单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Love animals,love the world.,_,A writing class,1,Hangzhou Zoo,地址,:,杭州虎跑路,西湖,之南,(to the south of),建园时间,:1958,年,1.,有种类,170,多种,如老虎,狮子,熊猫等,2.,有很多花草树木,因此非常漂亮,.,3.,附近有许多宾馆,可以住宿,离西湖很近,4.,有许多公交车直达,交通便利,.,Its,on Hupao Road.,It,is,to the south of the West Lake.,.,It,was built,in 1958,.,There are,more than 170 kinds of animals,such,as,tigers,lions,pandas and so on.,There are,many flowers and trees.,It,is,very beautiful.,There are,many hotels,nearby,to,live,in,.They are near the West Lake.,It is very convenient to,get there.A lot of buses go there.,2,1.,覆盖了所有信息点,.,2.,注重文章的开头与结尾，做到开头“开门见山”,收尾,“干净利落”。,3.,注意文章信息的自然过渡,以提升文章的文采，增强,文章的可读性。可适当使用一些连词或过渡词。如：,and,so,then,but,whats more,of course,by the way,on the other hand,as you know,in addition,as for.,等。,4.,避免同种句型连续多次使用，可采用变通的方法，,用不同的句式表达同一 种意思。,如何算是一篇好文章,3,It is,on Hupao Road.,It is,to the north of the West Lake.It was built in 1958.,There are,170 kinds of animals,such as tigers,lions,pandas and so on.,There are,many flowes and trees.It is very beautiful.,There,are,many hotels nearby to live in.They are near the West Lake.,It is,very convenient to get there.A lot of buses go there.,Id like to tell you something about,Hangzhou Zoo,.,It,lies,on Hupao Road,and,is,to the south of the West Lake.,As,a modern zoo,it was built in 1958.,Now,there are more than 170 kinds of animals,such,as,tigers,lions,pandas and so on.,Trees and flowers are all around there,so,it is very beautiful.,If,you want to stay in hangzhou for some days,the hotels nearby are,your best choice,which,are not far from the West Lake.,Whats more,a lot of buses go there,you can take any of them.It is very convenient,.,Anyone who comes here will have a good time!,4,_Hangzhou.,It _ on Hupao Road,_ is to the south of the West Lake.As_,it was built in 1958._ there are more than 170 kinds of animals,such as tigers,lions,pandas and so on.Trees and flowers are_._it is very beautiful.If you want to stay in Hangzhou for some days,the hotels nearby on Nanshan Road are _,_ are not far from the West Lake._ ,a lot of buses go there,you can take any of them.It is very convenient._.,Id like to tell you something about,lies,and,a modern zoo,Now,all around there,So,your best choice,which,Whats more,Anyone who comes here will have,a good time,5,1.,禁止投食,2.,不要离凶猛动物太近,3.,禁止,恐吓,动物,(,frighten,),4.,保持环境清洁,不乱扔垃圾,(v.),A Rule,6,假如你是杭州动物园维护队的一名志愿者，请你为动物园用英语写一个维护规则,7,1.,禁止投食,2.,不要离凶猛动物太近,3.,禁止,恐吓,动物,(,frighten,),4.,保持环境清洁,不乱扔垃圾,1.Dont,feed the animals.,2.Stay away from,those aggressive animals,3.You,are not supposed to,frighten,the animals.,4.Dont,throw litter about.,Keep,the environment clean.,(v.),A Rule,8,今天，你陪一位来自美国的笔友汤姆参观杭州动物园，请你用英语向他解释这个木牌上的内容，开头已给出,并适当增加解释,Tom,It is just a rule of the zoo.It says,1.,Dont,feed the animals.,2,.Stay away from,those aggressive animals.,3.You,are not supposed to,frighten,the animals.4.,Dont,throw litter about.,Keep,the environment clean.,9,Tom,It is just a rule of the zoo.It says that,you shouldnt,feed the animals,that is because,some food might be bad for them.,And,keep away from those aggressive animals,for,they may attack you.It is too dangerous.,Also,you are not supposed to frighten them,even if,they sometimes are not friendly to you.,Whats more,dont throw the litter about.,It is our duty to,keep the environment clean.,10,审题要“,三审,”,1.,审,话题信息,切忌粗枝大叶,东遗西漏,.,2.,审,话题范围,准确把握出题者用意,搞清写作重点,.,3.,审,文体形式,.,11,Lets watch a short video.,12,Becoming endangered,cut down,environment pollution(water,air),kill,Why are more and more animals becoming endangered?,13,Writing:,Writing:,假设你是学校动物保护协会的成员，请你以,What should we do to protect the wild animals?,为话题，根据中文提示叙述动物濒临灭绝的原因并阐述保护措施，用英语写一份发言稿：,原因,your steps,（措施）,滥砍树木,1.-,猎杀，贩卖毛皮赚钱,2.-,污染问题,3.-,注意：开头和结尾部分已写好,可,适当增加谈论话题时常用的话语,，使所写内容连贯,所写内容必须包括上面表格中观点和你自己的,至少三个,观点,词数：,个左右,14,Hello,everyone!Animals are our best friends,but these years more and more animals become,endangered.What caused this problem?,In my opinion,firstly,I think cutting down the trees by the farmers is one of the reasons.,As a result,animals can no longer hide or have no place to live in,.,Also,many animals are killed by people,who want to sell their furs for money.,Besides,some pollution like water and air pollution,has made the situations more serious.,So,we human beings should try our best to protect them.I think,the best way to take good care of them is,building more wildlife zoos.,And,the government should pass more laws to punish the people,who hunt the wildlife or cut down too many trees without permission.,Finally,keeping the environment clean,is also,a quite effective way to protect the wildlife,Thank you for listening!,Thank you for listening!,15,临考如何提高写作能力,适当加强阅读量,读得越多，在潜移默化中，你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快,背诵经典文段,在平时阅读训练及范例作文中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵，不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地道,加强练习,加强实际写作练习至关重要写完后与范文进行对比我们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重语法错误等,16,