单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,*,*,高中英语写作之人物简介类作文,高中英语写作之人物简介类作文,人物简介,人物简介,Learning Aims：,1.Learn some words expressions and,structures to describe a person,2.Write a passage about Jane Goodall.,Learning Aims：,Preparation for writing,1、,Birthday and birth place,1)出生于,年,月,地方,2、Family background,2)在他父母的帮助下,3)当他是一个小孩子的时候,4)在他的童年时代,5)过着幸福/艰难的生活,6)在,岁的时候,1)was/were born on,in,2)with the help of his parents,3)when he was a small boy,4)during his childhood,5)live a happy/hard life,6)at the age of,Preparation for writing 1、Bir,3、Education,1)从,大学毕业,2)当他在大学的时候，他主修,3)在,方面有天赋,4)获得博士学位,1)graduate from,department,of,university,2)When at college,he majored in,3)have a gift for,4)gain a doctor,s degree,3、Education,4.Big events in his life,1),把自己一生的时间奉献给,2),做,方面的研究,3)do sth with great determination and perseverance.,4)win/get(the)first prize,1)devote his lifetime to,2)do research about/into,3),带着巨大的决心和毅力干,4),获得一等奖,4.Big events in his life,5),赢得一枚金牌,6),获得诺贝尔奖,7)become a world champion,8),因,而获得奖章,9)be awarded the title of,5)win a gold medal,6)win the Nobel Prize for,7),成为世界冠军,8)be awarded a medal for,9),获得,称号,5)赢得一枚金牌5)win a gold medal,5、Evaluation,1)one of the best(most important),2)被每个人尊重,3)his hard work brought him great success.,4)be regarded as,5)set a good example to us,6)对.评价高,7)把,专用于/奉献给,1),最好的,.,之一,2)be respected by everyone.,3),他的努力工作带给了他巨大的成功。,4),被看做,5),给我们树立了良好的榜样,6)speak highly of,7)devote.to.,5、Evaluation,Then how to describe a person?,Then how to describe a person,一、写作内容,1.age,sex,birth-place,background(,概况,),2.appearance,character(,外表、性格,),3.Education(,教育背景,),4.big events in his or her life(in order of time)(,经历、生平,),5.evaluation(,评价,),一、写作内容,1.,职位头衔：用,同位语,年龄性别与家境也可用,同位语,。,如：,孙淑伟是来自广东的,14,岁男孩，他是世界跳水冠军。,Sun Shuwei,a world champion in diving,(,同位语,),is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.,例句仿写：,亚伯拉汗,林肯,(Abraham Lincoln),于,1809,年,2,月,12,日出生于肯塔基州。,(Kentucky),Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.,二、句式模板,1.职位头衔：用同位语,年龄性别与家境也可用同位语。如,2.介绍出生:介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用,分词结构,使文章更简洁。,如：,姚明于1980年出生在上海，是一位世界著名的篮球运动员。,Yao Ming,born in Shanghai in 1980,(定语),is a world famous basketball player.,例句仿写：,Marie Curie 1867年11月7日出生于波兰，是世界上最著名的科学家之一。,Marie Curie，,born in Poland on November seventh 1867,was one of the best known scientists in the world.,2.介绍出生:介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用分词结构,使,查尔斯,狄更斯出生在贫苦的职员家庭，他几乎没有受过什么教育。,Born into a poor clerk,s family,(,原因状语,),Charles Dickens had little schooling.,例句仿写：,1930,年袁隆平出生于一个贫困的家庭，于,1953,年毕业于西南农业大学,(Southeast Agricultural College),Born into a poor family in 1930,Yuan Longping graduated from Southeast Agricultural College.,查尔斯狄更斯出生在贫苦的职员家庭，他几乎没有受过什么教育,3.描写外貌:巧用with短语。,如：,My Chinese teacher is a beautiful lady,with long hair and big eyes,(她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发).,例句仿写：,我的老板是一位有着黑色的头发，一双大眼睛的英俊年轻人。,My boss is a handsome young man,with black hair and big eyes.,3.描写外貌:巧用with短语。如：,4.生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。,如：,In his life,he got many honours，,one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award.,在他的一生中，他获得了许多荣誉，其中包括获得,“,2005年感动中国年度人物,”,的称号。(,定语从句,),例句仿写:Joan Goodall 在猩猩的自然环境中研究猩猩，这让她更多地理解了猩猩的行为。,Joan Goodall studied the chimps in their own environment,which made her fully understand chimp behaviour.,4.生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装,In 2006,having broken the world record and got the gold medal,(,在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后,),he became the idol(,偶像）,of the youth.,(,分词短语做时间状语,),例句仿写：,对自己的生活很满意，他不在乎名声和财富。,Satisfied with the his life,he cares little about his fame and wealth.,In 2006,having broken the w,Not only,does he show,interest in science,but also he has a gift for music.,他不但对科学极感兴趣，而且他还有音乐天赋。,(,倒装句式,),例句仿写：,他不仅专注自己的研究，而且关心社会福利事业。,Not only,is he devoted to,his research,but also,he concerns,himself with the welfare project.,高中英语作文人物介绍课件,写成长经历请按时间顺序。如,when he was a small boy,，,at(the age of)five,，,in 2006,，,a year later,等。,名师指津：,写成长经历请按时,5.,评价,:,尽量运用短语。,如：,Lei Feng set a good example to us(,给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,),so all the people show great respect for/to him(,很敬重他,).,5.评价:尽量运用短语。如：,Next,lets move to practice!,Next,lets move to practice!,四,.,写作,(,一,)Jane Goodall,1934,年出生于英国。她是著名的动物学家,(zoologist),。毕业于剑桥,Cambridge University),大学。,从小就梦想在自然环境中研究动物。,1960,年来到非洲研究猩猩。,取得成就：,1),在,Joan Goodall,之前，没有人完全了解猩猩的行为：吃肉；一起狩猎；像家庭成员一样交流，生活。,2),保护并尊重黑猩猩，反对用于实验和娱乐。帮助建立动物自然栖息地。,3),得到许多荣誉。,高中英语作文人物介绍课件,Jane Goodall,born in England in 1934,is a world famous zoologist,who graduated from Cambridge University.Since her childhood she had wanted to work with animals in their own environment.In 1960,she achieved her dream-she arrived in Gombe to study the chimps.,高中英语作文人物介绍课件,Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour.Her work changed the way people think about chimps.For example,one important thing she discovered was that chimps hunt and eat meat.She actually observed chimps hunt as a group.She also discovered how chimps communicate with each other.She has argued that wild animals should be left in the wild and not used for entertainment or advertisements.She