单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing,中考作文指导,Learning aims:,学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。,2.,能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。,3.,通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。,中考英语写作评分标准,一档文,写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，,语言流畅，有句式变化，,有复杂结构，至少,2-3,个，,基本无语法错误，只有,1-2,个，,或有少量由于使用复杂结构,而引起的语法或拼写错误，,但不影响意义理解。,How,can we write a,good,composition(,作文,)?,第一步：,都要,认真审题,，明确写作,体裁,、,要求,和提示,要点,How can we,write,a,good,composition?(Have a discussion!),具体做法：,用笔勾画,假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部,(Helping Hands Club)”,将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。,姓名,王林,性别,男,本人特点,身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处,“爱心”表现,（见图片）,加入目的,1.,2.,1.,要求：,1.,表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；,2.,要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；,3.,表格中“,加入目的,”一栏内容由考生自拟；,4.,词数：,70,左右。,第二步：,列出写作提纲（,Outline,）。,具体做法：,根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,Write an,Outline,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,I want to join,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,看表格,看表格,看图,自拟,I hope you will agree with me.,可以用英文或中文,姓名,/,性别,易漏掉的要点！,自荐信,What will you write？,王林,Who are you in this letter?,人称,:,I,Whats your purpose?,加入该俱乐部,时态：,一般现在时为主,Thinking:,Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9.,Id like to join,the Helping Hands Club.,I am healthy.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others.I get on well with my classmates.,If I join the club,I,will be able to make more friends,.And I,can also,do more for others,.,扣分原因一,词数不够！,Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9.Id like to join the Helping Hands Club.,I am healthy.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others.I get on well with my classmates.If I join the club,I will be able to make more friends.And I can also do more for others.,Introduction,本人特点,加入目的,扣分原因二,遗漏要点！,Write an,Outline,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,I am a boy,Id like to join,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,I hope you will agree with me.,无法拿满分！,Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9.Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.,I am healthy.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others.I get on well with my classmates If I join the club,I will be able to make more friends.Besides,I can do more for others.,Yours,Wang Lin,少了,两个,重要部分，扣,5-6,分，只得,9-10,分！,缺少,“爱心”表现,也,缺少,Conclusion,“爱心”表现,(examples),Picture 1,help,with,help,classmates,with,lessons,我的,I,often,help classmates with lessons.,看图,Picture 2,help,cross,“爱心”表现,(examples),看图,help,old people,cross,the road,I,help old people cross the road,on my way home,.,Picture 3,“爱心”表现,(examples),看图,give my seat to,give my seat to,people in need,I often,give my seat to people in need,on a bus,.,“爱心”表现,(examples),看图,Picture 4,clean up the park,help,clean up the park,I often,help clean up the park.,“爱心”表现,(examples),1.,I,often help classmates with lessons.,2.,I help old people cross the road on my way home.,3.,I often give my seat to people in need on a bus.,4.,I often help clean up the park.,Conclusion,Ill be glad if I can join the club.,I hope you will agree with me.,Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9.Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.,I am healthy.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others,I get on well with my classmates.If I join the club,I will be able to make more friends.Besides,I can do more for others.,Yours,Wang Lin,Ill be glad if I can join the club.I hope you will agree with me.,and often help classmates with their lessons.On my way home,I often help old people cross the road.On a bus,I always give my seat to people in need.Sometimes,I help to clean up the park.,不但要点完整了，词数也够了。,作文中,应避免,的几种常见,语言错误,：,时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在,1,分左右）。,中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让,整句不得分,）。,单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定,要过关,）。,介词,代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的,词性,要,熟悉,）。,名词单复数（,细心,就可以避免的错）。,写作：,第一步就是要,认真审题,，明确写作,体裁,、,要求,和提示,要点,第二步就是要,列出写作提纲,，根据,段落整理,写作,要点,。,写作前：,确定,人称、时态,写作后：,检查,另外,作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有,12,分的卷面整洁分,，这两分,不能丢！,）。,解决方法：,平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。,写作注意的几个问题,：,尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记“避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。,把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。,注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：,and,so,or,but,become,Whats more;What worse,not onlybut also,neithernor,等等。,再有学生语文水平的滑坡，使得英语老师不得不带领学生完成写作内容的挖掘。,写作注意的几个问题,：,选词：,普通的叙述文或短文，应该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化词语，避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄玄虚的词，并尽可能挑选积极的动词。,写作注意的几个问题,：,措辞：,能写出树的具体名称,an apple tree,就不要使用,tree;,能说清具体数字时，就不要使用,some;,知道是某种专门的活动，就不要使用,do,去描述，词意越具体，越能给读者鲜明的印象。,写作注意的几个问题,：,你如何写开头,1.,开头常用词语：,as far as we know,据我们所知,as everybody knows,众所周知,at present,目前,first of all,首先,To tell the truth,老实说,1.,结尾常用词语：,after all,毕竟,at last,最后,in a word,总而言之,finally,最后,we hope that,我们希望,In short,简言之,clearly,显然,你如何写结尾,如何添加过度句、连接词,补充说明,for example,besides,，,In addition(,此外），,Whats worse!Whats more!Worst of all.,转折,however,yet,but,原因,thanks to,because of,结果,as result of,so,，,sothat,好人好事,假如你叫小明。下面的图画讲述了,你,和一位男孩在,上周一,发生的事情。请根据图画写出一篇,日记,。日记的开头已经给出,Go to school,Saw fall off,Carry to,Visit with,Be fine,thank,看图作文,Who,was lying on the ground?,What,happened to the boy?,When,did it happen?,Where,did it happen?,Why,did it happen?,How,was the boy?,范文,1,Monday June2,2003 Fine,Last Monday,I went to school in the morning.,When I was at the school gate,I saw a boy,fell off his bike and lie on the road.He was,badly hurt and coul