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Discuss,2,aisle(,通道,),inconvenient public facilities(,设备,),天天向上原创,aisle(通道)inconvenient publ,3,How can we help disabled people in a cinema?,天天向上原创,How can we help disabled peopl,4,escalators,Solutions :,People in wheelchairs,drive-in theater,天天向上原创,escalators Solutions :People,5,A Letter to An Architect,天天向上原创,A Letter to An Architect天天向上原,6,Reading,1.Who wrote the letter? To whom?,Alice Major,wrote the letter to,Ms Sanders.,2. Whats the structure of the letter?,(A),(B),1,7,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,天天向上原创,Reading 1.Who wrote the letter,7,The Structure of the Body of the Letter,Part1(para_),Part2(para_),Part3(para_),The,purpose,of writing the letter,Some,suggestions,given by Alice Major,The,hope,1,7,2-6,To ask the designers to consider the matter of,easy use of the cinema by the disabled.,天天向上原创,The Structure of the Body of t,8,The purpose. (Para.1),What,is the writing purpose of the letter?,How,did Alice express her writing purpose?,To,give suggestions,about the needs of disabled customers.,A letter of suggestion,To sound more,polite,and,acceptable,.,“I hope you will not mind me writing to ask,.”,天天向上原创,The purpose. (Para.1)What is t,9,The purpose. (Para.1),I read in the newspaper today that you are to be,the architect for the new Bankstown cinema. .,In particular I wonder if you have considered the,following things:,I read in the newspaper today that you are to be,the architect for the new Bankstown cinema.,In particular I wonder if you have considered the following things:,The writing background,To lead in the following paragraphs,A transitional sentence,天天向上原创,The purpose. (Para.1)I read in,10,To tell the reader the purpose of the letter.,What is the purpose of the first paragraph of the letter?,To,give suggestions,about the needs of disabled customers.,天天向上原创,To tell the reader the purpose,11,The suggestions. (Paras.2-6),What?,Adequate,access for wheelchairs.,Earphones,for people who have trouble hearing.,Raised seating.,Toilets.,Car parking.,How?,numbered her suggestions.,used,italics,.,The general suggestions,天天向上原创,The suggestions. (Paras.2-6)Wh,12,Why do you think the writer,numbered her suggestions,and used,italics,?,to,organize the ideas,and,to make it easier and clearier,for readers to understand and remember the five suggestions.,to attract the receivers attention and the receiver will realize these are important information.,天天向上原创,Why do you think the write,13,What is the purpose of the last paragraph of the letter?,To finish the letter in a polite way and to put forward some reasons why the architect should consider the writers suggestions and express the hope for the future.,天天向上原创,What is the purpose of the las,14,The Heading,:,The Greeting:,The body,The complimentary close:,The signature line:,the form of a suggestion letter,This includes the address, line by line with the date being the last line.,The greeting,begins with the word dearand,ends with a comma.,begins with a capital letter and ends with a comma.,your name,天天向上原创,The Heading: The Greeting: The,15,A Letter to an Architect,Structure,The purpose.,The suggestions.,The hope.,The detail(s) of the suggestions,The reason(s),The writing background,The transitional sentence,consider your suggestions,encourage him to take your suggestions.,天天向上原创,A Letter to an ArchitectStruct,16,Useful sentence patterns for the,purpose,I read in the newspaper that you are the architect who is to design.,I,hope,you,will not mind me,(writing),In particular,I,wonder if,you have considered,.,I am writing to put forward the following suggestions.,It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on how to ,I am writing to express my views about,Part1(Para.1):Beginning,天天向上原创,Useful sentence patterns for t,17,Useful sentence patterns for,suggestions,It would be,handy,to do,It would,help to do,Id like to,suggest that,It would be,more convenient,to do,If they are, it is easier for sb. to do,Par2(Para.2-6):Body,S1:,S2:,S3:,S4:,S5:,It would,be better if,It is,best,to do,If I were you, I would,天天向上原创,Useful sentence patterns for s,18,Useful sentence patterns for,asking the,receiver to consider the,suggestions.,I hope my suggestions will,meet with your approval,., I am sure many people will praise your cinema if you.,In my opinion, in a word , I hope.,I,would appreciate it if,you,I hope you will,find my suggestions useful,.,Part3(Part7):Ending,天天向上原创,Useful sentence patterns for a,19,I,would like you to think about,the needs of disabled customers.,You should think about the needs of disabled customers.,Which do you prefer?,1. Appropriateness,得体,天天向上原创,Which do you prefer?1. Appropr,20,First of all,= Initially,= To start with,= To begin with,2. Coherence,连贯,Besides, ,=Whats more, ,=Moreover, ,=In addition, ,=Furthermore, ,transitional words,Finally,=in the end,=Last but not least,=Last and most importantly,天天向上原创,First of all,2. Coherence 连贯,21,Post-reading,Group work,Suppose a new supermarket will be built in your area. The architect of the supermarket is Mr. Smith.,Please write a letter to him to suggest ways to make the supermarket accessible for the people in wheelchairs.,writing,天天向上原创,Post-reading Group workwriting,22,Homework,Write a letter of suggestion to the architect.,天天向上原创,Homework Write a letter,23,A,sample of a letter of suggestion,Mr. Smith Julia,Chief architect 18 Hongyang,Supermarket design XiWang County,211 RenMin Road,XiWang County,18 March,200_,天天向上原创,A sample of a letter of sugges,24,Dear Mr. Smith,I read in the newspaper that you are the architect who is to design the new supermarket in our suburb. I am writing to ask you to consider the matter of easy use of the supermarket by people in wheelchairs. In particular, I would like you to consider the following things:,1. Width of aisles. Can you please make sure that the aisles are wide enough to allow wheelchairs to pass through. In some supermarkets the aisles are so narrow that a person in a wheelchair can not move along them easily.,天天向上原创,Dear Mr. Smith,天天向上原创,25,2. Height of shelves. Can you please design shelves that can be reached by people in wheelchairs. In some supermarkets people in wheelchairs have to ask other shoppers to help them. This takes away their independence.,3. Lifts to other floors. Lifts should be in places that people in wheelchairs can get to easily. It is very difficult if lifts are right at the back of the shop and people have to go up and down the shelves before they get to it.,4. Car parks. I hope you will leave some car spaces close to the front of the shop for people in wheelchairs. It is very difficult if they have to park a long way away from the shop and wheel themselves over rough ground to the entrance.,天天向上原创,2. Height of shelves. Can you,26,Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. Disabled people should have the same opportunities as able-bodied people to shop independently and they should be able to do so with dignity. I am sure many people will admire your supermarket if you design it with good access for disabled people. The supermarket owners will also be happy as more people will be able to shop there.,Yours sincerely,Julia,天天向上原创,Thank you for reading my le,27,