PART,THREE,第三篇,写作妙解篇,话题写作,（三）,快乐成长,与思考感悟,PART THREE第三篇 写作妙解篇话题写作（三）快乐成,1,【话题点睛】,成长的话题包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。,成长话题的作文可能涉及的要点,:,（,1,）成长过程中,家长、老师、朋友对你的关怀与帮助,以及你的感恩与感悟。,（,2,）成长过程中遇到的烦恼与困惑。如学习紧张、考试压力、处理同学关系、代沟等。,（,3,）提出解决问题的方法与建议。例如,培养自信,树立远大目标,多与家长、老师沟通,向身边的朋友倾诉等。,【话题点睛】成长的话题包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。,2,词汇集锦,1.,烦恼类,have too much homework;alone;feel lonely;be strict with;feel bored;sleepy;be tired of;nervous;worried;have trouble in doing;feel stressed;sad;unhappy;afraid;be afraid of doing;be afraid to do;drive sb mad,2.,愉悦类,happy;happiness;glad;excited;love;enjoy;be proud of/take pride in;be pleased with;amazing;be crazy about;laugh;smile;cheer;surprise,3.,行动类,express;communicate with;invite sb to;take part in/join in;discuss with;encourage sb to do;allow sb to do;sharewith;get on/along well with;grow up,词汇集锦1.烦恼类have too much homewo,3,常用表达,1.We all want to grow happily and healthily.,2.Youd better eat more fruit and vegetables instead of too much meat.,3.Sharing with friends helps me bring back my confidence.,4.Its difficult for us to get on well with our parents.,5.Im not allowed to play computer games.,6.With your help,Ive made great progress in English.,常用表达1.We all want to grow happ,4,基础写作,根据汉语意思完成句子,1.,我最大的问题是没有很多时间用于我的爱好。,My,is that I dont have much time,.,2.,作为中学生,我们应该学会如何与他人融洽相处。,As middle school students,we should learn how to,.,3.,每个人都有自己的做事方式,所以我们应该相互理解。,Everyone has his own way,so we should,.,4.,太多的家庭作业使学生对学习失去兴趣,这也对他们的健康有害。,Too much homework makes students,study.Its also,.,5.,当我取得进步时,我的父母总是很开心并且鼓励我做得更好。,When I,my parents are always happy and,.,biggest problem,for my hobbies,get on/along well with others,to do things,understand each other,lose interest in,bad for/harmful to their health,make progress,encourage me to do better,基础写作根据汉语意思完成句子biggest problemf,5,6.,当你处于困境时,你应该向老师寻求帮助。,When you,you should,help.,7.,在我看来,似乎现在的孩子们更依赖他们的父母了。,It,me that kids today,their parents.,8.,放松并不是浪费时间,毕竟生活不应该只有学习和工作。,Relaxing isnt,.Anyway,life shouldnt just,and work.,are in trouble,ask your teacher for,seems to,depend more on,a waste of time,be about study,6.当你处于困境时,你应该向老师寻求帮助。are in tr,6,典型分析,伴随着身心的日益成长,如何与父母相处是初中生必须要面对和解决的问题。假如你是,Yang Ling,下面是一封你的笔友,May,给你发来的,e-mail,请你根据,e-mail,的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。,Dear Yang Ling,Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me,“Be careful while crossing the street.”“Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?”and so on.Im annoyed,（烦恼）,.What shall I do?,Yours,May,典型分析伴随着身心的日益成长,如何与父母相处是初中生必须要面,7,提示词语,listen to,mothers love,care about,communicate with,get along with,smile,写作要求,（,1,）语句通顺,书写工整,;,（,2,）可用所给提示词语,也可以适当发挥,;,（,3,）词数,:80-100,。,提示词语 listen to,mothers lov,8,【思路点拨】,1.,要点,:,针对来信帮,May,分析并解决与妈妈相处的问题。要弄清,:,（,1,）,May,的问题,;,（,2,）你的分析,;,（,3,）你的建议,;,2.,时态,:,一般现在时,;,3.,人称,:,第一人称,;,4.,重点词汇及句型,:,（,1,）,as a teenager,get along better with sb,care about,communicate with;,（,2,）,if,条件状语从句,;,（,3,）,I hope,表达自己的愿望。,【思路点拨】,9,【写作架构】,【写作架构】,10,【佳作欣赏】,Dear May,As a teenager,I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.,Your mother talks too much,because she cares about you.Maybe its not a good way,but it shows your mothers love.So I think you should listen to her and be friendly to her.If your opinions are different from your mothers,you can communicate with her,and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesnt take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile.Remember:Mum is the one who always loves you the best!,I hope what I say here can help you a lot.,Yours,Yang Ling,【佳作欣赏】,11,【名师点评】,1.,本文是一封书信,格式正确。作为一封回信,针对来信问题有分析有建议,很全面。,2.,运用了,“Here are some ideas for you.”,顺理成章地引出分析和建议。正确合理地使用了祈使句和宾语从句。,【名师点评】,12,实战演练,A,2018,襄阳,人非圣贤,孰能无过,?,作为一名学生,在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事,?,在认识到自己所犯错误或明白所做的傻事后,你又是如何改正的呢,?,请根据写作要点提示,以,“The Mistake Made Me Grow Up”,为题,用英语写一篇短文。,写作要点提示,（,1,）简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事,;,（,2,）谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或自己的努力下改正的,;,（,3,）你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。,实战演练A2018襄阳,13,注意事项,（,1,）词数,:90,左右,;,（,2,）短文应包含提示的要点,可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯,;,（,3,）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称,;,（,4,）已给标题不计入总词数。,The Mistake Made Me Grow Up,注意事项,14,A,One,possible,version,:,The Mistake Made Me Grow Up,Everyone may make mistakes.Mistakes make us grow.If we learn from our mistakes,we will have learnt another secret to success.Although mistakes are annoying,as long as we face them bravely,we will succeed sooner or later.,There was once a time when I made a mistake in a Maths exam.Because of carelessness,I failed the exam.When I was depressed,it was my Maths teacher who gave me a hand and told me that mistakes could also teach me a lesson.What she told me encouraged me to face my Maths problem bravely.Finally,my Maths grades improved.,Taking my experience into consideration,everyone can conquer the unavoidable mistakes in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves.Treasure the mistakes,and you will win the treasure.,A One possible version:,15,B,2017,上海,面临困惑的时候,经历变化的时候,感觉挫败的时候,遭遇逆境的时候,来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等,总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身或他人的经历）。,注