单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2021/3/7,#,之真题解读写作步骤,山东读后续写读写模式探索,之真题解读写作步骤山东读后续写读写模式探索,1,目录,Contents,续写构思,积累素材、美化词句,真题再现,1,2,4,成品欣赏,5,课件导读,解析文本、明确主题,3,3,目录Contents续写构思积累素材、美化词句真题再现124,2,一、真题再现,：,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,山东,第二节（满分,25,分）,阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。,一、真题再现：2020年7月新高考全国卷1 山东,3,The Meredith family lived in a small community,As,the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to,make ends meet,.,People were trying to help each other meet the challenges,.,Mrs.Meredith,was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.,One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was,Bernard,-had interested her very much.,“,I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara,.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”,After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to,earn some money,.”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”,“So do 1,”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”,For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have,a great idea,!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish,（完成）,.”,The other children also jumped up all attention.When,John,had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.“I tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us,？,Well,we can make popcorn,（爆米花）,and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can,take it around to the houses and sell it,.”,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,The Meredith family lived i,4,注意：,1.,续写词数应为,150,左右：,2.,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。,When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.,With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,注意：2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文课件2020年,5,-,About Mrs Meredith,1.,篇章结构,二、解析文本、明确主题,_,background,About,_,Talking about,_,The children are considering,_,Mrs Meredith,Bernards family,how to help Bernard,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,-About Mrs Meredith 1,二,.,解析文本、明确主题,The Meredith family lived in a small community,As,the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to,make ends meet,.,People were trying to help each other meet the challenges,.,Main idea of part 1:background of the story:,The economy was _ and people were _,bad,suffering,2.,段落大意,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,二.解析文本、明确主题 The Meredith fami,7,Mrs.Meredith was a most,kind and thoughtful,woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of,help,.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.,Main idea of part 2:about Mrs Meredith:,Mrs Meredith was _ and _ people in need.,kind,helping,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,Mrs.Meredith was a most ki,8,One morning she told her children about,a family she had visited,the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was,Bernard,-had interested her very much.,“,I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”,Main idea of part 3:talking about Bernards family:,Mrs Meredith _ her children about Bernard and his family.,told,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,One morning she told her chi,9,After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“,I wish we could help him,to earn some money.”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”,“So do 1,”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”,For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he,sprang to his feet,and cried,“I have,a great idea,!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish,（完成）,.”,The other children also,jumped up all attention,.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.“I tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us,？,Well,we can,make popcorn,（爆米花）,and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”,Main idea of part 4:considering how to help Bernard:,The children were ready to help and John _.,found a solution,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,2020,年,7,月新高考全国卷,1,读后续写作文课件,After their mother left the,10,二,.,解析文本、明确主题,3.,线索整理,Plot,明线,Feelings,暗线,what,why,One morning in the room,the children were thinking about how to help