单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,How to write,A Letter of Request,How to writeA Letter of Reques,1,201,1,-,201,6,全国,卷高考作文,年份,写作话题与体裁,具体内容要求,2011,请求辅导中心帮助（,求助信,）,咨询预约,2012,竞争参加夏令营（申请信）,自我推荐,;,参加意图,2013,请求他人接机（,求助信,）,人物描写,2014,询问暑假学习计划（咨询信）,活动信息说明,2015,给美国朋友约稿,（,求助信,）,稿件内容篇幅,2016,请求外教帮忙,（,求助信,）,修改所附材料文字和格式,2011-2016全国卷高考作文年份写作话题与体裁具体内,2,Pre-writing:Task 1,Read,underline and identify the main structures(mostly 3 parts)of the letter.,Pre-writing:Task 1Read,under,3,（课标卷）,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（,Learning Center,）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：,1.,本人简介,2.,求助内容,3.,约定时间,4.,你的联系方式,（,Email:;Phone:12345678),注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.,结束语已为你写好。,（课标卷）假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇,4,Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.Im writing to ask for help.,I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is ok with you.You may email or phone me.Here are my email address and phone number:;12345678.,Thanks,for your kindness in advance.,Look,forward to your reply.,yours,Li hua,自我介绍,写信目的,困难,联系方式,道谢,Dear Sir/Madam,自我介绍写信目的困难联系方式道,5,Common structure of a request letter,1,.Opening:,Introduce yourself,&_,politely.,2.Body:Describe your,_&,_,again.,Try to be,specific,if possible.,3.End:Give _ to the person who will,help you.,ask for help,difficulties,ask for help,thanks,Common structure of a request,6,A.Useful expressions for an opening,：,写信来寻求帮助：,(,用至少两种方式表达,),(a)Im writing _,_.,(b)Im writing,_.,to ask for/,seek,your help,to ask whether you can give me a hand,More expressions:,1.Im writing this letter,with the hope that,you will be kind to,give me a hand,.,2.,I wonder if you could do me a favor,.,3.Sorry to bother you but I really need your help.,Im,in,desperate,need of,your help.,*adj./adv.,persuasive,A.Useful expressions for an o,7,B.Useful expressions for describing the difficulties:,高二学生,，,学习英语有困难,(,用至少两种方式表达,),(a),_,_,(b)_.,(c)_.,As a,Senior two,student,I,have,（,met/encountered,）,some difficulties/trouble in,learning,English.,English,frustrates,me a lot,as I just cant take so many different aspects into my consideration at a time.,Now Im in Senior,2,I,find it extremely hard for me to,learn,English,well.,*reasons,persuasive,B.Useful expressions for descr,8,虽然努力过，人际交往仍有问题,(,用至少两种方式表达,),(a)_,interpersonal relationship is still a headache for me.,(b),_,interpersonal relationship is still an obstacle(,障碍,)for me to overcome.,(c)_,interpersonal relationship is still an obstacle(,障碍,)for me.,Although I have tried many times,Hard as I tried,Ive tried to participate in some activities/share my hobbies with my classmates,but I find,*facts,data,persuasive,虽然努力过，人际交往仍有问题(用至少两种方式表达)Altho,9,C.Useful expressions for feelings,request&appreciation,：,(1)Having failed for so many times,I _.,（描述情绪）,(2),请求帮助，表示谢意（用至少两种方式表达）,_,_,_,feel very depressed/disappointed/frustrated,(c),Thank you in advance.,(a),I would appreciate it if you can share your thoughts with me.,(b),I would be grateful/delighted if you could give me some suggestions.,*politeness,persuasive,C.Useful expressions for feel,10,While-writing:Task 2,Practice writing,While-writing:Task 2Practice,11,（山东卷）,假设你是李华，你的美国朋友,Tom,上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛,(speech contest),，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给,Tom,写一封电子邮件：,a,询问,Tom,的生活和学习情况；,b,谈谈你的困难并请,Tom,帮忙；,c,告诉,Tom,你打算赛后去看他。,注意：,a,词数：,100,左右；,b,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,（山东卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京,12,Dear Tom,Its a month since you studied in Beijing.How are you doing in Beijing?,(,求助,),Im writing to ask for help.,I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer.,(,我要认真准备）,_ _ _.However,（搜集资料困难）,_,_.,Meanwhile,（语言运用困难）,_ _,（求助并感谢）,_,_.I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off.,Hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.,Yours,Lihua,well-prepared,have some trouble in collecting useful materials,I find it hard to use,I would appreciate,I think the chance is of great importance,it if you could offer me a hand,for me.In order to get good performance,I need to be,I still,English properly.,Dear Tom,well-preparedhave,13,Post-writing:Task 3,The draft letter below is written by a student.Find out four sentences that need to be improved,paying attention to their styles and tones.,Post-writing:Task 3The draft l,14,Dear teacher,My name is Li Hua.I wanna you to help me.I have met many difficulties in learning English.First,I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.Besides,the texts are too long for me to recite.Whats more,grammar is also very difficult to learn.Faced with so many difficulties,I have to ask you for some help.You should introduce us some good ways to learn new words so that we can rememb