单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Composition writing,写作复习课,Composition writing 写作复习课,随着互联网的发展，网络购物变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络购物了，比淘宝网，京东商城等。,请以,“,Shopping on the Internet,”,为题写一篇,80,词的短文，谈谈你对网购利与弊的看法。,随着互联网的发展，网络购物变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经,advantages?,disadvantages,?,Ideas(,观点,),advantages?disadvantages?Id,a head,a tail,a body,beginning,end,main body,主体,Structure,（结构）,a head a taila bodybeginninge,1.The world is large.And many people want to buy something from other countries.But they cant.,How to begin,2.With the development of the Internet,shopping on the Internet is becoming more and more popular.,1.The world is l,Topic sentence,（,主题句）,A topic sentence,expresses the,main idea,of a paragraph and helps you,understand,a passage.,A topic sentence,is usually the,first,sentence of a paragraph.,Topic sentence（主题句）A topic se,There are many things on the Internet.,On the Internet,people can buy foods,clothes,books and so on.Whats more,many things are cheaper and nicer,and people have more time to choose.Also people can do some shopping without leaving their houses.,Revise a topic sentence,修改主题句,There are many things on the I,Supporting sentences(,推展句,),Supporting sentences,support your idea and give some details about your idea.,Supporting sentences(推展句)S,Shopping on line has many advantages.,First,shopping on line is more convenient than going to the shop.,Second,the goods are cheaper than those in the stores.,Many people who cant find a job usually choose,to,run a shop on,line.,Shopping on line has many,restate your idea,(,重申观点,),Shopping on line helps us a lot,but we should do it carefully.,give some advice,(,提出建议,),The government should make laws to improve the safety of shopping on line.,How to end,restate your idea(重申观点)How,Words and Sentences,遣词造句,Q:How to,beautify,words and sentences?,A:By using,linking words,（连接词）,Words and Sentences Q:How to,for example,such as,like,for instance,Brainstorm,whats more,whats worse,besides,also,however,but,while,because of,because,so,so that,as a result,in order to,in order that,so that,in short,in total,in a word,举例,递进,转折,原因,结果,目的,总结,for example,such as,like,f,As we know,shopping on the Internet has many advantages.,_,we can not only save lots of time but also buy cheaper things.,_,we can shop at any time.,_,it also has disadvantages.We can only see the pictures,_,we dont know about the quality.,_,its not safe to pay on the Net.,_,we should shop on the Net carefully so that it can serve us better.,For example,Whats more,However,so,Whats worse,In short,For example Whats more,Words and Sentences,遣词造句,Q:How to,beautify,words and sentences?,B:By using,good,sentence patterns,句式,Words and Sentences 遣词造句Q:How,E.g.1:We should keep healthy.,Its important.,Its important,for us,to,keep healthy.,E.g.2:Its beautiful music.,What beautiful music(it is)!,How beautiful the music is!,E.g.1:We should keep healthy.,Good sentence patterns,1.It is+adj.+(for sb.)+to do sth.,2.not onlybut also,3.the+,比较级，,the+,比较级,4.,从句,(,状语、宾语、定语从句等,),Good sentence pa,1.We can save a lot of time.We can buy cheaper things on the Net.,We can,not only,save a lot of time,but also,buy cheaper things on the Net.,Words and sentences,1.We can save a lot of time.,2.If we can be more careful,well be safer.,The more,careful we are,the safer,well be.,Words and sentences,2.If we can be more careful,3.There are many kinds of clothes.,They look very beautiful.,There are many kinds of clothes,which that,look very beautiful.,Words and sentences,3.There are many kinds of clo,ideas,structure,words and sentences,Model Display,范文展示,1.,What do you think of the ideas?,2.Is there a beginning,a main body,and an end?,3.Which words or sentences do you like?,ideasModel Displa,Evaluating,Evaluating,1.Read the title carefully,（仔细读题，弄清题意）,2.Choose the right words,tense and sentence patterns,（,确定时态，选用词句）,3.Write carefully and neatly,（认真书写，工整清楚）,4.Read again and make sure you make few mistakes,（通篇阅读，检查错误）,Summary,1.Read the title carefully（仔细读,Homework:,Rewrite your composition,Homework:,