By,初君静,新高考,I,卷,读后续写,新高考读后续写,第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料,根据其内界和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.,第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料,根据其内界和所给段落开,“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.Ill tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”,“I wish you could see him,”sh,注意：1.续写词数应为150左石：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。,Paragraph1:,When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.,.,Paragraph2:,With everything ready.Bernard started out on his new business.,.,注意：1.续写词数应为150左石：2.请按如下格式在,a small community,families were struggling to make ends meet,to help each other,settings,a small communitysettings,Main development,01,Plot,02,Feelings,what why,who how,Main development01Plot02Feelin,Plot,The Meredith family,Feelings,a family in need,Mrs.Meredith,most kind and thoughtful,a man sick in bed,his wife took care,couldnt go out to work,John,Harry,Clara,John had an idea,Bernard,son,wants to earn money,sell,popcorn,warm-hearted,wants very much=eager,excited,grateful,PlotThe Meredith familyFeeling,Bernard,Mrs.Meredith,Harry,Clara,John,interested her,very much,wish to help him,planted the seed of kindness,love,Main Theme,BernardMrs.MeredithHarry,Cla,Exposition,Para 1,Background,Conflict,Rising Action,Para 3-4,a boy in need,a mother wanted to help,Para 5-8,children wanted to help,Continuation Para 1,Falling Action,Resolution,Climax,Discuss how to help,/an idea formed,Continuation Para 2,ExpositionPara 1ConflictRising,Para 1.When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.,From the given sentences,Para 2.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business,What would Mrs.Meredith say?,What would the children do?,Result,How was the business?,How did Bernard family and the Meredith family feel.,Lesson gained,心理描写,有效对话,动作描写,场景描写,Para 1.When Mrs.Meredith hea,Useful Expressions,Useful Expressions,say,说,tell,告诉,shout,大声叫,add,补充说,continue,继续说,explain,解释说,encourage,鼓励地说,scream,尖叫,whisper,耳语,laugh,笑着说,v,感激,be grateful to,appreciate,adj,兴奋的,excited,thrilled,开心的,happy,joyful,delighted,感激的,grateful,满足的,satisfied/content,抽象名词,兴奋,excitement,thrill,开心,happiness,joy,delight,感恩,gratitude,a mixture of excitement and happiness,心理描写,动作描写,say 说,tell 告诉,shout 大声叫v 感,It turned out that+,调调句型,It turned out it was his wisdom that saved the womans life.,Stepping out not only helped a brother in need,but also gave our kids the sweet taste of helping others.,a truly unforgettable experience,remain fresh in ones memory,The birds sang;the grass was green;the sun was warm;and Hans heart was full of love.,The air was rich with happiness.,As she headed out to the car,she breathed in the pleasant air and admired the crowd.,He was greeted with enthusiasm.,场景描写,Ending,It turned out that+调调句型a trul,When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.,She nodded with a smile and encouraged the children,“Lets get started!”Immediately,Clara volunteered to get the big box of corn and prepared the microwave oven to make popcorn.At the same time,John went to purchase some paper bags and arranged all the stuff in place.Harry ran to Bernards and dragged him to the scene.After hearing the explanation,Bernard was overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude.They could hardly wait.Time went by swiftly,and the children laughed,carrying out their great“project”.Joy filled the yard and everyones heart.,下水作文：,When Mrs.Meredith heard of Jo,With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.,Carrying all the paper bags,he called out,“Popcorn!50 cents for one extra-large pack!”People started to g