要,If you are taking up flying for the first time,it isrecommended that you go in for a battery-operated modelplane Gasoline-powered models require an expert handbattery-powered planes are quite easy to setup and operate.You will need to buy a model plane withits matching remote control(RC)to enable you to start,control and land your model plane,科技发展主题语境:科技发展关键词:RC model air,2,Once you have assembled(,组装,),your model plane,it,is time for a test flight You can call an experienced,friend who,has much flying experience.That would help you,in avoiding,costly mistakes and your model plane will,be saved,from the reduced crashing experience.You can,take it,to your garden or any other empty plot of land for,your first,flight.If the ground is smooth,you could make it takeoff from there or you can even make it take off with,one person,holding the plane and then leaving it gently.,Once you,get the hang of it,you can then proceed to do,some stunts(,特技,),like flying loops,rolls and inverted,flight The,joy of learning something new will keep your,interest alive,in this,hobby,Once you have assembled(组装)yo,3,Once you are well skilled in flying,battery-operated model,planes,you can also graduate to,gasoline-powered planes,.These planes also can be controlled by,remote control,and their distinct motor sound gives flying a,more realistic,touch of being in the early,1900,s as compared,to an,electric motor,which is,silent So,whichever plane you fly,it is essential that you,get familiar,with the remote control to enable your,model lane,to obey your commands and keep crashes to,a minimum,.Over time you will be able to make your,plane form,difficult and death defying stunts without,any fear,.So,take some action now.Get that RC model,air plane and,take to the skies with your feet planted firmly on,the ground,.,Once you are well skilled in f,4,语言点津,:familiar with,与,familiar to,辨析,familiar with,常可表示,1,.“,熟悉的”,即,having a good knowledge of sth,;,2.,友好,的,过分亲密的,不拘礼节的”,即,friend and informa,am quite,familiar with her poetry.,我很熟悉她,的,诗作,|am Dont,be too familiar with him hes a dishonestman.,别与他交往过密,他这人不诚实,。,familiar,to,可,表示,“,为,所熟悉”,即,well known to sb;often seenor,heard,如,:English is familiar to me.,英语为我所熟悉,语言点津:familiar with与 familiar,5,文章来源,文章来源本文选自英文网站,www.streetdirectory,com,原文标题为“,Start Flying RC Model Airplanes”,试飞用遥控器操控的飞机模型,作者,Genge,如语篇解读,语篇,解读,本文是一篇说明文。如果你第一次操纵飞机模型,最好用电池驱动的飞机模型。在操控实践过程中,为避免事故的发生,尽可能邀请有这方面经验的朋友参加。,文章来源文章来源本文选自英文网站www.streetdire,6,难,句解读,If you are taking up flying for the first time,it isrecommended that you go in for a battery-operated,model,译文,:,如果你是第一次学着操纵飞行器,建议你选择电池驱动的飞机模型分析,:,这是一个主从复合句。,if,引导条件状语从句,主句为,itisrecommended that,句式,that,引导主语从句,该主语从句中的谓语动词用到了虚拟语气,即“,(should+),动词原形”形,难句解读 If you are taking up flyi,7,笔前点睛,审题,分析,1,审写作要求,:,概要写作,文章属于说明文,;,2,.,审人称口吻,:,以第三人称口吻进行概括叙述,;,3,审时态,:,以一般现在时为主,;,4,审写作,要点,挖掘主题,-flying RC model,planes,阐述重点,Carrying out a battery-operated plane is,the first,choice for,people,说明,现象,When you want to join in your test flight,you can invite an experienced friend to go with you.,现象结论,The purpose of doing this is to protect,plane better,要点提升,t s essential to understand that this hobby,is exciting,enough to delight,you,笔前点睛审题分析,8,思路点拨,1.,从文章第一段第一句,If,you are taking up flying for,first time,it is recommended that you go in for a battery-operated model plane.,可简明扼要地概括全篇所要表达的,主题,2,.,第二、三段是对第一段内容的诠释与阐述,详实补充了主题要点,。,3,根据最后一段的首句,So,whichever plane you fly,itisessential that you get familiar with the remote control toenable your model plane to obey your commands andkeep crashes to a minimum.,等信息综合分析,全面的概括水到渠成。,思路点拨1.从文章第一段第一句 If you are tak,9,高分范文,The text mainly talks about flying RC model,planes(,要点,1)Whats,more,trying a battery-operated plane,is the,first choice to carry out because it is easy to,handle(,要点,2)When youre,engaged in your test flight,you,may ask,an experienced friend to accompany you in order,to protect,the plane better.,(,要点,3)When,it comes to,some stunts,its essential to understand that this hobby,is exciting,enough to delight you.(,要点,4)(71 words),高分范文The text mainly talks abou,10,重要,短语,talk,about,讨论,谈论,carry,out,执行,实行,engaged,in,从事,When,it comes to,当,提到,delight,sb,使某人,快乐,高级,句型,1.Whats more,trying a battery-operated plane is the,first choice,to carry out because it is easy to handle(because,引导原因状语从句,)2,.When youre engaged in your test flight,you may ask,an experienced,friend to accompany you in order to,protect the,plane better.(when,引导时间状语从句,in order to protect the,plane better,作目的状语,)3.When it comes to some stunts its essential,to understand,that this hobby is exciting enough to delight(When,引导时间状语从句,that,引导宾语从句,),高级词块句型,重要短语高级词块句型,11,精彩点评,1.,本篇概要写作逻辑性强,自然流畅,结构清晰,层次分明,。,2,大胆地使用了一些高级词汇。如,talk about,、,carry out,、,beengaged in,、,accompany,、,delight sb,等,。,3,承接词语的使用也极具色彩,如,what s more,、,when,it comes,to,等,。,4,运用了一些让人耳目一新的高级句式使整篇文章生辉增艳