单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2021/2/18,#,读后续写作文,Continuation,读后续写作文Continuation,1,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。,Jenny,was a pretty eight-year-old girl.,One day when she and her mother were checking out,at the grocery store,Jenny saw a plastic,pearl necklace,(,项链,),by which she was totally defeated.How eagerly she wanted it!But when she saw the price,her heart sank a little.She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her.Her mother said,“Well,it is a pretty necklace,but it costs an awful lot of money.I can buy you the necklace,but when we get home,we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.”Jenny agreed immediately,feeling a burst of joy.So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her.Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day.Soon Jenny paid off the pearls.,Jenny had a very loving,daddy,.When Jenny went to,bed,he would read Jenny her favorite story.One night when he finished the story,he said,“Jenny,do you,love,me?”“Oh,yes,Daddy,you know I love you.”the little girl said,delightedly,(,高兴地,),with a broad smile on her face.“Well,then,give,me your pearls.”Hearing that,Jenny froze there,an anxious expression twisting her face.“Oh!Daddy,not my pearls!But you can have Rosy,my,favorite,doll.Remember her?You gave her to me last year for my birthday.Okay?”“Oh no,darling,thats okay.”Her father brushed her cheek with a,kiss,gently and calmly.“Good night,little one.”,A week later,her father once again asked Jenny after her story,“Do you love me?”“Oh yes,Daddy,you know I love you.”the little girl murmured softly,trying to escape from her fathers eyes.“Well,then,give me your pearls.”“Oh,Daddy,not my pearls!But you can have Ribbons,my toy horse.Do you remember her?She is my favorite.”The little girl begged.“No,thats okay,”her father said,smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss.“God bless you,little one.Sweet dreams.”,注意：,1.,所续写短文的词数应为,150,左右；,2.,应使用,5,个以上短文中标出下划线的关键词语,2.,续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；,3.,续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语,读后续写范例,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。,2,Paragraph 1,：,Several days later,when Jennys father came in to read her story,Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed._,Paragraph 2,：,Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered,the father dragged out a blue box._ _,_,Paragraph 1：,3,构思续写的内容,STEPS,Thorough Reading,Plot planning,Make,a,draft,Polish your draft,构思续写的内容STEPS Thorough ReadingP,4,Thorough Reading,01,Thorough Reading01,5,读六要素,（,Who,What,When,Where,Why,How,）,Person,：,First person?Second person?Third person?,Tense,:The simple past tense?The simple present tense?,Thorough Reading,以记叙文为例,读六要素（Who,What,When,Where,6,注意：,有时候一个文本并不具备所有的要素，可能只会涉及其中的三到四个,Thorough Reading,读六要素（,Who,What,When,Where,Why,How,）,Who,is the main character?,When,did the story happen?,Where,did the story happen?,What,happened in the story?,Why,did he want the necklace?,How,was the story ended?,Jenny and her daddy,One night when her daddy finished the story,At Jennys bedroom,Her daddy wanted her plastic pearl necklace.,He wanted to know which is more important to Jenny,he or her necklace.,Jenny didnt give it to her daddy.,注意：有时候一个文本并不具备所有的要素，可能只会涉及其中的三,7,Thorough Reading,读六要素（,Who,What,When,Where,Why,How,）,Who:,Jenny and her daddy,When:,One night when her daddy finished the story,Where:,At Jennys bedroom,What:,Her daddy wanted her plastic pearl necklace.,Why:,He want to know which is more important to Jenny,he or her necklace.,What is the story about?,Jenny did a lot of housework in exchange for a plastic pearl necklace.Her daddy asked her twice whether she could give him her necklace.She said no to her daddy.,How:,Jenny didnt give it to her daddy.,Thorough Reading读六要素（Who,Wha,8,Thorough Reading,Person,：,First person?Second person?Third person?,A:Third person,Tense,:The simple past tense?The simple present tense?,A:The simple past tense,Thorough ReadingPerson：First p,9,Plot planning,02,Plot planning02,10,Plot planning,情节,:,一般包括,开端、发展、高潮、结局,等部分。,Characters,Jenny,her mother,her daddy,Beginning,Jenny did a lot of housework in exchange for a plastic pearl necklace.,development,Her daddy asked her twice whether she could give him her necklace.,And,s,he said no to her daddy.,Climax,?,Ending?,(your opinion),?,Plot planning情节:一般包括开端、发展、高潮、,11,Plot planning,The underlined key words,:,Jenny,at the grocery store,pearl necklace,Daddy,bed,love,delightedly,give,favorite,kiss,Tip1:,应该选择分别代表,重要信息,主要人物,Plot planningThe underlined ke,12,Plot planning,Infer the plot development according to the given sentences,Paragraph 1,：,Several days later,when Jennys father came in to read her story,Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.,Paragraph 2,：,Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered,the father dragged out a blue box.,Tip2:,先留意所给第二段的开头语，里面的一些,关键信息,必须要在第一段里面有所体现,Plot planningInfer the plot de,13,Plot planning,Paragraph 1,：,Several days later,when Jennys father came in to read her story,Jenny was waiting anxiously for hi