单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,写作训练（,unit1),基础写作：人物写作任务型写作：改变自我,第1页,第1页,基础写作：人物写作,第2页,第2页,第一节：基础写作,假设你是学校英文网站通讯员，最近该网站准备简介一些优秀学生，请你用英文为卢燕同窗写一篇简介。,请依据下列中文提纲，简介卢燕同窗基本情况。,姓名：卢燕,职务：高二（,2,）班班长,特点：严于律己，乐于助人，健康、活泼,兴趣：体育、歌唱、跳舞,事迹：她各科成绩都较好，但刚进校时，在英语学习方面有困难，通过努力，成绩提升了。不久前参与了英语演讲比赛并取得一等奖。,第3页,第3页,1,卢燕是高二（,2,）班班长，严于律己，乐于助人。,5,不久前参与了,英语演讲比,赛并取得一等奖。,2,她健康，活泼，兴趣体育、唱歌和跳舞。,3,她各科成绩都较好。,4,进校时，在英语学习方面有困难，通过努力，成绩提升了。,信息排列参考,:,按照题目内容顺序,第4页,第4页,人物简介普通环节：,1,、概况,age,sex,birth-place,background,2,、外貌,性格,character appearance,3,、教育,education,4,、生平事迹,big events in his her life(in order of time),5,、评估,价,evaluation,第5页,第5页,be born in.,Born into a family,.,writer,athlete,professor,journalist,physicist,scientist,1,概况,：,第6页,第6页,a,ttractive,a,ctive,b,rave,c,aring,c,areful,e,asygoing,h,umorous,l,ovely,l,ively,o,ptimistic,o,utgoing,2,、性格、特性,第7页,第7页,f,rank,h,onest,m,odest,p,atient,p,opular,r,esponsible,s,traightforward,s,elfless,t,alented,t,olerant,w,arm-hearted,第8页,第8页,g,entle,smart clever,courage,ous,ambiti,ous,gener,ous,hardwork,ing,dilig,ent,learn,ed,educat,ed,knowledge,able,第9页,第9页,bright,intellig,ent,independ,ent,confid,ent,curi,ous,consider,ate,posi,tive,devot,ed,determin,ed,energet,ic,pain,ful,第10页,第10页,receive little education,receive further education in,go abroad for further education,major in,graduate from,be admitted to.,win the first prize,receive a doctors degree,3,、教育,第11页,第11页,be interested in,be fond of,Her hobbies are.,do well in all ones subjects,be good at,have a gift in be gifted in,perform well in,behave oneself,4.,生平事迹,第12页,第12页,devote oneself to sth.,be strict,with,sb.,in,sth.,have difficulty in(doing)sth.,manage to do sth.,make(good/great/significant)progress,overcome the difficulties,第13页,第13页,be capable of(doing)sth.,be bent on(doing)sth.,make up one,s mind to do sth.,be determined to do sth.,take up sth.,be enthusiastic about(doing),sth.,be active in doing sth.,第14页,第14页,be determined to do sth.,be absorbed in(doing)sth.,make contributions to,be ready to do sth.,be willing to help others,take delight in doing sth.,第15页,第15页,(in)doing sth.,complain about sth,.,take an active part in(doing)sth.,on sth.,spend one,s spare time,第16页,第16页,be thought highly of,be famous/known for sth.,be admired respected by,One of the best most famous,Set an example to,第17页,第17页,有用短语,熟读背诵：,be admitted into a key university,考上重点大学,major in law,主修法律,get a masters degree,取得硕士学位,graduate from Harvard University,毕业于哈佛大学,win the first prize,取得一等奖,win a gold medal,赢得一枚金牌,win the Nobel Prize,取得诺贝尔奖,become a world champion,成为世界冠军,set a good example to us,给我们树立了良好榜样,(10)be highly thought of,受到好评,(11)be awarded a medal for,因,而取得奖章,(12)be awarded the title of,取得,称号,(13)devote.to.,把,专用于,/,奉献给,第18页,第18页,Lu Yan,the monitress of Class2,Grade 2,is,very,strict with,herself,in,her study and daily life,and,is,always ready to,help others.She is,healthy and lively,and is fond of sports,singing and dancing.Not only is she very,kind and active,but she also,does well in,all her subjects.Although she,had quite a lot of difficulty in learning,English when she first came to school,she,managed to,make significant progress,with great efforts,.Whats more,she,took part in,an English speech contest not long ago and,won the first prize,.,第19页,第19页,任务型写作,改变自我,第20页,第20页,第二节 读写任务,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇,150,词左右英语短文。,There is a story telling of a religious master who is said to be capable of moving mountains.A man came to him and asked him to show how to do it.The master sat in front of a mountain for a moment,then went to the other side of it and declared that he succeeded.All the audience were greatly puzzled and begged him for an explanation.He said,“There has never been a way of moving mountains.What you can do is to go to the mountain if it doesnt come.”,One of my friends,though having the qualities needed to become a businessman,was bent on,being a painter.He,resigned from office,and devoted himself entirely to painting at home.Several years,however,saw no progress,in this regard,.,A painful reflection over the past,brought him to his senses,.He made up his mind to,take up business,in place of painting.It took him only a few years to become a rich businessman.Meanwhile,he spent his spare time,exchanging experience and skills,in painting and,calligraph,y.His works finally won approval of expert painters and were on sale in art galleries and grand hotels.He had his collections published and his dream of becoming a painter came true at last.,第21页,第21页,写作内容：,请就以上文章写一篇读后感，内容包括：,以约,30,个词概括这段短文内容；,然后以约,120,个词就“改变自我”为主题发表你见解，内容包括：,当所面正确事实无法改变时，是否应当改变自己？,举例阐明你观点；,总结你见解。,第22页,第22页,存在问题,概括：信息不全；语言不够简练,过渡：概括与主体部分过渡生硬或无过渡句，过渡词。,例子不妥，无法表示“改变自我”,时态,总结见解，点题不到位。,对主题理解不充足；,中式表示,第23页,第23页,概括,记叙文:1）单独讲述一件事一个故事,2）讲述一件事一个故事+写作目,故事寓意,主题,1,）,The passage tells us the a story of.,sbs experience,主题句（大意）,+,细节（时、地、人、事）,2）The passage tells us+主题 寓意目+by showing the example of+故事大意。,The passage tells us the story experience ofIt points out that+寓意 写作目,第2