单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,话题写作,(,五,),情感表达,第一篇教材考点梳理,话题写作(五)第一篇教材考点梳理,1,【,话题点睛,】,话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。,【话题点睛】,每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢,?,请你以“,Less Pressure,Better Life,”为题,根据下表内容写一篇演讲稿。,典例分析,Stress,人们会因困难觉得失望、疲惫或者忧伤,承受着巨大的压力,Ways to,relax,改变,你的,想法,想一想你最喜欢的人或事,而不是想那些麻烦,你还,可以这样,做,听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等,这些都能让你高兴起来,寻求帮助,和父母、老师或朋友多沟通,My points,耐心一点儿。其实困难也许并不可怕,相信我们的生活会更美好,每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力,要求,(1),不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当发挥,;,(2),语句通顺、语意连贯,;,(3),词数,:100,左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,参考词汇,under much pressure,deal with,change ones mind,think about,instead of,cheer up,for help,just need to,要求,Less Pressure,Better Life,Hello,boys and girls!,Thank you for your coming today.Im very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future.,Thats all.Thank you.,Less Pressure,Better Life,【,思路点拨,】,1.,要点提炼,:,主题是讲面对压力,如何来处理。文章主要有三个要点,:,(1),压力概述,;(2),减压措施,;(3),自己的观点。,2.,确定时态,:,一般现在时。,3.,确定人称,:,第三人称,第一人称。,【思路点拨】,【,写作架构,】,【写作架构】,【,基础写作,】,.,写主干句,(,根据所给提示补全下列各句。,),1.,我们应该尽力采取一些措施去处理它。,(try to do sth.),We should,to deal with it.,2.,我们可以改变我们的想法。,(change ones mind),We can,.,3.,想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是那些麻烦。,(instead of),your favourite people or things _,.,try to take some measures,change our minds,Think about instead of those troubles,【基础写作】try to take some measure,4.,我们可以参加更多的活动,例如音乐俱乐部和足球队。,(such as),We can take part in more activities,and the football team.,5.,我们可以尽可能多地发现机会去和别人交流。,(as,as,),We can find as many,communicate with others.,such as the music club,opportunities as possible to,4.我们可以参加更多的活动,例如音乐俱乐部和足球队。(suc,.,句子升格,(,按括号中的要求改写句子。,),1.,Some students study very hard.They are still poor in their studies.(,用,though,改写句子,),_,_,2.,Others think they have much homework to do.And they have no time to play.(,用,so,that,改写句子,),_,_,Though some students study very hard,they are still poor in their studies.,Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.,.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)Though som,3.,We can take part in more activities.All these activities can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.(,用定语从句改写句子,),_,_,4.,We can reduce our stress by taking the above suggestions.(,用,only by,位于句首改写句子,),_,We can take part in more activities which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.,Only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stress.,3.We can take part in more ac,【,连句成文,】,Less Pressure,Better Life,Hello,boys and girls!,Thank you for your coming today.Im very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future.,When it comes to pressure,it is a serious problem in todays world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Though some students study very hard,they are still poor in their studies.They often worry about their exams.Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.,【连句成文】,We should try to take some measures to deal with it.First,we can change our minds.Think about our favourite people or things instead of those troubles.Second,we can take part in more activities,such as the music club and the football team,which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.Finally,we can find as many opportunities as possible to communicate with others,such as our parents,teachers and friends.,We should try to take some mea,As for me,Im always under pressure,too.However,it doesnt matter.I think only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stress.,Thats all.Thank you!,As for me,Im always under pr,【,参考谚语,】,1.,A smile makes you ten years younger.,笑一笑,十年少。,2.,Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbours.,悲喜常相伴。,3.,Laughter is the best medicine.,笑是最好的药。,4.,Worry kills more men than work.,忧虑比劳累更伤人。,拓展积累,【参考谚语】拓展积累,【,相关短语,】,thanks for,因,感谢,;,make new friends,结交新朋友,;,look after/take care of,照顾,;,keep in touch,保持联系,;,be friendly to,对,友好,;,bring back,带回,【相关短语】,【,亮点句型,】,导入主题句,1.,Among all my friends,Li Hua impressed me most.She is always kind and helpful.,2.,My grandmother is the person who I want to thank most.She has helped me a lot.,3.,The family is the greatest.No matter you are happy,painful or lost,it will gently on your way,quietly with your life.,4.,There is sadness as well as happiness in our life so cherish what you have.,【亮点句型】,文章发展、过渡句,1.,He encouraged me to be brave.He told me,“,Youd better speak slowly and clearly,and in this way,you can make yourself understood more easily.,”,2.,As soon as she found out my problems,she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice.,3.,With her encouragement,I have made great progress.,4.,He held my hand tightly.In this way,I was not afraid any more.,5.,He never scolds me.But I always listen to him and follow him.,文章发展、过渡句,文章结尾句,1.,I really want to say,“,Thank you for helping me.I love you!,”,to my grandmother.,2.,I will always remember her kindness and be grateful.,3.,What he said and what he did will influence me all my life.,文章结尾句,A,“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节,是我们向爸爸表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。,要点,(1),给我生命,一直照顾我成长,;,(2),努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件,;,(3),拥有爱心,教我学会,(4),今天,我要为您,(,自主发挥,至少两点,),。,实战演练,A实战演练,注意,(1),词数,