,返回目录,话题,1,人物介绍,返回目录,话题,1,人物介绍,*,*,话题,1,人物介绍,命题探索,教材链接,三阶攻关,目录,写作练兵,写作技巧,1,巧用并列连词,话题1 人物介绍命题探索教材链接三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作技,分析杭州近10年中考真题可知，关于“人物介绍”这一话题在2019年考查介绍外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好，设题背景为介绍自己弟弟的长相、性格和兴趣。结合全国近年中考真题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：介绍个人优势或特殊之处、个人梦想及如何实现、介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感恩之情。,命题探索,分析杭州近10年中考真题可知，关于“人物介绍”这一话,教材链接,教材链接,杭州作文题目近几年一直考查邮件形式。要求考生阅读邮件后写一封回信或者写一封邮件。整体分题干、提示两部分；审题技巧如下：,从题干可以审出文体和主题；从提示可以审出写作要点、时态和人称。,审题技巧,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,杭州作文题目近几年一直考查邮件形式。要求考生阅读邮件后写一封,典例剖析,(2019杭州)假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,典例剖析(2019杭州)假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Li,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,一二,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,一二,1.My sister has a round face.She has bright eyes and a small,mouth.(用with升格),My sister has a round face with bright eyes and a small mouth.,2.He used to be thin.He is big and strong now.(用感叹句升格),He used to be thin,but look how big and strong he is now!,1,角度,介绍外貌特征,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,句 子 升 格 范 例,1.My sister has a round face.,句 子 升 格,1.She is tall and beautiful.She has long curly hair.(用with升格),_,2.He is very handsome.He has beautiful blue eyes.(用and升格),_,3.He isnt tall or short.(用be of medium height升格),_,She is tall and beautiful with long curly hair.,He is very handsome and has beautiful blue eyes.,Hes of medium height.,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,句 子 升 格 1.She is tall an,3.Im shy.,Im shy so its not easy for me to make friends.,八(上)Unit 3 P21,4.Paula used to be really quiet.,Paula used to be really quiet.She was always silent,in class.,九(全)Unit 4 P26,2,角度,介绍性格特点,句 子 扩 写 范 例,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,3.Im shy.2角度介绍性格特点句 子 扩 写 范,5.Now Li Wen has really changed.,Now Li Wen has really changed.He has become more,outgoing and made some good friends in school.,九(全)Unit 4 P30,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,5.Now Li Wen has really chang,4.My friend Lily is kind.(扩写具体表现),_,5.Jack used to be shy.(扩写原因),_,_,My friend Lily is really kind and she often helps others.,Jack used to be shy because his face always turned red when he talked to girls.,句 子 扩 写,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,4.My friend Lily is kind.(扩写具,6.He is hardworking.(扩写结果),_,7.Kate is a friendly girl.(扩写具体表现),_,_,8.Suzy is wellorganized.(扩写具体表现),_,He is hardworking so he always gets good grades in exams.,Kate is a friendly girl.She always has a smile on her face and looks happy.,Suzy is wellorganized.She keeps all her things in good order.,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,6.Mary likes music.,Mary likes music.She can sing and dance.,七(下)Unit 1 P5,7.I like to watch different kinds of movies.,I like to watch different kinds of movies depending on how I,feel that day.,3,角度,介绍兴趣爱好,句 子 扩 写 范 例,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,6.Mary likes music.3角度介绍兴趣爱好句,8.I love fruit.,I love fruit.I think its healthy.,9.My favorite subject is science.,My favorite subject is science,because its interesting.,10.I often exercise at the park.,I often exercise at the park because I love the clean,air and sunshine.,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,8.I love fruit.一三二,9.Jack prefers music.(扩写具体表现),_10.I enjoy sweet food.(扩写具体表现),_,11.Paul enjoys doing sports.(扩写具体表现),_,_,Jack prefers music that he can dance to.,句 子 扩 写,I enjoy sweet food so much that I eat lots of icecream in summer.,Paul enjoys doing sports and he plays basketball with many,other boys on weekends.,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,9.Jack prefers music.(扩写具体表现,12.Mandy often does some reading in her spare time.(扩写原因),_,_,13.Rick likes playing football in his free time.(扩写原因),_,14.I prefer coffee to milk.(扩写具体表现),_,Mandy often does some reading in her spare time because its a,good way for her to open up her mind.,Rick likes playing football in his free time because it can make,him healthy.,I prefer coffee to milk.And I drink a cup of coffee in the morning,every day.,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,12.Mandy often does some read,11.He,is able to,work independently and manages his,class well.,12.She is,so,knowledgeable,that,she can tell us thousands,of events happened in the past.,4,角度,介绍个人优势或特殊之处,好 句 记 背,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,11.He is able to work indepen,13.I will try my best to finish it,no matter how,difficult the problem is.,14.,What a great person he is,!I can learn a lot from him.,15.My teacher is,too,energetic,to,feel tired.,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,13.I will try my best to fini,15.他能够在短时间里解决掉学生们反映的问题。,_,16.她工作如此努力以至于常常回家很晚。,_,He can/is able to solve problems that students reflect in a short time.,She is so hardworking that she often goes home late.,句 子 仿 写,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,15.他能够在短时间里解决掉学生们反映的问题。He can,17.不论何时我想放弃，他都能帮助我渡过难关。,_,18.他可以把课堂变成一个家庭！多么有趣而生动！,_,He can/is able to make his class a family.How interesting and lively!,He can/is able to help me out of trouble no matter when I want to give up.,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,17.不论何时我想放弃，他都能帮助我渡过难关。He can,练语段,He is very _(外貌1).He has _ _,_,_ (外貌2).He usually wea