单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达专题（三）,-,建议信,How to write a letter for advice,如何算是一篇好文章？,覆盖了所有的要点,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,要点全,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,连接词,写作攻略,1.,建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。,2,建议信有可能是写给,个人,，就其遇到的,某个问题提出自己的看法和观点,；也可能是写给某个,组织和机构,，,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。,3,建议信要写出写信的,原因,，建议的,内容,，提出建议的,理由,，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要,礼貌当先,。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,建议信写作的注意事项,：,a,这类文章一定要符合英语信件的,基本格式,。,b,这类文章的基本时态多用,一般现在时和一般将来,时。,篇章结构及内容：,首段,：,表明写作意图,。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。,主体段落,：,应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告,。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。,结尾段,：,对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。,注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,常用套语,A,建议信开头常用句式,(,照应材料,表明写作意图,),1,After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that,2,I am very glad to hear that you want to,3,I know you have trouble in,after reading your letter,4.I am writing to you for the purpose of-,5.You have asked me for my advice with regard toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.,B.,表达建议（,body,）,1.first,，,firstly,，,secondly,then,，,after that,，,in the end,finally,Meanwhile,whats more,2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could,3.I would like to suggest/recommend that,4.If I were you,I would,5.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.,6.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can,C.,建议信结尾常用句式,1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.,2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions,practical/useful/helpful.,3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.,4.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.,5.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：,参考词汇,:,穿行,thread ones way,天桥,overpass,问题,建议,学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。,政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。,第一步：审题,养成重视审题的习惯。,虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,思考的问题,样题分析,第几人称？（,person,）,文章的题材是什么？,要写的文章主题是什么,(topic),怎样安排信息点的顺序？,(order),动作是什么时候发生的？,(,时态,),(when),第一人称,一封信,建议政府采取措施舒缓交,通拥挤的状况,说理逻辑性,一般现在时,适当运用模板,Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to,(,引出主题,).,Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to,.Then,it also helps to,.Besides,it should be a good idea to,.You can also,.(,此三句,不同,的句式提出建议,),As to,I suggest,(,有时根据需要具体到某一反面,).In addition,(,其他建议,).Im sure,(,预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心,).,Im looking forward to,(,表达愿望,).,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,Dear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _,and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here.,In my humble opinion(,以我拙见,),you would be wise to take the following actions:_.,I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.,Good luck with you.,Yours,XXX,第二步：搜索相关词组或句型,问题,建议,学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。,政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。,学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街,stand next to primary face/be faced with the main street,Theres,a primary school near our school,and,both schools face the main street.,Our school stands next to a primary school,faced with/facing,the main street.,推荐句型：,There be+,并列句,非谓语结构,Standing,next to a primary school,our school is faced with/faces the main street.,润色,小建议,Next to a primary school,将介词短语提前（全倒装）,stands/lies/is,our school,faced with/facing a main street.,可将,stand next to,替换为高级词汇,/,短语,be located next to(near/beside/by),border/adjoin vt.,be adjacent to,与,毗邻,在,对面,be opposite to,The traffic is busy during the rush hours.,高峰期交通繁忙,.,traffic.during the rush hours,During the rush hours,there are so many cars and buses going on the road that,During the rush hours,there is a lot of traffic.,so.that,with,结构,With so many cars and buses going on the road,润色,小建议,“,高峰期”可意译,:,at peak time,，,a large current of cars and people,“,交通繁忙”可译为,:,traffic jam,congestion,交通堵塞,be choke up with,be crammed with,被,堵塞,/,塞满,加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤,sendto,fetch.,非谓语结构,.,Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,which,makes the traffic heavier.,Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,making,the traffic heavier.,which.,加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤,Whats more,pick up.make.,To make things,worse/whats worse,many parents,coming,to pick up their children,make,the street more crowded.,In addition/Additionally,many parents,send,their young children to school and fetch them home,which makes,the traffic heavier.,Whats more,parents often,attend,their kids to school,resulting in,more serious traffic jams.,What makes things worse is that,children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.,making the situation more serious.,making the traffic heavier,可意译为：,so.that.=tooto,The children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home,which,makes/,making,the traffic heavier.,making,可替换为：,causing,leading to,resulting in,“sendfetch”,可替换为短语：,pick up,润色,小建议,学生过街在车辆中穿行危险,thread ones way,，,when doing,It is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.,固定句型,It is+adj.for to do.,Students are,risking,their li