单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,了解写作的注意事项,学会运用技巧，进行语篇的组织。,背诵范文。,学习目标,Questions:,1.What do you think of English writting?Easy or difficult?,2.What troubles you most in writting?,(Ss tell their feelings about English writing.),中考作文,五步走,写法,一、审清题目，列出要点,审文体（,包括,格式），审人称，,审时态，审内容要点（,含,字数）,二、结合要点，简单表达,三、连词成句，表达正确,四、适当发挥，丰富表达,五、组合成文，适当过渡,注意：,仔细检查，认真抄写,中考作文举例 指 导,典型例题：,为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高其自我保护能力，某校开展了以,“,How to keep safe?,”,为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。,（1）慎重交友；(2)遇险报警；,（3）安全饮食；（4）其他（1-2点）,词数；80词左右。文章开头已给出，不记入总词数。,参考词汇：be careful,online,danger,call,for,go bad.,审题思路：,1.明确主题；本文的主题是就,”,如何保持安全,“,这一话题根据要点提示进行阐述。,2.写作要点：,（1）慎重交友（be careful when we make friends);,(2)遇险报警(if in danger,call the police for help);,（3）安全饮食(eat healthily and safely);,（4）自己的观点(it is dangerous to swim in the river),(safety must come first),3.时态：一般现在时,4.人称:第一人称,佳作赏析：,How to keep safe,As teenagers,we should always keep safety in mind.But how can we keep ourselves safe?Here are some of my suggestions.,First(,与 second,also,last一起使文章布局合理，条理清晰）,we should be careful when we make friends,especially online.Second,if we are in danger,we should call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe?,Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely,Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health.Last but not the least,summer is coming,and we must remember it is dangerous to swim in the river.,In short,safety must come first.,一、看校园安全 话题作文，审题，列出要点。,建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们,更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是,Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生,发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。,内容提示：,(1)不带管制刀具到学校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;,(4)上学放学的途中注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。,参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things,紧急情况：emergency;,写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。,(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。,范文,一、,审清题目，列出要点;,审,文体:,审,人称,：,3.审,时态：,4.审内容,要点,及,字数,：,(1)不带管制刀具到学校;,(2)不私自下河洗澡;,(3)不打架;,(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;,(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。,We mustnt bring,Dont have a bath in the river.without,Fighting is,Pay more attention to/We must obey.on the way to,When we meet some.,we should call for help.,第一人称（we）,一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时,应用文中的书信格式,Dear students,As we know,safety is the most important thing in our lives.,So,we should try our best to make sure we are safe.,We mustnt bring restricted,knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems.,Do not,have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission.,And,we should be friendly to others because fighting is strongly banned.Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home.,Whats more,if we meet some emergency,we must call for help from the police or our teachers.,In a word,following these safeties rules,above can make us live in peace.,Yours，,Li Hua,范文;,自学指导二、看“开展有意的活动”，,审题，列出要点2,为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。,提示：1.衣着整洁;,2.保持环境卫生;,3.待人有礼，乐于助人;,4.遵守交通规则;,5.,要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示中14 项内容，可展开 思路，适当发挥;,2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;,3.词数：80词左右。,自学检测二、,审题，列要点并简单表达5,1.审,人称,：,2.审,时态：,3.要点表达：适当拓展，丰富表达。,.衣着整洁;,.保持环境卫生;,.待人有礼，乐于助人;,.遵守交通规则;,.适当拓展(在公共场所不大声喧哗）,We should keep our.,It is our duty./The city must be.,第一人称（we）,一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时,Be friendly and ready to help others.When we are on the bus,We should obey.when the traffic lights are red,Dont talk loudly in public places./It is good to save,How to Behave Well?,In order to,build a civilized city,we students should,try our best to,behave well in the activities.,Its a good habit,to keep our clothes clean and tidy.Our city should be kept clean every day.,Dont,throw litter or spit about.Its good manners to say Thank you and Please and so on.We should never say dirty words.Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need.,For example,when we are on a bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies.We should also obey traffic rules.When the traffic lights are red,we should stop.And,wed better not,talk or laugh loudly in public.,If,everyone behaves well,our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.,范文背诵5,.自学指导三、看“如何减压让生活更美好”审题，并思考如何回答，再进行语篇组织 2,许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure,Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:,(1)同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;,(2)我的压力是什么;,(3)我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。,注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80100。,同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;,(2)我的压力是什么;,(3)我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。,自学检测三、思考问题,，回答要点，连词成句 4,审,文体:,审,人称,：,3.审,时态：,4.审内容,要点,及,字数,：,考试压力，举例说明压力是来自谁，具体的情况,跟对方谈谈自己的想法，沟通思想，达成共识,第一人称（学生们/I）,一般现在时（主体时态）、过去时,演讲稿,考试压力、交往方面的压力,范文 背诵5,Less Pressure,Better Life,Hello,boys and girls!,Pressure is a serious problem in todays world,.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students cant get on well with their classmates,while,others may worry about their exams.,Im always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my