单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,介绍类,介绍类,1,人物简介,人物简介,2,人物简介,写作指导：,一、人物简介的写作步骤：,1.Birthday and birth place,2.Family background,3.Education background,4.Big events in his or her life(in order of time),5.Evaluation（评价）,二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：,1.Birthday and birth place:,.was/were born in(some place)on(the date).,2.Family background,.was/were born in/into a poor/rich family,人物简介,3,his/her family was so poor that.,the son of a poor family,live a happy/hard life,3.Education background,be admitted to.college,graduate from.department of.university,when at college,he majored in.,receive a doctor,，,s degree,4.Big events in one,，,s life,be interested in./be fond of.,work hard at.,devote his lifetime/himself to.,his/her family was so poor tha,4,concentrate himself on.,do research about/into.,fight for/give up one,，,s life for sb./sth.,win a prize/the first prize petition,receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for.,be good at/do well in.,be crazy about/enjoy.,set a new world record of.,be selected to/become a member of.,go through hardship,have a gift/talent for language,etc,5.Evaluation,one of the best/most important.,concentrate himself on.,5,be respected by everyone,speak/think highly of.,be honored as(an excellent athlete),his hard work brought him great success,He is the pride of China.,6.描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词汇,good-looking,funny-looking,ugly-looking,ordinary-looking,white-haired,warm-hearted,kind-hearted,absent-minded,bad-tempered,near-sighted,far-sighted,a strong will,tall,short,pretty,naughty,smart,wise,right,diligent,lazy,healthy,humorous,charming,attractive,talkative,confident,independent,patient,be respected by everyone,6,活学活用,根据以上写作知识完成下列基础写作任务。,写作内容,马克吐温是美国著名作家。请根据下面提供的内容写一篇人物简介。,马克吐温(18351910)生于美国Missouri。他是美国19世纪著名的作家之一。他的家乡位于密西西比河畔。成年后，他曾在密西西比河的船上当水手。他写过很多小说，其中最著名的是汤姆索耶历险记。他的作品被译成多国文字，深受全世界读者喜爱。,写作要求,1.必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容。,2.将5个句子组成连贯的短文。,活学活用,7,写作过程,第一步：审题,这篇书面表达题的形式是文字说明，简单介绍了美国著名作家马克吐温的生平，要求和要点明确。,（1）体裁：这篇书面表达是人物简介,共分三段，体裁上应是记叙文。,第二步 罗列要点：,a.人物简介：出生的时间，地点，职业,b.人物的生平：在密西西比河的船上当水手；写过很多小说,c.作品跟成就：最著名的是汤姆索耶历险记。他的作品被译成多国文字，深受全世界读者喜爱。,（2）全文的基本时态：文章的时态主要用过去时，最后两句与现在有关，因此可用现在完成时和一般现在时。,写作过程,8,第三步：将各要点分别翻译成句。,1.Mark Twain(18351910)was one of the best known American writers in the nineteenth century.,2.He was born in Missouri in the middle part of the United States.,3.Mark Twain,，,s hometown lay on the banks of the Mississippi River.,4.When he grew up he worked as a sailor on a riverboat for some time.,5.Mark Twain wrote a lot of novels.,6.One of the novels is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer.,7.Some of his writings have been translated into many languages.,第三步：将各要点分别翻译成句。,9,8.He and his works are deeply loved by readers throughout the world.,第四步：合并句子，根据内容连贯、语篇衔接的原则，运用恰当的关联词，将各个单句整合成一篇由五个句子组成的短文。比如：可将1、2合成一句，3、4各成一句，5、6合为一句，7、8合为一句。,现在，请你用5个句子将上述8个要点改写成一篇连贯的短文。,_,8.He and his works are deeply,10,答案：,1.整合信息,(1)Mark Twain(18351910),one of the best known American writers in the nineteenth century,was born in Missouri in the middle part of the United States.,(2)Mark Twain,，,s hometown lay on the banks of the Mississippi River,where he spent his childhood.,(3)When he grew up he worked as a sailor on a riverboat for some time.,(4)Mark Twain wrote a lot of novels,one of which is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer,the masterpiece which brought him fame and honor.,(5)Some of his writings have been translated into many languages and are deeply loved by readers throughout the world.,答案：1.整合信息,11,2.连句成篇,Mark Twain(18351910),one of the best known American writers in the nineteenth century,was born in Missouri in the middle part of the United States.Mark Twain,，,s hometown lay on the banks of the Mississippi River,where he spent his childhood.When he grew up he worked as a sailor on a riverboat for some time.Mark Twain wrote a lot of novels,one of which is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer,the masterpiece which brought him fame and honor.Some of his writings have been translated into many languages and are deeply loved by readers throughout the world.,2.连句成篇,12,介绍地点,介绍地点,13,如何写好说明文（1）,介绍地点,写作指导：介绍地点时应用一般现在时进行写作，文中一般包括以下要素：地理位置、人口、历史、气候、特产、工农业生产、风景名胜。在写作时，不要逐句翻译，可用恰当的介词短语、从句将多个信息点合并为一个句子。建议用下列顺序写作：,写作顺序,建议运用句型,地点状语，主句,Located in.,XXX is./Covering an area of.,XXX is.,如何写好说明文（1）写作顺序建议运用句型地点状语，主句L,14,面积人口/历史,It covers an area of.with a population of/with a history of.,气候特征,There is a variety of climates in XXX,so in the east it is warm/cold/wet/windy,while in the west it is.,历史文化名城，风景名胜,.,in which XXX is.,特产或其它特色之处,.is famous for./The special character of XXX is.,面积人口/历史It covers an area of.,15,活学活用,请根据以下的情景说明用5个句子描述全部所给信息。,澳大利亚位于最小的大洲大洋州，是世界第6大国家。它是一个干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由6个州组成，其中墨尔本（Melbourne）、悉尼（Sydney）是最大的两个城市。它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名，世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。,总面积：7,686,850 square kilometres 人口：约2,000万,注意：要有标题，介绍必须包括所有的内容要点，但不要逐条翻译成英语。,活学活用,16,答案：,Located in the smallest continentOceania,Australia is the sixth largest country in the World.It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a po