单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit 13 Were trying to save the earth.,写作,话题：,The world and the environment,(,世界与环境,),Unit 13 Were trying to save t,Pre-writing,Writing guidelines,(,写作方法指导,),议论文写作技巧,1.,论点要鲜明、确切。论点通常在文章的第一段提出。,2.,论据要充分、可靠。可以列举生活实例，也可以利用成语,、,格言、名人名言。,3.,论证要严密、得法。常用的方法有：归纳法、推理法、对照法、驳论法。,4.,态度要诚恳、友好。议论文重在说理，以理服人。,Pre-writing Writing guideline,1,Unit topic languages,（单元话题语言）,以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关的词块、句子。,Language box,（语言工具箱）,的重要性,，,环境问题,environment problems,the importance of,(1)Chunks,（词块）,1Unit topic languages（单元话题语言）,动词词块：,give off,发出,cut down,pour/put,into,把,倒入,/,放入，,make laws,制定法律,stop the pollution,try ones best to,尽某人的能力，,pick up,save water,call on,号召，,(1)Chunks,（词块）,动词词块：(1)Chunks（词块）,（,2,）,Patterns,（句型）,is also very necessary;,It is everyones duty,职责,to;,Its important for us to,；,We must/should/are supposed to,；,We mustnt/shouldnt/arent supposed to,；,We had better(not)do,；,I believe that;,（2）Patterns（句型）is also very,6,月,5,日是世界环境保护日。我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。请你以“,Protect the Environment,”为题，写一篇英语作文。,内容包括：,1.,当今的环境问题。,2.,对于保护环境，你的建议。,3.,呼吁大家保护环境。,要求：,1.,不能照抄原文。,2.,语句连贯，词数,80,个左右。,6月5日是世界环境保护日。我们周围的环境变得越来越糟,Step1 Think and Fill,（想一想，填一填）,审题,体裁：,_,人称：,_,时态：,_,第一人称,一般现在时态、（一般将来时）,议论文,Step1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）审,以“,Protect the Environment,”为题,1.,当今的环境问题问题。,2.,对于保护环境，你的建议。,3.,呼吁大家保护环境。,Step2 Structurize,（列一列）,以“Protect the Environment”为题St,As we all know,today there is more and more pollution and the environment is becoming worse and worse.People,cut down,many trees.Water is dirty.And the air pollution is very serious.,Its very important for us to,protect the environment.All of us want to live in a better place,so,its our duty to,beautify the environment,.To make it,we,should,do something from ourselves.,First,we can ride bikes or walk,instead of,driving.,Not only,can it protect the environment,but also,it is good for our health.,Second,we,are not supposed to,drop litter,anywhere.We should,put,them,into,the trash bin.And,its best to,pick up,the litter on the ground when we see them.,Third,we should save the paper,the water,the food and so on,.,Fourth,we should protect the trees and we should plant more trees and flowers.I think if everyone can,make their effort,our world will be much better.,作者使用了大量句式，如,Its+adj.+for sb.to do sth.,Its our duty to,Its best to,以及大量短语，令文章语句丰富。,措辞具体明确，给读者以鲜明的印象。选词适当得体，适合文章的题材和风格。,巧用大量的连词,first,second,third,fourth,，,not only,but also,将句子合乎逻辑地联系起来，有逻辑性和层次感，帮助读者理解文章思路。,巧用总结语，呼吁有力量，有号召力。,Protect the Environment,As we all know,today ther,Today,we human are,destroy,ing,the environment,so the environment around us is getting worse and worse.In some places,we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills.There is less fresh water in the world.Some people even have no clean water to drink.,But we must know we have only one world.If its broken,we wont have any places to live.So we cant leave it along,we should stop it and care more about the environment.,As students,we,should,do something.,Above all,we,ought to,save water and electricity.,Whats more,we,had better,use shopping baskets,instead of,plastic bags when we go shopping.,Besides,we,are supposed to,call on,more and more people to join us.Lets,take actions as soon as possible,!Lets protect the earth,and live a better environment.,意赅文简，辞约事丰，一点也不拖沓。让读者感觉干脆，节奏明快。,文章详略得当，重点突出。,短句的使用，既能把思想内容表达清楚，又突出了重点。句与句之间脉络清晰，相辅相成。,措辞简洁精炼，文句直截了当。选词简洁、朴实、准确。,用了不同的表达方式，如,should,ought to,had better,be supposed to,，可见作者对词汇的积累丰富。,above all,whats more,besides,等连词的使用，使文章有条理又浑然一体。,Protect the Environment,Today,we human are destro,第十三单元,3.,环保问题,（简化作文）,如何保护,/,拯救我们的环境？正如我们都知道,今天我们周围的环境正变得越来越差,.,水被污染了,我们没有洁净的水喝,.,许多树木被砍伐,有些动物越来越少,.,人民的健康水平因为空气,噪音污染和水污染有了很大影响,.,许多人死于疾病,.,为了过上更好的生活,必须采取某种措施来制止污染,.,保护我们的环境是我们的责任,.,我们不应该随处扔掉垃圾。为了在未来生活得更好更健康我们应该种更多的树,.,总之,如果人人都为保护环境作出贡献,世界将,.,会更美丽。我希望大家很好地保护我们的环境,.,第十三单元3.环保问题（简化作文）,第十三单元,3.,环保问题,How to save our environment/world?,As we all know,the environment around us is getting worse and worse today.Water is polluted,we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cut down,some animals are getting fewer and fewer.Peoples health has been greatly affected by air,noise and water,pollution.,污染,Many people died of diseases,疾病,.,In order to live a better life,something must be done to stop the pollution.Its our duty to protect our environment.We shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.In a word,总之,If everyone,makes a contribution,贡献,to,protecting,the environment,the world will become much more beautiful.I hope everyone will protect our environment,第十三单元3.环保问题How to save our en,Summary,议论文写作技巧,1.,论点要鲜明、确切。,2.,论据要充分、可靠。,3.,论证要严密、得法。,4.,态度要诚恳、友好。,Summary议论文写作技巧,Only One Earth,Care and Share,Only One Eart