点击添加标题文本,Lu Man,M2U3 ComputerWRITING,Lu ManM2U3 ComputerWRITING,Knowledge Objective:get familiar with the basic requirements,1,Skill Objective:master the technique of writing,2,Teaching,Objectives,Moral Objective,：,cooperation,3,Knowledge Objective:get famil,内容要求,卷面要求,A,B,字数达到要求，,100120,词之间,语法、标点、拼写、格式正确,文章内容切题，,清楚连贯地,传递,信息，,表达,思想。,写作基本要求,卷面整洁，字迹清楚,内容要求卷面要求AB字数达到要求，100120词之间写作基,评卷人的弱点,评卷人的兴奋点,A,B,耐心，同情心，追求完美,高级词汇，高级句型（前提：正确运用！）,知己知彼,评卷人,评卷人的弱点评卷人的兴奋点AB耐心，同情心，追求完美高级词汇,一比吓一跳！,一比吓一跳！,高分佳作,审题,罗列要点,草拟提纲,拓词成句,确定体裁、题材,确定人称、时态,要点要齐全,要点要分清主次,要点排列要符合逻辑,选用适当的词汇,选用适当的句型,选用适当的过渡,佳作四步走,修改誊写,十年磨剑无人问,一朝夺冠天下知,论练字的重要性,高分佳作审题罗列要点拓词成句确定体裁、题材要点要齐全选用适当,高分作文,高级词汇,多样的句型,恰当的过渡词句,词汇的正确运用可以反映出考生的词汇知识储备,句型的选用和正确地运用可以很好地反映出考生的英语语法素养,恰当的过渡词句能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,黄金句是如何炼成的？,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),高分作文高级词汇多样的句型恰当的过渡词句词汇的正确运用可以反,Part One,高级词汇,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),Part One高级词汇人教版英语必修二Unit3（作文）,词汇进阶挑战,Task two:find out the words with the same meaning as,clever,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),词汇进阶挑战Task two:find out the w,Example,clever,smart,wise,intelligent,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),Examplecleversmartwiseintellig,Step 1,Step 2,Step 3,以班级为单位，完成期末终极展示,比一比,Your newspaper has,the following advantages,.,Your newspaper,enjoys high popularity,for a series of advantages.,In my opinion,the advantages of your newspaper,have an edge over others,in the following aspects.,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),Step 1Step 2Step 3以班级为单位，完成期末终,Part Two,高级句型,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),Part Two高级句型人教版英语必修二Unit3（作文）,直接表象,村里有个姑娘叫小芳,长得美丽又大方,你真美！,倾国倾城,闭月羞花,沉鱼落雁,表达美的不同句型,具体化,夸张手法,引用,回眸一笑百媚生,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),直接表象村里有个姑娘叫小芳你真美！倾国倾城表达美的不同句型具,简单句,表递进,表转折,表选择,5,种简单句型,名词性从句,定语从句,状语从句,至尊无敌句型宝典,并列句,主从复合句,？,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),简单句表递进5种简单句型名词性从句至尊无敌句型宝典并列句主从,初级句型,改写句型实战演练,中级句型,I am your loyal reader.I like your newspaper very much.,I am,one of the loyal readers【,who like your newspaper very much,】,.,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),初级句型改写句型实战演练中级句型I am your loya,句型整合终极“大招”,高级词汇,+,高级句型,Being,a loyal reader of your newspaper,for as long as 4 years,I,have benefited,a lot from it,【,to which,I,owe,my success in English,】,.,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),句型整合终极“大招”高级词汇+高级句型Being a lo,初级句型,强调句,中级句型,Your articles help me a lot.,It is,your articles,that,help me a lot.,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),初级句型 强调句中级句型Your articles h,句型整合终极“大招”,过去分词作状语,Influenced,by your articles,I have improved a lot in English.,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),句型整合终极“大招”过去分词作状语Influenced,step 1:Analyze,假设你是高中生李华，你的,朋友,Tom,给你写信，告知你他,最近沉迷于网络游戏,，严重影响了学习成绩。你作为他的好朋友，请给他写一封回信，,劝说他远离网络游戏,。,注意：字数在,100120,词之间,文中不得出现真实的人名和地名,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),step 1:Analyze 假设你是高中生李,Step 2:Outline,第,一,段,以朋友的身份问候对方,（书信万能句型）,简述对方的问题或现状,表示自己的担心,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),Step 2:Outline第以朋友的身份问候对方简述对方,Step 3:Rewrite,1.I am so glad to,receive your letter,.,2.I know that you like playing the computer games very much and it affects your studies.,3.I am worried about you.I want to give you some advice.,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),Step 3:Rewrite1.I am so glad,GROUP ACTIVITY,Work in groups and accomplish this process.,There are totally four tasks for each group:,Be in charge of timing,（计时员）,Be in charge of the words,（高级词汇）,Be in charge of the sentence structure(,高级句型）,Be in charge of the presentation,（展示）,人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),人教版英语必修二,Unit3,（作文）课件,(,共,26,张,PPT),GROUP ACTIVITY Work in groups,Step 3:rewrite,Eg.2:I,learn from your letter,that you are,so,addicted to the computer games,that,it has made you falling behind others.,Eg.1,：,I am so happy to,hear from you.How is going recently,?,Step 3:rewriteEg.2:I learn fr,Step 3:rewrite,Eg.3:As your best friend,I am,extremely,worried about you.,As a result,I,have the responsibility,to offer you some advice.,Step 3:rewriteEg.3:As your b,Homework,Write this composition after class,try to use as many useful structures as possible.,Memorize the best passage during the presentation.,HomeworkWrite this composition,搜集整理,乌海十中 路曼,搜集整理乌海十中 路曼,