单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达增加细节的技巧13例,作文复习（,1,）,by,双老师,书面表达增加细节的技巧13例作文复习（1）,技巧一：列举具体的实例进行补充说明,例1.我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。,（添加for example）,改造前：,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,改造后：,Weteenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products and save energy.,技巧一：列举具体的实例进行补充说明改造后：Weteenag,例2：我要花一些时间和父母在一起。,（添加-ing表伴随）,改造前：Ill spend some time staying with my parents.,改造后：,Ill spend some time staying with my parents,chatting with them and doing some housework.,例2：我要花一些时间和父母在一起。改造后：Ill spen,例3：我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。,（If possible,.）,改造前：Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.,改造后：,Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible,we can travel together or share traveling experiences.,例3：我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。改造后：Id li,例4：互联网在我们的日常生活当中变得越来越重要。,（not only.but also.）,改造前：The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.,改造后：,The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.Not only can we read news from home and abroad,but also send emails and attend on-line courses.,例4：互联网在我们的日常生活当中变得越来越重要。改造后：Th,技巧二：增添背景信息，如：原因、结果、目的等,例1：我们打算设计一件属于我们班的服装。,（considering）,改造前：We intend to design a uniform suited to our own class.,改造后：,Considering that this activity is meaningful,we intend to design a uniform suited to our own class.,技巧二：增添背景信息，如：原因、结果、目的等改造后：Cons,例2：我计划在一家外贸公司做兼职。,（in order to）,改造前：I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign trade company.,改造后：In order to get some practical experience,I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign trade company.,例2：我计划在一家外贸公司做兼职。改造后：In order,例3：我不知道我的申请书和简历上有没有语法错误或者不当的格式。,（,this is.that),改造前：I dont know if there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in my application and the personal resume.,改造后：,But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume,so I dont know if there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in them.,例3：我不知道我的申请书和简历上有没有语法错误或者不当的格式,例4：首先，参加中文课程很重要。,（because）,改造前：First,it is important to take a Chinese course.,改造后：,First,it is important to take a Chinese course,because youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.,例4：首先，参加中文课程很重要。改造后：First,it,例5：我需要一个好好休息，我也会读点书。,（for表目的）,改造前：I need a good rest and Ill do some reading as well.,改造后：,I need a good rest because I feel tired because of the hard work.Also,Ill do some reading for fun and for knowledge as well.,例5：我需要一个好好休息，我也会读点书。改造后：I need,例6：如果可能的话，我会参加一些社会活动。,（so that引导目的状语）,改造前：If possible,Ill take part in some social activities.,改造后：,If possible,Ill take part in some social activitiesso taht I can know more about the society.,例6：如果可能的话，我会参加一些社会活动。改造后：If po,例7：我们的地球正在面临巨大的威胁。,（with+宾语+宾补）,改造前：Our earth is faced with great threat.,改造后：,With the global climate becoming warmer and warmer,our earth is faced with great threat.,例7：我们的地球正在面临巨大的威胁。改造后：With the,例8：我们也会与他们一同唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏。,（which）,改造前：Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games.,改造后：,Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.,例8：我们也会与他们一同唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏。（which）改,例9：这个活动是一个让我们学生向父母和老师致谢的好机会。,（who）,改造前：This event isa good chance for us students to express ourgratitude to our parents and teachers.,改造后：,This event isa good chance for us students to express ourgratitude to our parents and teacherswho have been bringing up and educating us with great efforts.,例9：这个活动是一个让我们学生向父母和老师致谢的好机会。改造,练习,1.我们应该学会如何与他人相处。,（增加具体实例）,2.一些学生在考试前一晚非常担心考试。（增加结果状语）,3.然而，很多人没有意识到手机的负面影响。（增加with结构）,1.我们应该学会如何与他人相处。,