单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2021/7/26,*,Reading Fun,Sub topics go here,2021/7/26,*,(最新整理)高考书面表达指导,2021/7/26,1,(最新整理)高考书面表达指导2021/7/261,来冬梅,2015,届高考英语,书面表达,指导,2021/7/26,2,来冬梅2015届高考英语书面表达指导2021/7/262,20,12,年高考书面表达,回顾,假定你是李华,从互联网（,the internet),上得知,一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（,Singapore,）举办夏令营，,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。,内容主要包括：,1.,自我介绍（包括英语能力）；,2.,参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）,3.,希望获准。,2021/7/26,3,2012年高考书面表达回顾 假定你是李华,从互联网（,20,13,年高考书面表达,回顾,假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（,Chinese knot),。给开网店的美国朋友,Tom,写封,信,，请他代买，要点包括：,1.,外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）,2.,象征意义,3.,价格,2021/7/26,4,2013年高考书面表达回顾 假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结,20,14,年高考书面表达,回顾,一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。,1.,家庭；,2.,工作；,3.,业余生活。,2021/7/26,5,2014年高考书面表达回顾 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是,2015,年高考书面表达,2021/7/26,6,2015年高考书面表达2021/7/266,高考书面表达的题材特点,题材贴近现实生活和学生实际生活,生活化,学校生活,求职申请,环境保护,人际关系,兴趣爱好,热点话题,文娱体育,旅游交通,饮食健康,文化习俗,2021/7/26,7,高考书面表达的题材特点题材贴近现实生活和学生实际生活生活化学,Writing,写作水平要提高,科学方法来支招,follow me,2021/7/26,8,Writing写作水平要提高科学方法来支招follow me,循序渐进练写作,词汇,短语,句型,谋篇,漂亮、地道,阿来,2021/7/26,9,循序渐进练写作词汇阿来2021/7/269,1,.,这个工作很,难,。,B.The job is quite _ .,The job is quite difficult/hard/tough.,challenging,词汇是基础,2021/7/26,10,1.这个工作很难。B.The job is quite,2,.,这个,很,(,好）,。,B.The(,thing,)is very _,The(,person,)is very _,clever/bright/smart/handsome/cute,/intelligent/easy-going/gentle/.,perfect/wonderful/excellent/outstanding/.,2021/7/26,11,2.这个很(好）。B.The(thing)is,3,.,我很喜欢,。,C.Im fond of,I like very much.,B.I enjoy very much.,D.My favorite is,2021/7/26,12,3.我很喜欢。C.Im fond of I li,4.,电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。,Computers are very important in our life.,Computers,play a very important role,in our life.,C,omputers,are of great importance,in our life.,2021/7/26,13,4.电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。2021/7/261,1._(,众所周知,),，,there is a famous saying“Everything depends on ones attitude”.,As is known to us,2._(,我认为,),Kobe is really,a super basketball star.,As far as I am concerned,句型是关键,2021/7/26,14,1._(众所周知)，ther,3.,不但,而且,In London,you can _ taste delicious food _can visit some famous tourist attractions _.,not only,but,as well,4.,毫无疑问,_,China is a developing country with a long history.,There is no doubt that,2021/7/26,15,3.不但而且 not onlybut as,5.,认为,是重要的,/,必要的。,I think(consider)_important/necessary to do something.,6.,该是,的时候了。,_ we took actions to protect and beautify our environment.,Its high time that,It,的用法不可忽视哦,it,2021/7/26,16,5.认为是重要的/必要的。6.该是的时候了。Its,抄,改,连,扩,抓,审,书面,表达,书面表达六步法,2021/7/26,17,抄改连扩抓审书面书面表达六步法2021/7/2617,六个步骤,1,、审题,文字信息,图画信息,题材、人称、时态,2,、抓要点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的要点,3,、扩展成句：用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或,高级词汇将要点扩展成句,4,连句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾,语篇衔接,5,、检查修改,6,、规范抄写,（单词拼写、大小写、标点、时态、语态、主谓一致等）,2021/7/26,18,六个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态2、抓要点：,大家来判断、给分,Which composition feels more attractive,why?,2021/7/26,19,大家来判断、给分Which composition feel,2021/7/26,20,2021/7/2620,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：,作文的卷面,2021/7/26,21,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面20,影响给分的因素之二：,文中所采用的语言材料,人,靠衣装，,文,靠词装,A,.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；,B,.句型结构运用灵活多变；,2021/7/26,22,影响给分的因素之二：人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新,影响给分的因素之三：,行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成,正确而巧妙地使用好,连接词,2021/7/26,23,影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成2021/,Tom was ordinarylooking _very popular in his school because of his kindness.,but,连接亦重要,2021/7/26,24,Tom was ordinarylooking _,高考大纲中常用的,连接词,also;besides;moreover;,furthermore,in addition;what is more;,but;however;though,on the other hand;,on the contrary;,1.,表示递进,2.,表示转折关系,阿来,2021/7/26,25,高考大纲中常用的连接词1.表示递进2.表示转折关系,since;as;because(of);so;thus;,consequently;therefore;as a result;,if;on condition that;,as long as,3.,表示因果关系,4.,表示条件关系,阿来,2021/7/26,26,3.表示因果关系4.表示条件关系阿来2021/7/262,when;while;after;,before;,until;as soon as;,5.,表示时间关系,阿来,2021/7/26,27,when;while;after;before;,above all;,first(ly);,second(ly);then;,next,;finally;in the end,in other words;,that is to say;,6.,表示特定的顺序关系,7.,换一种方法表述,阿来,2021/7/26,28,above all;first(ly);second(l,for instance;for example;,like;such as;,in fact;actually;,as a matter of fact;,to tell you the truth;,8.,进行举例说明,9.,用于陈述事实,阿来,2021/7/26,29,8.进行举例说明9.用于陈述事实阿来2021/7/262,luckily;happily;vividly;obviously;,eventually;surprisingly;consequently;,“,总而言之,”,，,“,总的来说,”:,on the whole;in short;to sum up;,in general;in brief;in a word;above all;,10.,其它常用到的副词,11.,对一个话题进行总结,阿来,2021/7/26,30,luckily;happily;vividly,To rid students of the situation,here I address some effective measures to relieve pressure,.,First of all,spare time for relaxation.Some music and physical activities bring you leisure.,In addition,you can turn to the psychologist for help if,necessary,for they can always give practical advice.,学生习作一,2021/7/26,31,To rid students of the,Above all,the school is no more than one mile the distance from our house,so its really,convenient.,Exactly speaking,Im confident that I can treat my British brother as if he were at his home.,Above all,Exactly speaking,学生习作二,学生习作三,2021/7/26,32,Above all,the school is no,抓住要点,开门见山,完美收关,适当扩展,文章有窍门,2021/7/26,33,抓住要点开门见山 完美收关适当扩展文章有窍门2021/,假定你是某国际学校学生李华。今年暑假将有,15,名英国学生来你校参加“游学,”（,Study Abroad,）,活动。学校现从学生中招募,15,个义务接待家庭。请你根据以下要点用英文给负责此项目的,Mr.Dean,写一封,申请信,。,1.,你的家庭情况；,2.,你家的居住条件及与学校的距离；,3.,你家作为接待家庭的优势。,注意