,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,2020-2021年人教版高中英语新课标读后续写课件,1,A short story is a kind of fiction about,imagined events,and,characters,.,Every great short story is a perfect combination of the,FIVE,key elements.,1. character,2. setting,(background),3. conflict,(trouble),4. plot,(development),5. theme,character analyst,角色分析师,setting investigator,背景调查员,conflict finder,冲突发现者,plot wizard,剧情魔术师,theme discoverer,主题探索者,A short story is a kin,2,Role,What to do,A,character analyst,analyze,the characters mood,B,setting investigator,investigate,the background,C,conflict finder,find,the conflict,D,theme discoverer,discover,the central themes,ABCD,plot wizard,design,a possible development of the story,A,B,C,D,RoleWhat to doAcharacter analy,3,setting investigator,Who,are the major characters in this short story?,What,is their relationship?,How,did the character feel at the beginning of the story?,When,did the story happen?,conflict finder,What is the,conflict,(trouble) at the very beginning of the story?,character analyst,Para. 1,setting investigatorWho are th,4,setting investigator,Who,?,What,?,How,?,When,?,conflict finder,conflict?,character analyst,Della and Jim. They are a married couple.,Desperate/Frustrated,.,At Christmas,when people exchange gifts as a custom.,They lived,in extreme poverty,.,How did the writer vividly show these feelings,?,Para. 1,setting investigatorWho? When?,5,her cheeks burned,with the silent scold of meanness.,There was clearly nothing to do but,sob,on the shabby couch and,howl,., at a,gray,cat walking along a,gray,fence in a,gray,yard.,How did the writer vividly show these feelings,?,Find some sentences with,vivid descriptions,that show her,desperation and frustration,.,1,2,3,Imagery, her cheeks burned with the,6,plot wizard,Her eyes were shining brilliantly, but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.,It,suddenly occurred to,her that she could sell the hair to buy an expensive gift for Jim.,conflict finder,She was,sorrowful,because she would buy the gift,at the expense of,her beloved hair.,her love for _,her love for _,hair,Jim,Para. 2-8,plot wizardHer eyes were shini,7,Her eyes were shining brilliantly, but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.,It,suddenly occurred to,her that she could sell the hair to buy an expensive gift for Jim.,conflict finder,her love for Jim,plot wizard,She was,sorrowful,because she would buy the gift,at the expense of,her beloved hair.,Her eyes were shining brillian,8,Staring into the mirror, she found her hair reached below her knees, shining like a brown waterfall. And then quickly she put it up again. She stood still while a few tears splashed on the floor. She put on her coat and her old brown hat. With brilliant sparkle still in her eyes, she danced out of the door and down to the street.,plot wizard,Imagery,vivid use of language to form a(n) image /picture,Staring into the mirror, she,9,plot wizard,Imagery,vivid use of language to form a(n) image /picture,Staring into,the mirror, she found her hair,reached below her knees,shining like a brown waterfall,.,She,stood still,while a few tears,splashed/dripped/streamed down,on the floor.,With brilliant sparkle in her eyes, she,danced/rushed/dashed,at a brisk pace,out of the door and down to the street.,plot wizardImageryvivid use of,10,body language expressions,surprise,eyes,wide open;,eyebrows,raised high;,mouth,in the shape of an “O”;,jaw,dropping,lips,curving into a smile;,face,lighting up;,dance,for joy;,grin,from ear to ear,happiness,being moved,red-rimmed,eyes,;,hug/embrace,sb. tightly;,tears,splashing /welling,Imagery,body language expressionssurpr,11,What might,Jim,s reaction be?,He was,surprised,. (,shocked/stunned/dumbfounded,),He was,frustrated,. (,dismayed,),Della,Jim,Connection,Jim,took out,a package.,plot wizard,Interaction,Imagery,Della delightedly,presented,the gift to Jim and told the truth.,Jim was deeply,moved,and,hugged,her in his arms.,What might Jims reaction be?H,12,Interaction,Imagery,surprise,eyes,wide open;,eyebrows,raised high;,mouth,in the shape of an “O”;,jaw,dropping,lips,curving into a smile;,face,lighting up;,dance,for joy;,grin,from ear to ear,happiness,being moved,red-rimmed,eyes,;,hug/embrace,sb. tightly;,tears,splashing /welling,InteractionImagerysurpriseeyes,13,Use,“interaction”,to design your plot;,Use,“imagery”,to make your language more vivid.,Use “interaction” to design yo,14,A possible version for reference,The door opened and Jim stepped in.,Staring at Dellas eyes,shining with anticipation, Jim,widened his eyes,at the sight of her new haircut and,squeezed out a faint smile,to mask his inner dismay.,/,Della,danced towards him at a brisk pace,and,spread out her palm,with the shiny chain inside, saying gently Merry Christmas, honey!.,/,Realizing Della bought the gift at the expense of her beloved hair, Jim was reduced to tears,with red-rimmed eyes,and,embraced her tightly in his arms,.,/,While mildly stroking her short hair, he,murmured in a choked voice, “Ive also got a gift for you!” as he reached for a package and unwrapped it.,Inside Jims package were the combs something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window.,A possible version for referen,15,theme discoverer,Love,Sacrifice,Wealth,1,2,3,It is,love and sacrifice,that,make people truly wealthy.,theme discovererLoveSacrificeW,16,Use,“interaction,” and,“imagery”,to finish the second part of the writing with,a surprising ending,and,the theme,highlighted.,Use “interaction” and “imagery,17,2020-2021年人教版高中英语新课标读后续写课件,18,