单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,高考英语读后续写,修辞手法,高考英语读后续写,1,明喻,暗喻,拟人,夸张,明喻暗喻拟人夸张,2,明喻是比喻修辞的一种，在强调两种事物的相似点的同时，本体、喻体、喻词都出现，且能使语言生动形象。喻词有,like,as,as.as,as if,等。,The crocodile,looks,like,a,dog,.,本体,喻词,喻体,simile,明喻,simile明喻,3,Part 1,：,by using simile marker“like”,用,like,作喻词,1.The smile on her face,shone like a diamond.,（情感描写）,她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。,2.I feel,like I am floating in an ocean of sadness,.,（情感描写）,我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。,3.The scenery along the journey,is just like a breath-taking landscape painting.,(,景物描写,),沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。,4.The icy wind started howling,cutting my face like a sharp knife,.,(,景物描写,),寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。,5.Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky,like sparkling jewels.,(,景物描写,),繁星像珊珊发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。,Part 1：by using simile marker,4,小试牛刀,1.,这本书陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。,2.,他茫然地看着我就像一个傻子。,3.,他就像一头疯牛一样冲我吼。（,mad cow,）,4.,他非常着急就像热锅上的蚂蚁一样。,5.,他僵在那里一动不动就像一块石头。,参考答案：,1.The book has accompanied me for quite a long time like an old friend.,2.He looked at me blankly like a fool.,3.He shouted at me like a mad cow.,4.He is anxious like an ant on a hot pan.,5.He stood still like a stone.,小试牛刀1.这本书陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。参考,5,Part 2,：,by using simile marker“as.as”,用,as.as,作喻词,1.The smile on her face was,as vibrant as the sun,on a summer day,（情感描写）,她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。,2.Father rushed to his sons school,only to discover the building was,as flat as pancake,煎饼,.,(,景物描写,),父亲冲到儿子的学校后，才发现这座建筑已经变成一片废墟。,3.I reached out to touch her face,which was,as cold as the ice.,(,人物描写,),我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。,更多搭配：,as busy as a bee,忙忙碌碌,as hungry as a wolf,饥肠辘辘,as proud as a peacock,傲如孔雀,as easy as ABC,极其容易,as brave as a lion,勇猛如狮,as pretty as a picture,美如画,Part 2：by using simile marker,6,小试牛刀,1.,我的心和蜂蜜一样甜。,2.,他的心和石头一样硬。,3.,他的身体和牛一样壮实。,4.,我们面前的景色美如一幅画。,5.,这辆公交车走的像蜗牛一样慢。,参考答案：,1.My heart is as sweet as honey.,2.His heart is as hard as a stone.,3.His body is as strong as a cow.,4.The scenery before us is as beautiful as a picture.,5.The bus went as slowly as a snail.,小试牛刀1.我的心和蜂蜜一样甜。参考答案：,7,Part 3,：,by using simile marker“as if”,用,as if,作喻词,1.Mrs Sather looked at my eyes,as if(she were)seeing my inner self locked away inside.,（动作描写）,Sather,老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。,2.She swept her son into her arms with her eyes wet,as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him.,（动作描写）,她眼睛湿润，把儿子拥进怀里，仿佛想把他的呼吸挤出来。,3.Her hair grew greyer and greyer,as if(it were)covered with snow and frost.,（肖像描写）,他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。,4.She felt,as if her heart had been ripped from her body.,（情感描写）,她感觉自己心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。,Part 3：by using simile marke,8,小试牛刀,1.,他感觉彷佛整个世界都崩塌了。,2.,他在操场上自由地奔跑彷佛他是一只快乐的小鸟。,3.,他无辜地看着我好像他什么都不知道似的。,4.,他感觉他的心脏被刀子捅了一刀。（,stab,）,参考答案：,1.He felt as if the whole world had fallen apart on him.,2.He was running on the soprts field as if he was a happy bird.,3.He looked at me innocently as if he didnt know anything.,4.He felt as if his heart had been stabbed by a knife.,小试牛刀1.他感觉彷佛整个世界都崩塌了。参考答案：,9,Metaphor,：,It is a figure of speech containing an implied comparison,in which a word or phrase ordinarily and primarily used of one thing is applied to another.Unlike simile,a word or a phrase that compares one thing to another,using the words like or as.,暗喻是比喻修辞的一种，用一种事物比喻另一种事物，本体喻体都出现，中间常用喻词,“,是,”,等连接，有时不用喻词。暗喻的典型形式为：甲是乙，而不用,like,as,等喻词。,Money sometimes,is,a poison.,钱有时候是一种毒药。,metaphor,暗喻,Metaphor：It is a figure of,10,高中读后续写之修辞手法课件,11,Part 1,：,by using the link word“be”,通过,be,动词联系,1.Her hair,was a flowing golden river,streaming down her shoulders.,（肖像描写）,她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。,2.The beatutiful park,was a scented carpet of color.,(,景物描写,),美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。,3.Stop,being such a baby,.,(,人物描写,),别这么幼稚好不好。,4.Life,is an unexplored river.,full of twists and turns.,(,哲理,),生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。,Part 1：by using the link word,12,Part 2,：,by using the verbs ,通过动词联系,1.I,felt,a lump in my throat,tearing welling up in my eyes.,（情感描写）,我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。,2.He doesnt have an idea of his own.He just,parrots,what other people say.,(,人物描写,),他没有自己的观点，只会鹦鹉学舌。,3.A heavy silence,blanketed,the room.,（环境描写）,整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。,4.The boy,wolfed,down the food.,（动作描写）,小男孩狼吞虎咽。,Part 2：by using the verbs,13,举个栗子,1,找出下面句子里面的修辞,1.My very thought was,like,the ghostly,rustle of dead leaves.,2.He looked,as if,he had just stepped out of my book of fairy tales.,3.Wind and rain now,whipped,（鞭打）,the house.,参考答案：,1.,明喻,2.,明喻,3.,暗喻,举个栗子1找出下面句子里面的修辞参考答案：1.明喻 2.明,14,举个栗子,2,找出下面句子里面的修辞,1.My mother is,like,a coat in winter,offering warmth to me.,2.The wind sounded,like,a roar of a train passing by.,3.Household and medical suplies,streamed in,by plane,train,truck and car.,参考答案：,1.,明喻,2.,明喻,3.,暗喻,举个栗子2找出下面句子里面的修辞参考答案：1.明喻 2.,15,举个栗子,3,找出下面片段里面的修辞,Yesterday,I went to the park.I rode my bicycle through the evergreen trees which were as tall as skyscrapers.The sun shone through clouds,which were floating pieces of cotton candy in the sky.Peple were laughing and enjoying the company of their families and friends.I rode past a giant garden of beautiful pink,yellow and purple flowers:it was a scented carpet of color.The park is li