单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,12/29/2019,#,书面表达,话题写作（三）,校园生活篇,书面表达话题写作（三）校园生活篇,1,【话题点睛】,话题主要包括学生在学校的生活和学习情况。涉及的要点,:,(1),学校一天的学习时间安排,;,(2),学习过程中碰到的学习问题,;,交友问题,;,(3),国内外校园生活的异同,;,校园活动、事件等,;,(4),校园生活中的一些学习或生活规则,如带手机问题和穿校服问题等。,【话题点睛】话题主要包括学生在学校的生活和学习情况。涉及的,2,典例分析,典例分析,3,注意,(1),回信应包括所有要点,;,(2),词数,:80,左右,(,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,);,(3),不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。,Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.In your letter you said that_,_,_,Good luck with everything!,Li Hua,注意,4,【思路点拨】,1.,要点提炼,:,主题要求就,Ben,在交友和学习中碰到的问题给予建议,主要从以下两个方面展开,:,(1),朋友少,感觉孤单,:,参加学校社团,结识更多朋友,;,(2),英语单词难记,:,多阅读英语故事、新闻,在运用中学单词。,2.,确定时态,:,一般现在时。,3.,主要句式,:,提建议的句式,如,:You should,;You can,;Its a good idea to,等。,【写作架构】,【思路点拨】【写作架构】,5,【基础写作】,.,写主干句,(,根据所给提示补全下列各句。,),1.,听说你在适应中学生活上有困难我很难过。,(have trouble doing sth.),I am sorry to,that you are,used to life in middle school.,2.,此外,你最好友好对待他人。,(be friendly to),youd better,others.,3.,对他人微笑,作为回报你一定也会得到微笑。,(be sure to),Smile at others and you,get a smile,.,4.,阅读更多的英语故事和新闻能帮助你在运用中学习英语单词。,(help sb.do sth.),more English stories and news can,you,English words in a practical way.,5.,我希望你将发现这些建议是有用的。,(useful),I,you will find these suggestions,.,hear,having trouble getting,Besides,be friendly to,are sure to,in return,Reading,help,learn,hope,useful,【基础写作】hearhaving trouble getti,6,.,句子升格,(,按括号中的要求完成句子。,),1.You always feel lonely.You have few friends.(,用,because,连接两个句子,),2.In this way,you can make more friends.They share the same interest with you.(,合并为含有由,who,引导的定语从句的复合句,),3.You can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day.It will be easier for you to remember more words.(,合并为含有由,if,引导的条件状语从句的复合句,),You always feel lonely because you have few friends.,In this way,you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.,If you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day,it will be easier for you to remember more words.,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)You always,7,【连句成文】,Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.In your letter,you said that you always felt lonely because you had few friends.I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.In this way,you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.Besides,youd better be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.,On the other hand,you found it difficult to remember English words.Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.In addition,if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day,it will be easier for you to remember more words.,I hope you will find these suggestions useful.,Good luck with everything!,Li Hua,【连句成文】,8,拓展积累,【相关短语】,with ones help,在某人的帮助下,;be good at,擅长于,;each other,相互,彼此,;make sb.do sth.,使某人做某事,;continue doing sth.,继续做某事,;make progress,取得进步,;little by little,渐渐地,;keep doing sth.,坚持做某事,;junior high school,初中,;whats more,而且,;be full of,充满,;get on well with sb.,与某人相处融洽,;thanks to,多亏,由于,;senior high school,高中,【参考谚语】,1.Wasting time is robbing oneself.,浪费时间就是掠夺自己。,2.A young idler,an old beggar.,少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。,3.Custom makes all things easy.,习惯成自然。,4.He who would climb the ladder must begin at the bottom.,千里之行始于足下。,拓展积累【相关短语】,9,【校园课程相关表达】,1.We have Chinese at eight oclock and science at five to nine.,2.On Tuesday,we have art and history,but we dont have maths.,3.I go to school on weekdays,but not on Saturday and Sunday.,【同学交往相关表达】,1.They go to the playground and play football,but I dont like football.,2.You are not the same as you were ten years ago,and your friend isnt the same,either.,3.I hope you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.,【校园课程相关表达】,10,实战演练,A,初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的时光一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆,请你根据图表提示简要描述这段时间的学习、生活情况。,实战演练A,11,要求,(1),词数,:,不少于,80,开头已给出,不计入总词数,;,(2),文中不得出现真实姓名、校名,;,(3),要包含图表中所给的信息,并适当拓展。,My Life in Junior High School,I have studied in my junior high school for three years.My life in junior high school was rich and I have learned a lot._,_,_,_,要求,12,One,possible,version,:,My Life in Junior High School,I have studied in my junior high school for three years.My life in junior high school was rich and I have learned a lot.I have made a lot of friends in my school.They often helped me when I was in trouble.Our teachers were friendly and patient,especially my English teacher.She often helped me with my English.So my favourite subject was English.I liked sports.In my free time,I often played basketball or football with my friends.It was good for my health and it was a good way to relax from the busy study.,In a word,my life in junior high school was colourful and unforgettable.,One possible version:,13,B,假设你是李明,上周日你班举行了一次毕业聚会。请根据以下提示,给你的英国笔友,Robert,写一封邮件,向他描述聚会的情况并谈谈你当时的感受。,B,14,要求,(1),必须包含所给提示,并作适当发挥,;,(2),行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名,;,(3),词数,:80,左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Hi Robert,We had a graduation party last Sunday._,_,_,Do you have such a party?Please write soon.,Yours,Li Ming,要求,15,One,possible,v