,读后续写,Journey down the Mekong,读后续写Journey down the Mekong,Lead-in,Lead-in,first person,(,I,we,),second person,(,you,),third person,(,he,she,they),Reading for features,Style,(,体裁,),Person,(,人称,),Tense,(,时态,),Narration,exposition,(说明文),narration,(记叙文),argumentation,(议论文),First person,Past tense,past tense,simple present tense,future tense,first person(I,we)Reading fo,_ _(quarrel)and fought with each other a lot during our journey.,We quarreled,Narration,First person,Past tense,_ _(quarrel)and,With cooperation,_finally _(make)a fire,which made us excited.,we/I,made,Narration,First person,Past tense,With cooperation,_final,5W1H,a,fter graduation,planned to travel,Wang Kun,&Wang Wei,down the Mekong,who,w,here,how,what,when,why,by bike,dream,Reading for the main idea,5W1Hafter graduationplanned to,Which picture shows Kuns personality?How about Weis?,stubborn,determined,easygoing,Reading for personalities,Which picture shows Kuns pers,When are we leaving?When are we coming back?,OK,,,I give in.,When are we leaving?When are,A,B,attractive,boring,Which kind of,plot,(情节),is better?,Discussing,ABattractiveboringWhich kind o,positive,(积极的),negative,(消极的),Which kind of,ending,do,you,perfer?,We looked at each other,smiling.,We were both angry and decided to travel separately.,Discussing,positive(积极的)negative(消极的)Whic,One night during the trip,we were putting up our tent on the mountain when it began to snow.,who,what,why,where,when,how,?,Discussing,One night during the trip,we,Starter,Turn(,转折,)(trouble),Climax(,高潮)(,solution,),Ending,Wang Wei,calm down,village,fire,no longer,Discussing in groups,One night during the trip,we were putting up our tent on the mountain when it began to snow.,StarterTurn(转折)(trouble)Clima,Well connected,Logical,Well organized,Tips,Well connectedLogicalWell orga,Write by yourself.,1.About 70 words.,2.At least 3 key words.Underline them.,3.The beginning has been given.,One night during the trip,we were putting up our tent when it began to snow.,Wang Wei,calm down,village,fire,no longer,Writing,Write by yourself.One night du,Finish and polish your passage.,评分标准:,第五档(,21-25,分),1.,与所给短文,融洽度高,,与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理;,2.,内容丰富,应用了,5,个以上短文中标出的,关键词语,;,3.,所使用,语法,结构和,词汇,丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达;,4.,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文,结构紧凑,。,Homework,Finish and polish your passage,Practice makes perfect!,Inspiration,Practice makes perfect!Inspira,Thank,you!,Thank you!,