单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,如何写出神采飞扬的好文章,马玉红,1、,由于基础的原因，有的学生的书面表达题“白板”一张，放空不写,或胡乱抄写考卷上的一段英文来充数，这两种情况都只能得零分。每年高考大约有百分之十的学生得零分。,2、,表达有困难,或在考试中留给书面表达题的时间太少，导致不完篇，字数不够，内容不够充实,得低分也是在所难免。,十二种常见的书面表达题错误,3、句式单调，前后雷同，用词简单，犹如出自于初中生之手，这样的文章未免显得比较低级、幼稚，也是难于得高分的。,4、审题不清,偏题离题，或体裁格式错误，或时态人称错误，或要点不全，或有的要点过分发挥而显得罗嗦。,5、词汇方面的错误，这有三个方面：,1)、单词拼写错误或混淆,单词拼写错误或混淆主要是由于部分学生的,词汇量局限，记忆上失误，导致拼写错误及词的混淆，如foreign，opinion的拼写错误；prevent 与protect，express 与 impress等混淆。当然有时是笔误引起的，如mg dog.(我的狗)。,2）词性、词义的误解误用,He swam happily and,lazy,in the river.(把lazy 改为lazily)When I get home,my dog will come and,taste,me.,(原文要表达“它会来舔我”),3）习惯用法、固定搭配的错误,Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.,(catch sight of为固定短语,故应去掉a),6、语法错误：,1)、举不胜举的词法句法错误，,显得“无法无天”，如：She,studys doesnt,very hard.There,have,some students,think,its wrong.,2)、简单句的句子不完整，或并列句、主从复合句的句子之间缺少必要的连词，犹如汉语的“枯藤老树昏鸦”，在英语中这样的的句子不完整的。如：I very angry.Work hard，you will make progress.,7、语义重叠的错误,如：renew、return 后面加上back，advance 后面加上 forward，walk 后面加上on foot，enter与into，raise、rise表示“升起”时后面加上up，sink后面加上down，be about to后面加上at once或immediately就属于语义重叠。又如：,Every one year they plant trees.(one为多余),Today I visited the Smiths my first time visit t.,(time为多余)。,8、语篇语境的逻辑关系错误,如:She was smiling,but,nodding at me.(把but 改为and)Im glad to learn that you are,going,to China and will stay at my home.(把going 改为coming),1）名词的单复数一致，如：She said she and my schoolmate all wished,me success,(应把 schoolmate改为schoolmates),2）代词的性、数一致，如：,The Smiths did his best to make me feel well.,(把his 改为their),9、一致性原则方面的错误,3）主谓一致，如：,What are your favorite sport？,（应把 are 改为is）,4）时态一致，如：My favorite sport is football.,I was a member of our school football team.,（把was 改为am）They offered me coffee and other drinks.We,have a good time talking and laughing.,（把have改为had）,10、汉式英语，生硬直译，这类错误大多由于受汉语表达习惯的影响造成的，如：,because之后不可再加so；although、though之后不可再加but；,又如：serve for somebody 应去掉for，marry with somebody应去掉with；还有：,1）I realized I had forgotten my key,in the office.,(本题应把forgotten改为left),2）Its the best film Ive,never,seen.,（此处的never应改为ever）,3）The reason why he came late was,because,he was caught in heavy traffic.,（此处because应改为that）,4）Mr Green gave the books to,others,except those who had taken them.,（此处的others应改为everyone）,5）She,very,likes dancing.,（此处的very应改为very much并调到句末）,11、大小写、标点符号方面的错误。,比如，一个句子的第一个单词的第一个字母要大写，还有像China之类的专有名词的第一个字母也要大写,等等。英语中的句号是实心点，别混写为空心圈；逗号不能并列两个句子；省略号是三点，但在句末写了四点（另一点是句号）；英语中没有书名号和顿号，书名号用斜体字或大写形式表示，而顿号用逗号代替。,12、书写不够规范,卷面不够整洁,甚至随意涂鸦。这样就破坏了卷面，影响评卷老师的阅卷，学生既使有再好的英语功底,也会被“埋没”的。,学生作文的类型,在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只,用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围,绕“How do you prefer your English,classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个,问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课,形式，写一篇英语短文,授课形式一：只用英语,优点：有助于提高听说能力等,缺憾：不易听懂等,结论：,授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用,优点：易于理解等,缺憾：英语氛围不浓等,结论：,1.蒙混式,I prefer my English classes to be,taught in both English and Chinese.,How do you English classes to be,taught?In English only,or in both,English and chinese?,In other hand,some students to,know about English and speaking English ask in English only in class,help them English speaking than,in both English and chinese better.,But in English only some students,like or in both English and Chinese,to levese,1.蒙混式,2.中文式,I prefer my English classes to be,taught in English only.I think that,teacher teach English in English,only.,We can learn the right English.,Speak English,is good to us.,If we always speak English together,we,also can,talk with Englishmen,in right English.We can speak,English well.We,also can,write,English well.So our English can,be very well,.,2.中文式,We only have the class time to,learn English.,What I,prefer to learn English?,2.中文式,3.套路式,I prefer my English classes to be,taught in both English and Chinese.,To begin with,English is not our,mother tongue.,Furthermore,English is very,different from Chinese.We need time,to adapt it.,teaching in both English and Chinese is better.,Finally,Chinese can be a tool to,help us to get knowledge of English,more easily.,But everything has two sides,.,If we would be taught in both English,and Chinese,the atmosphere of the,classes would be not wonderful.,3.套路式,In spite of this,advantages are,more than disadvantages.,So in my opinion,teaching in,both English and Chinese is better.,3.套路式,4.偏题式,Some people,prefer our English classes to be,taught in English.Because that can help us,improve our writing,listening and speaking.,And that can make an atmosphere to study,English well.,Any other people thought,our English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese.,In my opinion,I prefer my English classes to be taught in English.,5.地道式,I prefer my English classes to be,taught in English only.As everybody,knows,the mastery of a language,doesnt just mean the ability to write,and read.To aquire this language,a,pure English atmosphere is of great,importance.Only by using the language,frequently can we have a good mastery,of English.,5.地道式,However,there are some disadvantages with this teaching method.It will be difficult for us to understand what the teacher