,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,First Snow,Jonathan Nicholas,First SnowJonathan Nicholas,1,2nd para:,1st para:,3rd-4th paras:,He woke up.,The sense of snow woke him up.,Together,they went downstairs.,(4th para),Transition:,from home to street,2nd para:1st para:3rd-4th para,2,5th para:,6th para:,7th para:,from street to neighborhood,lamplight,+,traffic light,(snowfall),Transition:,from midnight to dawn,flakes,light,5th para:6th para:7th para:fro,3,8th 11th paras:,12th para:,(7th para:the new day ripple across the neighborhood),Detailed description of neighborhood,13th para:,conclusion,升华,(sublimation),Transition,from neighborhood to home,8th 11th paras:12th para:(7t,4,(1-2),The s_ of snow woke him up.,(3-4),They walked d_.,5,The l_ in the snow.,6,The close-up of the f_.,7,It is d_ now.,(8-12),About the n_.,13,C_./S_.,ense,ownstairs,ight,lakes,awn,eighborhood,onclusion,ublimation,(1-2)The s_ of snow woke hi,5,The whole text is organized:,1.,In _ order:,midnight,dawn,early morning,2.,In _ order:,house,(from _ to _),(internal),street,(external),(from _ to _to,_),house,(his feelings),(inner center),(heart),temporal,spatial,upstairs,downstairs,light,flakes,neighborhood,3.?,The whole text is organized:1,6,9th paragraph:,Glimpsed through undraped windows as they darted from room to room,the,slim,figures of the children seemed,to grow ever fatter,until,finally,the kitchen door flew open and out burst,three awesomely bundled objects,that set instantly to rolling in the snow.,?,9th paragraph:Glimpsed through,7,“The memory would stay,cold and hard,fresh in his thoughts,long after the snowman melted.”,13th paragraph:,cold and hard,?,“The memory would stay,cold a,8,metaphor,比喻,7th para:,Then,as he tiptoed from the bedroom,she lifted her head,opened her eyes and,-daily dose of magic-,smiled up at her dad.,Within an hour,a white tablecloth,was spread upon the lawn.,3rd para:,metaphor比喻7th para:,9,When we talk about snow:,The flakes were falling _ and _ now,_ past the window,a _ of mystery.Occasionally,one would _ the glass,as if r_ to tumble to its fate.Then,slowly,s_ and s_ down the glass,it would_,its beauty fleeting.Gone.,thick,hard,pouring,waterfall,stick to,eluctant,lipping,liding,melt,6th paragraph:,Personification(拟人),metaphor,When we talk about snow:The f,10,The,f,lakes were,f,alling thick and hard now,p,ouring,p,ast the,w,indow,a,w,aterfall of mystery.,alliteration,Fortune favors fool.,头韵,憨有憨福。,(6th para),The flakes were falling thick,11,A television flickered.,8th para:,A porch light came on.,A car door slammed.,Parallelism,parallel phrases (排比),rhythmical beauty,11th para:,They rolled in it,they tasted it,they packed it and tossed it at one another.,A television flickered.8th pa,12,Words we have learned:,When we look at sth:,But as he _ from beneath the covers,his _ was drawn not to the cradle but to the window.(1,st,),peeked,gaze,When we talk about babies:,His gaze was drawn not to _ but to the window.(1,st,),the cradle,2)Reaching down,he gently lifted the warm _ to his shoulder.(3,rd,),bundle,(1-3)paragraphs:,(end rhyme),Words we have learned:When we,13,When we talk about light:,The light from the street lamp on the corner _ down through the birch trees,_ a glow as green as a summer memory upon the winter-brown back yard.From the distance _ the endless echo of the stoplight,_ its ruby message,_ like a dawn that would not come.,filtered,casting,flashing,teasing,5th para:,came,When we talk about light:The,14,When we talk about light:,2)Gray streaks of dawn _ along the black seam of the distant hills.,3)A television _.,flickered,(7-8)paragraphs:,The candle flickered in the wind.,A dazzling streak lit up the sky.,(lightening),unraveled,When we talk about light:2)Gr,15,When we talk about walking silently and gently:,It was then that he realized what had _ through the shield of his slumbers.(2,nd,),sneaked,2)Quietly,so as not to disturb the childs mother,he rose from the bed and _ toward the cradle.(3,rd,),inched,3)Then,as he _ from the bedroom,she lifted her head.(3,rd,),tiptoed,2nd-3rd para:,When we talk about walking sil,16,12th paragraph:,the neighborhood was fully awake.A car,whined,(哀号)in protest,but,skidded,(打滑)staunchly out of its driveway.Buses,ground,(吱嘎地摩擦)forward like Marines,determined to,take,the hill.And all the while,the baby sat secure and warm in his arms.,Personification(拟人),12th paragraph:the neighborh,17,6th para:,Occasionally,one would,stick to,the glass,as if,reluctant,to tumble to its,fate,.,5th para:,From the distance came the endless echo of the stoplight,flashing its ruby message,teasing,like a dawn that would not come.,6th para:Occasionally,one wou,18,How beautiful it was,falling so silently all day long,all night long,on the mountains,on the meadows,on the roofs of the living,on the graves of the dead!,HenryWadsworthLongfellow,How beautiful it was,falling,19,