单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,2020/3/27,#,写作指导,真题再现,题目分析（审题,+,结构）,素材积累（词汇,+,短语,+,句型）,范文赏析（全文背诵,）,叙事记叙文,写作指导叙事记叙文,1,写作指导,1.,记叙事件,（经历）,2.,描写见闻,感受 启示,3.,注意五要素：,when,where,who,what,how,.,写作指导1.记叙事件（经历）,2,亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢,21,世纪英语周刊征稿，请你以,“AnUnforgettable Thing”,为题，简要描述一件你亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情，并谈谈你从这件事中获得的启示。,要求：,1.,语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；,2.,词数,80,字左右。,_,_,_,亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢21世纪英,3,三、题目分析,1.,审题,体裁：,题型：,要点：,人称：,时态,：,记叙文,无提纲,经历,+,启示,一,一过（一现,/,现完）,三、题目分析1.审题体裁：记叙文无提纲经历+启示一 一,4,2.,构思,Beginning part,：,Body part :,Ending part :,3.,行文,4.,检查,引出,五要素,收获,(,启示,）,2.构思Beginning part：3.行文引出五要素收,5,四、素材积累,必备词汇：,1.,给,深刻印象,2.,感动,3.,震惊的,4.,鼓励,5.,令人愉快的,6.,进步,7.,惭愧的,8.,旅行,9.,感激的,10.,相反,impress sb,move/touch,shocked,encourage,pleasant,progress,ashamed,trip/tour/travel/journey,thankful/grateful,instead,四、素材积累必备词汇：6.进步impress sbmove,6,四、素材积累,必备短语：,1.,拜访,/,参观,2.,让某人印象深刻,3.,刚一到,4.,听到这个,5.,做完某事,11.,情不自禁做某事,6.,开始意识到,7.,没过多久,8.,刚,，这时,9.,使某人羞愧,10.,下定决心做某事,12.,如此,以至于,pay a visit to,impress sb deeply,On arriving at/in,hearing this,after doing sth,begin/come to realize,It was not long before,was/were doingwhen,make sb ashamed,make up ones mind to do sth,couldnt/cant help doing sth,so/suchthat,四、素材积累必备短语：6.开始意识到pay a visit,7,句型,去年夏天我,参观,了故宫。,Last summer,I _ the Forbidden City.,paid a visit to,2.,但是，有一件事,让我印象深刻,。,But there is one thing _ _.,that really impressed me deeply,3.,刚一到机场,，飞机就起飞了。,_,the plane took off.,On arriving at the airport,4.,听到这话,，她情不自禁的哭了。,_ she couldnt help crying.,吃完饭,，我立即出去散步。,_,I went for a walk immediately.,Hearing this,After having dinner,句型去年夏天我参观了故宫。paid a visit toth,8,6.,我开始意识到，,我做错了。,I _,what,I did was wrong.,7.,没过多久,考试就结束了。,_the exam was over.,8.,我正在做作业，,这时,我们老师来了。,I was doing my homework _my teacher came.,9.,我又上学迟到了，,这使得我很羞愧,。,I was late for school again,_.,10.,这是,我经历过的,最令人激动的时刻。（这一辈子）,It was the most exciting moment_,Came to realize,It was not long before,When,Which made me very ashamed,that I had ever experienced,.,6.我开始意识到，我做错了。Came to realizeI,9,五,.,范文赏析,An Unforgettable Thing,I cant remember every thing,发生在我的生活中,.But there is one thing that really impressed me deeply.,Last winter vacation,I paid a visit to my grandparents by bus.On the bus,I had a good seat soon.,没过多久,a woman with a baby in her arms got on.But there were no seats left on the bus.,At the moment,I thought,I had a long journey,so I didnt move.Just then,a boy in front of me stood up and gave his seat to the woman.,看到这个,I began to realize,what I had done was wrong.,I,如此羞愧以至于,I felt I was much smaller than the little boy.,From then on,I made up mind to learn from the boy.If everyone can help each other,the world will become more beautiful.,that happened in my life,It was not long before,Seeing this,was so ashamed that,五.范文赏析An Unforgettable Thingt,10,起伏巧三句,At,the,moment,I thought,Seeing this,I began to realize that,I was so that,起伏巧三句At the moment,I thought,11,Practice,At first,I thought it was _,but then I came to realized that it was,_,salted fish,PracticeAt first,I thought it,12,Practice,At first I thought _,but then,PracticeAt first I thought _,13,At first I thought _,but then I came to realized,that he was_.,At first I thought _,14,The End,The End,15,