,10/29/2020,#,【,概要写作话题训练,5,】,体育健康,【概要写作话题训练5】体育健康,1,人与环境,主题语境,:,体育健康关键词,:,workout,语,篇类型,:,事理,介绍,短文,词数,:335,语篇难度,:,建议时间,:24mins,阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要,Training with a partner can help you overcome,some barriers,.here are four methods of creating a,successful workout partnership,It,can be hard to stick to a fitness program,everyone has,days when all you want to do is lie on the couch,and watch,your favorite shows.during times when,motivation is,lacking,having a suitable workout partner is,beneficial A,simple text or email the day before a planned,workout might,be all your partner needs to stay active,人与环境主题语境:体育健康关键词:workout 语篇类型,2,Finding a workout partner who shares,similar training,interests provides a foundation to build,a successful,workout plan.If four-hour bike rides do,not interest,you,find a partner who would rather attend a 45inute class.If barbell(IEA)training in the middle,of the,weight room is too terrifying,grab a partner,who would,rather try a circuit workout of body weight,exercise.,Before starting your workout partnership,set,goals and,expectations as individuals and as a team.Write,down how,often you will train together,including specific,days and,times of the week Make notes of the types,of workouts,you will complete together.Consider,scheduling an,entire month of workouts at once.Setting,expectations prior,to beginning your workout partnership will,greatly increase,your likelihood of,success.,Finding a workout partner who,3,Author Dale Carnegie said,People rarely,succeed unless,they have fun in what they are doing Maintain,a positive,attitude toward your training partnership,by carrying,out fun workouts and monthly challenges.,Play basketball,together,even if you have never played,before Work,together to see how fast you can climb 100 flights,of stairs,.Have a monthly push-up(,俯卧撑,),contest to,test your,progress and challenge each other.Enjoy,being creative,and remember to celebrate your,progress.,_,Author Dale Carnegie said,Pe,4,名词注解,:,俯卧撑,(,英文,:push-up;,press:up),中国大陆称作俯卧撑,中国台湾地区称作伏地挺身,港澳地区称作掌上压,),是常见的健身运动,有助于增加胸大肌锻炼效果。俯卧撑在日常锻炼和体育课上,特别是在军事体能训练中是一项基本训练。俯卧撑主要锻炼上肢、腰部及腹部的肌肉,尤其是胸肌,是简单易行却十分有效的力量训练手段。初学者练习俯卧撑可以进行两组,每组,15,到,20,下,;,有一定基础的运动者则可做,3,组,每组,20,下。,名词注解:俯卧撑(英文:push-up;press:up),5,语篇,解读,本题属于说明文类的概要写作。首先根据文章内容明确主题主要介绍了四种建立锻炼合作伙伴关系的方法。即,The,writer,i,ntroduces,four methods of building up a,successful exercise,partnership.,然后写出与主题相关的一些要点,:When your partner is lacking in motivation,you can send,a message,or an email to your partner before exercising.,It,is good to find a workout partner who has,similar training,interests with you.x It is important to set a,goal with,your partner x It is necessary to keep an,active attitude,to your training partnership.,在拟写提纲时,要突出主题,知道先写什么后写什么,也就是做到层次分明,语篇解读本题属于说明文类的概要写作。首先根据文章内容明确主题,6,难,句分析,原,文,：,During,times when motivation is lacking,having,as suitable,workout partner is,beneficial,译文,:,在缺乏动机的时候,有一个合适的锻炼伙伴是有,好处,分析,:,本句中的,when motivation is lacking,是由,when,引导的语从句,having a suitable workout partner,是一个动名词短语,在句中充当主语,难句分析原文：During times when motiv,7,笔前点睛,审题,分析,审要求,:,说明文类的概要写作,;,审人称,:,因为本文属于说明文,介绍了四种建立锻炼合作伙伴关系的方法,所以使用第三,人称,3,审时态,:,为本文讲述的是一个事实,所以使用一般现在时,;,审要点,:,也就是提纲中列出的几个,要点,写作时要注意点与点之间的过渡。,笔前点睛审题分析,8,思路点拨,find,out the key,point,four methods of building up a successful,exercise partnership,2,.give some,details,send,a message or an email to your partner,before exercising,find,a workout partner who shares similar,training interests,with,you,set,a goal with your partner,;,keep,an active attitude to your training partnership,思路点拨find out the key point,9,高分范文,The writer introduces four methods of building up,a successful,exercise partnership.,(,要点,1)First,when,your partner,is lacking in motivation,you can send a,message or,an email to your partner before exercising.,(,要点,2)In addition,it is good to find a workout partner who,share similar,training interests with you.,(,要点,3)Whats,more,setting,a goal with your partner is important.,(,要点,4)Finally,it is necessary to keep an active attitude to,your training,partnership.(,要点,5,）,(,80 words),高分范文The writer introduces four,10,高分解密,要点,1:,开篇准确地点出了文章的,主题,要点,2:When,引导时间状语从句,。,要点,3:,这句话准确使用了,who,引导的定语从句且有效使用了过渡成分,In addition,与前句衔接自然,。,要点,4:,本句有效使用了过渡成分,Whats more,与前前句衔接自然且使用了动名词短语作主语,。,要点,5:,本句正确使用了短语,keep an active attitude to,高分解密要点1:开篇准确地点出了文章的主题,11,语境演练,Every year,more and more parents complain,to their childrens,schools about PE.They believe,that their,children,shouldnt,have to participate,in physical,activity if they dont want to Supporters,of PE,however,believe that it is a crucial element,of all,-round schooling and our,societys well-being,.They insist PE in schools remains one of,the few,places by which the youth can be forced,to participate,in aerobic exercise,阅读短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要,语境演练Every year,more and more,12,Firstly,they believe that participation in,sport promotes,health.In fact physical education is,a springboard,for involvement in sport and,physical activities,throughout life.Government is,or,should be,conc