单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,假如你是李华。你和外教史密斯先生约好周末去他家帮他女儿,Mary,学汉语。但是你需要照顾生病的外公不能赴约。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封电子邮件。,内容包括：,1.,说明情况,2.,表示歉意,3.,另约时间,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右,2.,可适当增加细节使行文连贯。,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,假如你是李华。你和外教史密斯先生约好周末去他家帮他女儿Ma,1,作文基本点自查,数一数要点是否齐全？,-3,个要点,不能遗漏任何一个,2.,数一数字数是否够？,-100,字左右，,尽量多写一点（应该写到接近给出格子的末尾）,3.,看一看分段是否合理。,（,2-4,段，不能分段过多，也不能没有分段）,4.,看一看书写是否,工整,，卷面是否,整洁,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,作文基本点自查数一数要点是否齐全？高考英语应用文练习之,2,1.,我很抱歉,Im terribly sorry that+,从句,2.,帮助某人做某事,help sb with sth help sb do/to do sth,3.,回家,;,去某人的家,go home go to sbs home,5.,某人病了,sb be ill,6.,照顾某人,take care of/look after sb,回忆基本词组句型,句子练习,:,我很抱歉这个周末不能去你家帮,Mary,学习英语了。（道歉）,句子练习,:,我外公病了，我得照顾他。（说明情况）,Im terribly sorry that I cant go to your home to help Mary,with her Chinese,this weekend.,My grandfather is ill and Ill have to look after him.,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,1.我很抱歉回忆基本词组句型句子练习:我很抱歉这个周末不,3,如何约时间、地点等,1.How about doing?,2.Will it be convenient for you if+,句子,3.Can I suggest/advise that+,句子,我们推迟到下周日怎么样？（另约时间）,(put it off until next Sunday),How about putting,it off until next Sunday?,Will it be convenient for you if we,put it off,until next Sunday?,Can I suggest that,we put it off until next Sunday.,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,如何约时间、地点等1.How about doing?高考,4,请原谅我不能去。,(,信最后再次道歉,),Please forgive me for,my not being able to,come.,期待你的回复。,Im looking forward to your reply.,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,请原谅我不能去。(信最后再次道歉)高考英语应用文练习之 道歉,5,Dear Mr.Smith,Im terribly sorry that,I cant go to your home to help Mary with her Chinese this weekend,because,my grandfather is ill and Ill have to look after him.,（说明情况，表示歉意）,Can I suggest that,we put it off until next Sunday?,（另约时间）,Please forgive me for,my not being able to come.,（再次表达歉意）,Im looking forward to your reply.,按要点逐个翻译（,60,字）,如何合理扩展？,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,Dear Mr.Smith,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课,6,Dear Mr.Smith,Im terribly sorry that I cant go to your home to,help Mary with her Chinese this weekend,because,my grandfather is seriously ill and,he is too old to take,care of himself.Besides,my parents happen not to be at,home.So I have to stay at home to look after him.,.,（说明情况，表示歉意）,Will it be convenient for you if we put it off,until next Sunday?,（另约时间）,By the way,please tell Mary to revise what we have learnt and finish the homework I gave to her.,（,适当增加细节）,Please forgive me for my not being able to come.Im looking forward to your reply.,（再次表达歉意）,My grandfather has a bad cold.He suffers from a fever,and a headache,which has a bad effect on his daily life,so I have to take care of him.(,楚倩倩,;,曹秀婷）,My grandfather is seriously ill because he doesnt,eat fresh fruit and vegetables.So I suggest you have,a balanced diet and go to bed early and get up early.,Only in this way,can you keep healthy.,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,Dear Mr.Smith,My grandfather,7,拓展原则：,与话题要点相关，不能偏题,适当拓展，不能过多,避免同样的意思反复重复,逼生就熟，选自己熟悉的句子词组等。,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,拓展原则：与话题要点相关，不能偏题高考英语应用文练习之 道,8,道歉信；,一、开头:,1.I am terribly sorry that Im unable to attend your birthday party.,2.I,m writing to express my apology to you for not keeping my appointment.,二、段中:The reason why I failed to show up was that I had something urgent to deal with.,三、段尾:,Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,道歉信；高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共14张）高考英语,9,范文一、假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：,1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。,注意：1.词数80字左右；2.可适当增加细节。,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,范文一、假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友,10,DearTom,Imterriblysorry thatIcantgoonatriptoBeijingwithyounextweekend,whichIhavepromisedyou.Imwritingtotellyouthereasonforit.Justnow,mycousin,LiMing,whowentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthenextSaturdaymorning.Heaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisparents.Asyouknow,wehaventseeneachotherfor aboutayear,soIllhavetohelphiminthefirstplace.,Ireallyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandme.I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.Wish you have a good time this weekend.,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,DearTom,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共14,11,范文二、假如你是李华。你和外教史密斯先生约好周末去他家帮他女儿Mary 学汉语。但是你需要照顾生病的外公不能赴约。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封电子邮件。,内容包括：,1.说明情况 2.表示歉意 3.另约时间,注意：1.词数100左右,1.可适当增加细节使行文连贯。,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件（共,14,张）,范文二、假如你是李华。你和外教史密斯先生约好周末去他家帮他,12,Dear Mr.Smith,Im terribly sorry that I cant go to your home to help Mary with her Chinese this weekend,because my grandfather is seriously ill and he is too old to take care of himself.Besides,my parents happen not to be at home.So I have to stay at home to look after him.（说明情况，表示歉意）,Will it be convenient for you if we put it off until next Sunday?（另约时间）By the way,please tell Mary to revise what we have lea