,Improving yourself,Unit,2,Improving yourselfUnit 2,Period Five,WritingWriting,a reflection,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,内容索引,Period Five写作训练 弄清文络 写作妙笔,一、基本构成,读后感指学会提炼和表述,感,想,，,能围绕,感,想,展开,较为充分的论证。关键是选择自己感受最深的东西去写。发表感想时要密切联系实际，这是读后感的重要内容。通常包括对所读故事、小说等的总结、个人感想和结论三部分。故事、小说的总结包括故事、小说的背景,(setting),，故事情节,(plot),和人物角色,(character),等。个人感想就是自己的看法，结论就是从说明原文给人什么启示的角度提出看法，总结全文。,感,想,须,符合原文要义；表述要明确、清晰、严密；,感,想,的,提炼与表述在很大程度上决定着文章的成败高下，宜在首尾加以突出。写作时要注意点面结合以及观点与材料的统一。在所给原文的基础上去发表议论，由此及彼的联系现实生活中相似或相反的现象，联系相关的种种问题。,技 法 点 拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,写作指导,一、基本构成技 法 点 拨文体分析 把握写作动脉写作指导,二、时态和人称,1.,时态：读后感以一般现在时为主，故事、小说等的总结视具体情况而定。,2.,人称：故事、小说等的总结用第三人称，个人看法用第一人称。,二、时态和人称,1.The story/novel/plot describes/tells that.,2.The story/novel is making waves in China and abroad.,3.The story/novel is well worth seeing.I really enjoyed.,4.One interesting anecdote contained in the story/novel is that.,5.I think/In my opinion/From my point of view.,6.My favourite character is.,7.What an amazing story/novel it is!,8.The story/novel is full of special effects.,9.We are always finding new beauties in.,10.What I have to admit is that.,常用表达,返 回,1.The story/novel/plot describ,假设你阅读了英国小说家查尔斯,狄更斯,(Charles Dickens),的代表作之一雾都孤儿,(,Oli,v,er,T,w,ist,),，请你根据以下提示写一篇读后感：,1.,查尔斯,狄更斯是英国伟大的小说家，雾都孤儿是他的代表作之一；,2.,雾都孤儿的主人公奥利弗,崔斯特,(Oliver Twist),是一个孤儿，他被扔进了贫穷与犯罪的魔窟；,3.,他历尽无数艰辛，最后在好心人的帮助下，身世被查明并获得了幸福。同时，那些坏人都受到了惩罚；,4.,奥利弗,崔斯特的成长环境是充满黑暗和罪恶的，但是他始终很善良；,5.,这部小说会给人留下深刻的印象，让人懂得做人的道理；,写 作 训 练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你阅读了英国小说家查尔斯狄更斯(Charles Dic,6.,雾都孤儿在英国文学史上是最受欢迎并且是被高度称赞的作品之一。,注意：,1.,词数,80,左右；,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,6.雾都孤儿在英国文学史上是最受欢迎并且是被高度称赞的作,审题,写作要求是写关于雾都孤儿的读后感。写作时应注意以下几点：,1.,确定文体：这是一篇读后感。写作时注意读后感的写作特点。,2.,主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。,3.,主体人称：由于这是一篇读后感，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。,审题谋篇,审题审题谋篇,谋篇,第一段：叙述小说的摘要,第二段：表达自己的感想,第三段：得出结论,谋篇,核心,词汇,1.,被扔,进,_,2.,贫穷和,罪恶,_,3.,查明,_,4.,同时,_,5.,给,留下,印象,_,遣词造句,be thrown into.,poverty and crime,find out,at the same time,leave/make an impression on.,核心词汇遣词造句be thrown into.pover,连词成句,1.,查尔斯,狄更斯是一位伟大的英国小说家，他写了很多著名的小说，其中最著名的是雾都孤儿。,(,并列句,),Charles Dickens is a great English novelist.He wrote many famous novels,，,_,the most famous.,2.,最后在好心人的帮助下，奥利弗,崔斯特的身世被查明并获得了幸福。,(,并列句,),In the end,，,warm-hearted people help Oliver Twist,and he gains happiness.,3.,尽管奥利弗,崔斯特的成长环境是充满黑暗和罪恶的，但是他始终很善良。,(although,引导让步状语从句,),is dark and evil,，,he is always very kind.,and,among them,Oliver Twist,is,find out his identity,Although Oliver Twist,s growth environment,连词成句andamong them Oliver Twist,句式升级,1.,用同位语及定语从句改写句,1,。,_,2.,将句,2,改为被动语态,。,_,3,.,将句,3,改为,as,引导的让步状语从句，构成倒装。,，,he is always very kind.,Charles Dickens,，,a great English novelist,，,wrote many famous novels,，,among which,Oliver Twist,is the most famous.,In the end,，,with warm-hearted people,s help,，,Oliver Twist,s identity is found out and he gains happiness.,Dark and evil as the environment Oliver Twist grows in is,句式升级Charles Dickens，a great En,用,适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇,80,词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成,参考范文,Charles Dickens,，,a great English novelist,，,wrote many famous novels,，,among which,Oli,v,er,T,w,ist,is the most famous.The hero of this novel is Oliver Twist,，,an orphan,，,who is thrown into a world full of poverty and crime.He suffers a lot when he is young.In the end,，,with warm-hearted people,s help,，,Oliver Twist,s identity is found out and he gains happiness.At the same time,，,the bad people are punished.,From my point of view,，,dark and evil as the environment Oliver Twist grows in is,，,he is always very kind.The novel will leave a deep impression on people and make people understand the truth of life.,参考范文,Oli,v,er,T,w,ist,is a novel reflecting the tragic fact of the life.I,，,a kind person,，,want to tell you that learning from the kind Oliver,can,regain the nature of goodness.,返 回,Oliver Twist is a novel reflec,本课结束,本课结束,