单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,English writing,初三英语写作专题复习课,English writing 初三英语写作专题复习课,1,如何写好一篇中考英语作文？,中考真题,三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，请写一篇短文，介绍一下你的校园生活。题目自拟。,要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；,2.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；,3.词数：80词左右。,如何写好一篇中考英语作文？中考真题,2,Step One,审 题,1.确定,内容,-具体并有内容可写,Step One 审 题,3,What do you think of your school life?,My school life is _.,busy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantastic,boring/terrible/so-so,What things can,we talk about?,activities,subjects,classmates,teachers,exams,friends,school trips,hobbies,What do you think of your scho,4,审 题,：,2.确定,人称,-参考写作内容,审 题：,5,My best friend,第二人称：He/She,My best friend第二人称：He/She,6,审 题,：,3.确定,时态,审 题：,7,My best friend,一般现在时态；,一般过去时态。,My best friend一般现在时态；,8,Step Two,细化要点,-具体从那几个方面来写,Step Two细化要点,9,My best friend,1.外表（appearance）,2.性格（personality）,3.爱好（hobbies）,My best friend 1.外表（appearance,10,Step Three,扩充要点,Try to enrich(丰富)your sentence.,Step Three扩充要点,11,How to enrich(丰富)your sentences?,likes playing sports,healthy,healthy,1.My friend Li Hua,is a boy.,He is a _ boy.,He is a _ boy,who,_.,do sports,make friends,go to parties,strong tall,outgoing,energetic friendly,How to enrich(丰富)your sentenc,12,2.He,like,s,music.,He,like,s,_,_,that,_.,dance,music,can make,him,excited,pop music,movies,books,sports,.,happy,relaxed,knowledgeable,healthy,.,2.He likes music.He likes_,13,目的,原因,3.,She always_,to,_,because,_.,relax,listens to some music,music is fantastic,r,elaxing,interesting,exciting,f,ascinatin,g,do sports,read books,dance,go to,parties,learn something,keep healthy,have fun,make friends,目的原因3.She always_,14,He,is,going to have a trip to Cuihua Mountain with,his,friend.,He,will do some studies to improve,his,math because,He is,a little weak in it.It is necessary for,him,to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.,A,How glad,he is,!,He,can do many things of,his,own.,He is,going to have a trip to Cuihua Mountain with,his,friend.,He,will also do some studies to improve his math because,he is,a little weak in it.Of course it is necessary for,him,to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.,Isnt,his,plan nice?,B,beginning,key sentence,linking words,连词,ending,He is going to have a trip to,15,My hobbies,(Beginning):,I have many hobbies.,(Key sentence A):,I like reading books,.,_,.,(Key sentence B):,_.,I like all kinds of music.I often listen to the music programs on radio.Although I cant sing English songs well,I like them a lot.,(Ending),_,.,Can you add a beginning,two other key sentences,some linking words and an ending?,Practice:,16,My hobbies,(Beginning):,I have many hobbies.,(Key sentence A):,I like reading books,.,I often read in my free time.I read many kinds of books.And I like the stories that have good endings.,(Key sentence B):,I am also a lover of music.,I like all kinds of music.I often listen to the music programs on radio.Although I cant sing English songs well,I like them a lot.,(Ending),I,n short,I enjoy my life in school,17,Step Four:Make an outline(提纲),Title:,_,Beginning:,Key sentence B:,Key sentence A:,Ending:,Main part,(,正文,):,to,to,general,总,specific,分,specific,分,general,总,Step Four:Make an outline(提纲,18,Make an outline for the following composition:,三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自拟,(80,词左右,),Title:_,Beginning:,Key sentence B:,Key sentence A:,Ending:,Main part,(,正文,):,Make an outline for the follow,19,Step Five,根据提纲，写出文章，注意使用,好词好句和连接词。,Step Five 根据提纲，写出文章，注意使用好词好句和,20,评价,:,请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文,。,A(13-15,分,):,包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚,B(11-12,分,):,基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚,C(8-10,分,):,内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意,D(6-7,分,):,要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达,E(3-5 ):,只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云,F(0-2,分,):,白卷或文不对题,作者：,_,得分：,_,评价人,:_,评价:请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。,21,Sum up,How to improve your writing,Tips:,1.,审题，确定人称，时态，内容；,2.细化要点，列出提纲；,3.使用好词好句，丰富文章。,4.先打草稿，后抄写到答题纸上。,Sum upHow to improve your writ,22,Homework:,我市英语教学网开设了,“,中学生论坛,”,，请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以,A good teacher in my eyes,为题写一篇,80,词左右的短文。,(You should make an outline first),Homework:我市英语教学网开设了“中学生论坛”,23,Goodbye and good luck!,Goodbye and good luck!,24,