,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,#,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,第三次专四模拟考试写作试题,Writing (45 MIN),Section A Composition 35 MIN,It wag recently reported in a newspaper that many college student were eager to go after brand products and were unable to make ends meet.What is your opinion about this phenomenon?,Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:,The Importance of Rational Consumption,You are to write in three Parts.,In the first part,state specifically what your opinion is.,In the second part,provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.,In the last part,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make summary.,Marks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.,第三次专四模拟考试写作试题,1,The Importance of Rational Consumption,The latest report drew our attention to a new type of shopaholic“,购物狂”,the college students.Many college students are enthusiastic shoppers.Whats worse,they are crazy about brand products.As long as there are famous logos on clothes,cell phones,computers or even restaurants,they are eager to purchase regardless of the cost.Therefore there is never enough money to cover their expenses.,The Importance of Rational Con,2,The consequence of the brand pursuit,is not only an empty pocket,but the over burdened parents.Longing for the famous brand,these students concern nothing but the superficial brand,and some of them even but the expensive commodities on credit and ultimately become the credit card slave.The students themselves are not the only victims.Can you imagine a college campus filled with shallow heads and a generation of vain youth?They are purchasing brand goods at the expense of the nations future.,The consequence of the brand p,3,The rational view on consumption should be strongly advocated on campus.,Students should know that compared to material goods,the mind and health are better alternatives for investment.The most sacred responsibility of a college is to cultivate responsible citizens.We should pull these young shopaholics back into the right direction before they turn the college into a vanity fair.,The rational view on consumpti,4,Template 1,Part 1:,Nowadays,has aroused more and more attention of the whole society./Nowadays,it is a heatedly discussed topic that/more and more people pay attention to/attract a lot of public attention./Currently,has become a matter of concern/More and more people begin to realize the importance of,（,To draw forth the topic,and underlay for the whole composition,）,Template 1,5,Para 2,：,In the past,/People used to,(To point out the past facts which are mostly reverse to the topic),As a result/However,/The situation was not enjoyable/many problems emerged,(To point out the problems and the disadvantage under such facts),Therefore,it is really encouraging to see that people are beginning to pay more attention to/Nowadays,/On the country/While,(To make a comparison with the advantages under current situation),Para 2：,6,Para 3,：,I do hope that more and more people could realize the importance of(To offer hope,and mention the topic again),Useful sentence pattern Drawing forth the opinion,The importance of has been brought to public attention./Currently,there is a growing tendency that/A recent survey shows that/It is widely accepted that/It might be time to place emphasis on/It is almost impossible that.without/Anyone with the least knowledge can tell/It is a rare thing to/Suppose that/The attitude is shared by,Para 3：Useful sentence pattern,7,如果是有待分析或争论的作文题,都容易展开思路,有话可写。如果题目是一个公认的道理,不言自明,应当如何写呢,?,建议运用原意扩展的技巧,把这种技巧发挥得淋漓尽致。,下面通过分析一篇较典型的范文,来演示这方面的思路。,如何论述一个不言自明的问题,?,如果是有待分析或争论的作文题,都容易展开思路,有话可写,8,1.,典型题眼：,The Importance of/Travel Broadens Mind,The harm of,1.典型题眼：The Importance of/Tra,9,结构模板,第一段：引出要说明的事物，明确自己对这一事物的态度（赞同或反对，应该不应该，重要否？有利还是有害？）,第二段：第一句：承接首段观点，对本段内容及其发展方式加以限制（一般用举例法），说明重要性,(,危害性、有利之处,),表现在以下几个方面：,分主题一：重要性,(,危害性、有利之处,),之一（一句话）,+,拓展观点（,2-3,句）；,分主题二：重要性,(,危害性、有利之处,),之二（一句话）,+,拓展观点（,2-3,句）；,第三段：结论：重要性,+,建议或展望（危害性,+,警示；有利性,+,建议）,结构模板 第一段：引出要说明的事物，明确自己对这一事物的态,10,题目：,The Importance of Confidence,confidence(,信心,),的重要性是不言自明的。但非得把这个主题演绎为一篇三段式的作文。先考虑用词。由于文中不可避免地要多次提到,信心,缺乏信心,这样的内容,不能总是用,confidence,或,lack of confidence,。,题目：The Importance of Confid,11,语言要丰富,先要考虑有哪些同义表达和反义表达,:,Confidence-faith-build up faith,-feel capable of doing sth.,lack of confidence-lose heart,-feel frustrated,平时练作文时就要养成找同义表达和反义表达的习惯。,语言要丰富,先要考虑有哪些同义表达和反义表达:Confi,12,下一步,想法找一两个可围绕做文章的关键词。,譬如,从反面着眼,想想一个人要是没有信心,原因是什么,?,如果想到了是个不能正确估计自己和估计困难的问题,那么就找出了一个可环绕做文章的,词眼,-estimate(,估计,),estimate,既可作动词,也可作名词,还可加前缀变成,overestimate(,过高估计,),和,underestimate(,过低估计,),用起来有声有色。,下一步,想法找一两个可围绕做文章的关键词。,13,首先将要论述的不言自明的道理从正反两面各发挥一句,本例中正面的一句是用,“,whatever,”,引起的让步结构,反面的一句用的是一个既精采又好学的句型,“,If.,there is little possibility that.,especially when.,”,。最后来一个定型套语,点明主题的客观正确性。说了长长短短三句话,无非绕着,“,信心重要,”,这个主题在转圈圈,由此英语写作能力就显示出来了。,首先将要论述的不言自明的道理从正反两面各发挥一句,本例中,14,Whatever one does,one should do it with confidenc