,话题,9天气；旅游与交通,返回目录,话题,9天气；旅游与交通,返回目录,*,*,命题探索,三阶攻关,目录,写作练兵,话题,9天气；旅游与交通,话题思维导图,命题探索三阶攻关目录写作练兵话题9天气；旅游与交通话题思维,话题思维导图,话题思维导图,话题思维导图,话题思维导图,命题探索,分析福建近,7,年中考书面表达可知，未考查与,“,天气；旅游与交通,”,相关的书面表达。再结合全国近年真题可知，该话题通常有以下命题角度：,介绍某次旅行,；,谈论旅行的感受,；,对某次旅行的看法及建议。,命题探索分析福建近7年中考书面表达可知，未考查与“天气；旅,典例剖析,(2019,娄底改编,),“,读万卷书，行万里路,”,，研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎。假如你们学校的英文网站就,研学旅行,中需要注意的事项,发帖，,征集建议。请,你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文,，进行跟帖回复。词数,80,左右。,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,审主题：研学旅行的注意事项,审时态：一般现在时,审,文体：说明文,审人称：第一人称,典例剖析 (2019娄底改编)“读万卷书，行万里路”，,内容要点：,1.,健康饮食；,2.,安全出行；,3.,遇险报警。,参考词汇：,报警,call the police,注意事项：,1.,跟帖回复时可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；,2.,意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；,3.,请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,内容要点：一二,Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students.What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip?Heres my advice.,_,_,_,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,Now study trips are becomi,1,角度,介绍某次旅行,句式扩写范例,1.The weather here is cool and cloudy.,The weather here is cool and cloudy,just right for walking,.,2.Today I went on a school trip.,Today I went on a school trip.,We visited the Science Museum and it was really interesting,.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,1角度介绍某次旅行句式扩写范例 1.The weath,句 子 扩 写,1.I camped in the mountains with some friends.(扩写具体活动),_,2.We took the train to the museum.(扩写感受),_,I camped in the mountains with some friends.We put up a tent and cooked outside.,We took the train to the museum.It was so hot on the slow train.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,句 子 扩 写 1.I camped in th,3.There were too many people in the park.(扩写结果),_,There were too many people in the park.I couldnt really see or hear the guide.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,3.There were too many people,2,角度,旅行的感受,好句范例,3.,I think,todays school trip was exciting.I really like it very much.,4.My school trip was great!We had,so much,fun!,5.Its really interesting,isnt it?,Its a great way to,spend a Saturday afternoon.,6.,All in all,it was an exciting day.I will never forget that day.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,2角度旅行的感受好句范例3.I think todays,句 子 仿 写,4.我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观，因为我们从中学到了很多。,_,5.我们在这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。,_,I think the place is worth visiting again because we have learnt a lot from it.,We got so much fun in this trip.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,句 子 仿 写 4.我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观,6.总之，这次旅行对我来说很难忘。让我懂得了如何与他人友好相处。,_,_,_,_,_,All in all,this trip is unforgettable for me.It taught me how to get along well with others.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,6.总之，这次旅行对我来说很难忘。让我懂得了如何与他人友好,3,角度,对某种旅行的看法及建议,好句范例,7.,In my opinion/In my view/As far as I am concerned/As for me,it,is good for,students.,8.,To begin with/Firstly/First,travelling can make us relax.,9.,Last but not least,we can know more custom and culture.,10.,We should pay attention to,the safety.,11.,To be honest,school trips give us a good chance that we can get along well with our classmates.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,3角度对某种旅行的看法及建议好句范例7.In my opi,句 子 仿 写,7.在我看来，参加研学旅行是一种很好的教育活动。,_,8.首先，多锻炼、充足的睡眠可以使我们旅行愉快。,_,_,_,In my opinion,taking part in study trips is a kind of very good education activity.,To begin with,taking more exercise and getting enough sleep can make the trip pleasant.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,句 子 仿 写 7.在我看来，参加研学旅行是一种,9.最后，但同样重要的是我们可以找老师或者朋友们寻求帮助。,_,10.说实话，你可以乘高铁去北京而不是坐大巴车。,_,Last but not least,we can ask teachers or friends for help.,To be honest,you can take a highspeed train to Beijing instead of taking a bus.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,9.最后，但同样重要的是我们可以找老师或者朋友们寻求帮助。,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,练语段,语 段 练 习,1,介绍某次旅行,We will organize a trip to _(目的地).I,m really very happy because _,_,_(理由).In the morning,we will _(活动1).In the afternoon,we will _(活动2).I,m sure we will _(感受),the nearby village,this is my first time to go there,feed animals,learn to cook meals,have a good time,一二练语段语 段 练 习 1介绍某次旅行 We,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,语 段 练 习,2,旅行的感受,Last week,our class organized a trip to the Science Museum.We saw _(经历1)there.The guide also told us _(经历2).We all _(感受1).All in all,we thought the trip was _(感受2),great inventions,the development of some inventions,felt excited when we saw those great inventions,an unforgettable experience,一二语 段 练 习 2旅行的感受 Last we,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,语 段 练 习,3,对某种旅行的看法及建议,First,we should _,_,_(建议).Drink clean hot water._(原因).Second,we should pay attention to the safety.We should _(具体做法1).At last,when we have some trouble in life or our study,we can _(具体做法2),take more exercise and get enough sleep,It is good for our health,take the safe taxi or car when we go out,ask our teachers or friends for help,一二语 段 练 习 3对某种旅行的看法及建议 F,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,成篇章,（针对,“,典例剖析,”,的优秀范文）,Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students.What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip?Heres my advice.,First,we should,take more exercise,and get enough sleep.Drink clean hot water.It,is good fo