单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语书面表达,English Composition Writing,英语书面表达English Composition Writ,What makes,a good essay?,The essay,What makes The essay,Structure of a Good Composition,1.,Topic paragraph,2.,Supporting Paragraph,s,3.,Concluding paragraph,Structure of a Good Compositi,四大内容：,Topic paragraph,(Introduction paragraph),General statement,开头段：,四大内容：问候；自我介绍；写信背景；写信目的。,四大内容：Topic paragraph(Introduc,Well begun is half done.,开头段：,1,、问候,How are you doing?,How is everything going?,2,、自我介绍,I am,Lihua,a 17-year-old boy,studying,in XXX middle school.,I am LiHua,who,Well begun is half done.开头段：,Well begun is half done.,3,、写信背景（写信的缘由）,I heard/learned that,You said in your last letter that,4,、写信目的,Now,I am writing this letter to do sth,.,Well begun is half done.3、写信背景,had planned to do sth.,go to the movies/go to the cinema/watch a movie,on(this)Sunday afternoon/on(at)the weekend,break/keep ones promise/word,apologize to sb.for doing sth.,make an apology to sb.for doing sth.,Im sorry to do sth./that,因为失约，向对方道歉,had planned to do sth.因为失约，向对,Dear Peter,I feel terribly sorry to have broken my promise,that I would see a film with you on this coming Sunday afternoon,.Please accept my sincere apology!,因为失约，向对方道歉,that,引导同位语从句,Dear Peter,因为失约，向对方道歉that 引导同位,Supporting Paragraphs,(Body)Paragraphs,TS,SS,SS,SS,SS,Firstly,.,Secondly,.,Moreover,.,Finally,.,However,.,In addition,（另外）,Furthermore,（,而且,）,Supporting ParagraphsTSFirstl,The paragraph,What makes a,good paragraph?,The paragraphWhat makes a,正确使用有关连接词,时间先后：,first,then,later,in the end,eventually,最后,since then,after a while,转折关系：,but,however,on the contrary（相反地）,nevertheless（然而）,因果关系：,because,since,as,thanks to,owing to,as a result of,due to,because of,for the reason that,thus,therefore,正确使用有关连接词 时间先后：first,then,la,正确使用有关连接词,让步关系：,though,although,even if,even though,as,递进关系：,whats more,/worse,to make matters worse,in addition,furthermore,on the one hand on the other hand,条件关系：,if,unless,as long as（只要）,on condition that,(如果）,表 列 举：,for example/instance,takefor example,that,s to say,in other words,表 总 结：,in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole,as has been stated,all in all,to sum up,personally,in summary,正确使用有关连接词 让步关系：though,althoug,Firstly Secondly Thirdly.,To begin with/First of all,In addition/besides/furthermore,/moreover/Whats more,/at the same time,At Last/in the end/finally/eventually/,Last but not least,正确使用一些承上启下的连接词或短语,Firstly Secondly Thirdly.,用于陈述观点的词或短语,Personally,From my point of view,In my opinion,In my view,As far as Im concerned,I hold the idea that.,As for me,As regards to me,用于陈述观点的词或短语Personally,解释失约的原因（时态），安排下次活动,es,be about to do sth.when,be on the point of doing sth.when,receive ones call,sb call me,saying that/telling me that,take part in/join in/attend the,assay,contest,the test will be held on Sunday afternoon,the reason(why)is that,forgive/pardon sb.,if you are free/if its convenient for you,go for/on a picnic,go shopping,I suggest doing sth/,I suggest that,该部分内容可以适当拓展,解释失约的原因（时态），安排下次活动esbe about t,解释失约的原因,(,时态），安排下次活动,es,Yesterday afternoon,I,was about to leave,the dormitory,when,I received my Chinese teachers call,telling me that,I have to attend the essay contest,held,this Sunday afternoon,.I hope the change wont cause too much trouble for you.,Shall we go to have a meal together,next Sunday afternoon,?,If it is convenient for you,lets meet at 5:00 p.m.outside the school gate,.If not,please let me know what time suits you best,.,When I received a call from my Chinese teacher who asked me to attend the essay contest,解释失约的原因(时态），安排下次活动es Yeste,The conclusion,What makes a,good conclusion?,The conclusionWhat makes a,take into consideration/account,I would appreciate it if you could,I would be grateful to you if you could,Im looking forward to,结尾段,take into consideration/accou,Im looking forward to your early reply.,结尾段,Im looking forward to your ea,1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.,（使用名词性从句）,2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(,使用,as,倒装句,),3.He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(,强调句）,What,surprises him,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,It was,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,that,he knew what had happened.,It was,because of your help,that,I passed the physics exam.,What surprises him is that the,5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(,使用过去分词,),6.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(,使用,V-ing,形式,),7.I wont believe what he says.,（,no matter what,状语从句）,8,.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.,（祈使句,+and,）,Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,Study hard,and,youll make rapid progress.,5.She walked out of the lab a,9,He had,hardly,come back from Beijing,when,he was se