单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,建议信,建议信,1,建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。通常包括:,1. 说明写信目的。,2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。,3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。,文体概述,建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法,2,基本框架:,开头(beginning)-,写信的目的(包括背景,现状和存在的问题);,主体(body)-,建议的内容;,对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence),结尾(ending)-,表达希望(希望自己的建议能够对对方有所帮助),(restate your opinion.),基本框架:,3,首段常用的句型:,1. I am writing to express my views on/ concerning,2. You have asked for some advice concerning and I will try to give you my suggestions.,3. I would like to suggest that,4. I am writing in reply to,5. In my opinion, I would say,首段常用的句型:,4,提出建议时常用的句型:,In my opinion, it would be beneficial if,I would recommend that,You do not have to devote all your time to,There is a suggestion as to,I suggest that,提出建议时常用的句型:,5,结尾段常用的句型:,1.I hope that these suggestions/ proposals/ recommendations will be helpful/ useful/ beneficial.,2. I would be ready to further discuss this matter.,3. Please inform me when you have made a decision.,4. I trust you will take my suggestions into account.,结尾段常用的句型:3. Please inform me w,6,Dear_,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _./ I know that _ from_.,Backgrounds and problems,Dear_,7,Here are a few suggestions/ Here is some advice that/ on_. First, it is important to _. Then/ Second/ Also, _. Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore, it should be a good idea to _. I am sure that/ I hope that_.,Suggestions, thanks and hope,Here are a few suggestions/ He,8,Thanks for your consideration. Im looking forward to/ Look forward to _.,Yours_,_,Signature,Thanks for your consideration,9,常用语块,1. 给某人提建议 _,2. 如下 _,3. 在做某事时遇到困难,_,4. 利用 _,5. 向某人征求意见_,ask sb. for advice,give sb. some advice (on),as follows,have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.,make use of,常用语块ask sb. for advicegive sb.,10,6. 制订计划 _,7. 认为有用,_,8. 参加 _,9. 听从某人的建议 _,10. 把考虑在内,_,take sth. into account/consideration,make a plan,findhelpful/useful/beneficial,take part in/participate in,follow ones advice,6. 制订计划 _,11,11. 得到改善 _,12. 有所好转 _,13. 依我看来 _,14. 我已收到你的来信,得知你,_,15. 我建议 _,I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you, I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion that,get improved,change for the better,in my opinion/in my view/from,my point of view,I have received your letter saying that you,11. 得到改善 _,12,套用句式,1. 你就向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。,2. 我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助的。,1. You have asked me for my advice on/ concerningand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.,2. I feel that it would be beneficial if,套用句式1. You have asked me for m,13,3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。,4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。,5. 如能看到我会非常开心的。,3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.,5. I would be more than happy to see,4. I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.,3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。3. I hope yo,14,习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文),Dear Roy,I am glad to receive your letter ask for my,advice to how to learn Chinese well.,Here are few suggestions. First, this is important,to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese,whenever possible.,asking,on,a,it,newspapers,习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文)asking on a,15,Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing,Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easier. You,can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell,you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.,Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.,Best wishes!,Yours truly,Li Hua,Besides,easily,They,and,Beside, it should be a go,16,假定你是李华,请根据所给材料,给Lora写一封回信。要点如下:,1. Lora父母不同意的原因。,2. 你给Lora的具体建议。,注意:,1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,人教课标版高中英语选修8Unit1-writingppt课件,17,Dear Lora,I have just read your letter in the magazine.,I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents dont,allow you to do,so. I understand your situation.,I think your parents may have their reasons. They may,regard learning,as the most important task for you. Perhaps theyd like you to,make use of,this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are,too young to work.,Dear Lora,18,I think you,had better have a talk with,your parents. If they agree, you should,make a detailed plan for,your study and work, ask your friends to,work together with you,and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are,old enough to manage things properly,.,Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.,Yours truly,Li Hua,I think you had better have a,19,