单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/10/29,#,英语写作课,英语写作课,1,规划人生，成就未来。请以,“My Dream”,为题写一篇英语短文，描述你,的,梦想,。,规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短,2,Brainstorming:,Whats,your dream?,Brainstorming:Whats your drea,3,My Dream,体裁：,_,内容：分,_,部分，,时态：,记叙文,3,1.What is your dream?,一般将来时为主,3.The things you will do,2.The reasons of your dream,My Dream体裁：_记叙文3 1.Wh,4,The first part:,Useful expressions,1.My dream is to be/do(,开门见山）,2.Everyone has his dream.My dream is,3.For my dream,I will,4.When I grow up,I am going to,5.I want to be/do when I grow up,6.Ever since my childhood,I have had a dream of,7.,As the saying goes,“Dream is the sun of life.”/,There is a saying,“”(,俗话说得好,),The first part:Useful express,5,The second part:,Useful expressions,1.The reason why I have this dream is that,2.There are many reasons for this dream.,First,second,third,finally,Firstly,secondly,thenat last,For one thing,for another,On the one hand,On the other hand,To begin with/First of allbesides whats more,3.I remember So I want to,4.I will be/do because,The second part:Useful expres,6,The third part:,Useful expressions,1.In a word,I will try my best to to make my,dream come true.,2.In short,to make my dream come true,I must,take actions,3.To realize my dream,I must,4.In my opinion,I will,5.As far as I am concerned,Im going to,6.In conclusion,now I should,The third part:Useful express,7,My Tips:,How to Get High Marks in your composition,善于使用形容词、副词、短语、比较级,善于使用排比、插入语、被动语态、衔接词,善于使用低难度高亮度的 词,善于使用语气词、地道英语,善于使用强调句型，长短句交替使用,保证不出错，争取出彩,My Tips:善于使用形容词、副词、短语、比较级,8,Sample:,学科网,zxxkw,My,D,ream,China,D,ream,is,made up of,all Chinese people,s dreams.As a middle school student,what,s my dream?,I,dream of,becoming a teacher when I,grow,up,and I,hope to,work in my old school.Because I want to,reward,my teachers,for,teaching me so well,.,I,ll also,try my best,to teach my students as my teachers taught me.To achieve my dream,I,ll have to study harder,from now on,I,ll never,give up,my dream,no matter,what difficulties I me,e,t.I,m sure my dream will,come true as long as,I,hold on to,it.,If everyone,does so,I,strongly,believe our China,D,ream must come true and China will get,better and better.,Sample:学科网zxxkw,9,Practice makes perfect!,Writing:,学科网,zxxkw,Practice makes perfect!Writin,10,Judge by yourself,短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅，语言基本无误。,9-10,分,短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，,语言有少量错误。,7-8,分,能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但表达尚能达意。,5-6,分,仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。,3-4,分,仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。,0-2,分,Judge by yourself 短文通顺完整，能包含所有,11,Discussion,Exchange and check your partners writing,then discuss whose composition is the best one in your group.,DiscussionExchange and check y,12,Show time,有智慧的思想，才会有闪光的语言,。,Show time有智慧的思想，才会有闪光的语言。,13,Homework,Correct,your writing for grammar,punctuation,and,spelling,then,rewrite,it in best and,hand,it,in,tomorrow.,HomeworkCorrect your writing f,14,Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to,do,it.,世上无难事，只怕有心人。,教师寄语：,：,Nothing in the world is diffic,Thank,you,Thank,16,1.,高考作文不同于“自由写作”,高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要“根据要求写作”，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚。,2.,而要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。,3.,一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要。,4.,出现大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的缺点,。,5.,空洞乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅无力,。,6.,段落中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏说服力,。,7.,这是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出“你们”成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁。,8.,在运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。,1.高考作文不同于“自由写作”高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的,17,