单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物,高一写作专题一：建议信,高一写作专题一：建议信,1,一、文体概述,建议信是向别人提出,合理的建议,，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，,解决有关问题,。建议信,不是投诉信,，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要,简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力,。,一、文体概述,2,建议信的,写作步骤,：,首段,：,表明写信意图,。,陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。,主体段落,：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况,提出具体建议或忠告,。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。,结尾段,：表达,希望采纳建议并期盼回复,。,建议信的写作步骤：,3,二、写作结构,【,篇首句,】,说明写信目的。,1.,Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how,to fit in the new school life.,Here are a few suggestions,.,很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是一些建议。,2.,Im very glad to have received your e-mail.Now Im writing to give you some advice on,how to learn English well in high school.,很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你建议。,二、写作结构,4,3.,I have received your letter saying Here,are some suggestions which I hope will be,of some help to you./Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.,我已经收到了你的来信，信上说,。这里是一些建议，希望会对你有帮助。,/,可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。,4,.,You have asked me for my advice about,how,to learn Chinese,a,nd I will try to make some suggestions here,.,你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。,5.,Im sorry to hear that,you are having trouble fitting in your new school.Such problems are quite normal.,Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful,.,很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。,3.I have received your letter,5,【,篇中句,】,介绍详情、提出具体建议。,（可参考课本,P7,part 2,写作指导）,1.,Id like to suggest that,我想要建议,2.,It would be a good idea to do sth,./,Doing sth.will also help to.,做某事是不错的主意。,/,做某事也有帮助于,3.,The best way to.is to.,最好的办法就是去做,4.,Youd better do./not do.,你最好,/,最好不,5.,Its necessary for you to,read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes.,;,more knowledge about these places,you will have a better understanding of,Chinese history and culture.,在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这璧地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。,【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。,6,6.,First of all,you should,listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class,so that,you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.,首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。,7,.,As is known to all,vocabulary is of great importance.,You should spend,half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.,众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。,6.First of all,you should li,7,8.Whats more,try to communicate,with your classmates in English out,of class.,Only in this way can you,improve,your listening and spoken English quickly.,试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你才能很快的提高英语听力和口语。,9.,Last but not least,you should develop the habit of keeping a diary,which helps,improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt,最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应养成记日记的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。,8.Whats more,try to communi,8,【,篇尾句,】,提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。,1.,I hope these suggestions will be of use to you,.,Remember:where there is a will,there is a way(,有志者事竟成,).,我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。,2.,I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway.,I would be more than happy to see improvement.,无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。,【篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。,9,3.,I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account,.Whatever you decide to do,good luck with your studies/work!,我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，柷你学习,/,工作好运。,4.,I sincerely hope that my advice will be some help for you.If there is more I can do to help,please let me know,.,我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。,3.I believe that you will tak,10,三、牛刀小试：根据提示完成下列作文。,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友,Peter,来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信：,1.,参加中文学习班,;,2.,看中文书刊、电视；,3.,学唱中文歌曲；,4.,交中国朋友。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.,开头语已为你写好。,三、牛刀小试：根据提示完成下列作文。,11,Dear Peter,（第一段：说明写信目的）,1.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.,2.Im very glad to have received your e-mail.Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.,3.I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you./Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.,4.In your letter you have asked me for my advice about how to learn Chinese,and I will try to make some suggestions here.,参考写作结构中的篇首句句型,Dear Peter,参考写作结构中的篇首句句型,12,（第二段：提出具体建议,）,First,(,参加中文学习班很有必要,),_as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.,Then,（看中文书刊、电视也很有帮助）,_.,Besides,（学习唱中文歌是一个很好的办法）,_because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.,It is important to,take a Chinese course.,It also helps to,watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese,whenever possible,.,It should be a good idea to,learn and sing,Chinese songs,参考,【,篇中句,】,表示建议的句型或课本,P7,part 2,写作指导,It is necessary for you to,take a Chinese course.,You can,watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible,which will help you a lot,.,（第二段：提出具体建议）It is important t,13,（最后，你也可以交中国朋友）,