单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit 1 Friendship,writing,Unit 1 Friendship writing,1,1.Who called me?,2.Why did he call me?,3.What did I ask him to do?,“send me an E-mail to tell me your problem?”,You asked him to send you an E-mail to tell you his problem,.,1.Who called me?“send me an E,2,Mailbox,Mailbox,3,Dear Miss.Chen,I am writing to tell you my problem in the new school.I am not very good at,communicating with,people.Although I try to talk to my classmates,I still find it hard to make good friends with them,.So I feel quite lonely sometimes.I do want to change the situation,but I dont know how.I would be,grateful,if could give me some,advice,.,yours,Xiaodong,Dear Miss.Chen,4,What is Xiaodongs problem?,He is not good at communicating with people and finds it hard to make friends with classmates.,What is Xiaodongs problem?He,5,Lets think about the ways to change the situation.,Brainstorm,Ideas,Why,1 to go and talk to people standing on their own,1 That person may be lonely too.You two may become friends.,2 to ask people their likes and dislikes,2 to find classmates with the same interests,3 3,Lets think about the ways to,6,How to make suggestions,Brainstorm,Why not?You should Youd better How about/What about?It would be a good idea if I suggest.My suggestion is,If you do this,In this way/This way/That way,By doing this,Then,How to make suggestionsBrainst,7,Dear Xiaodong,change if you take my advice.,I am sorry to know that you are,having trouble in making friends.,However,the situation is easy to,Here are some tips,to help you:,First,why not?If you do this,.,Second/Secondly,you can/should Then/That way,.,Thirdly/Finally,it would be a good idea if By doing this,Yours,Cherry,Writing,I hope you will find these ideas useful.I am looking forward to hearing from you.,Dear Xiaodong,change if you t,8,Check&improve,Form of the letter,Tense,Sentence structure,Subject-verbAgreement,Word(spelling)&Expression,Punctuation,Check&improveForm of the let,9,Homework,P46 writing taskchoose one and write a short story or explanation about it.,Homework,10,人教版英语必修一friendship写作教学ppt课件,11,Homework,Jenny is a senior school student.Recently she has received many letters from a boy in her class.The boy wants to“make friends”with her.She has no idea how to deal with the matter.,Could you write her a letter to help her do with it properly?,Homework Jenny is a senior s,12,Goodbye!,Goodbye!,13,Redundancy:,When I got home,I,fed,the cats,then I,fed,the rabbits and birds,then I,fed,the fish,and finally I,fed,the dog.,Repetition:,Any,right that is available to,any,single man should be available to,any,woman,anywhere,in the world at,any,tim,e.,Redundancy:Repetition:,14,I had,got,a cold.So,as soon as I,got,home and,got,upstairs,I,got,changed out of my wet clothes and,got,some medicine out of the,cupboard,(橱柜).,You are the,wrong,person for the,wrong,job at the,wrong,time.,(G.W.Bush),I had got a cold.So,as soon,15,Dear Xiaodong,Some people like talking with others,but some people are shy.If you fall into the second group,it can be hard to make friends.But you can change the situation.,What are you interested in?If you like basketball,for example,you could talk with some of your classmates who like basketball.The easiest way to start talking to people to find something you have in common.,If you are standing beside a group of your classmates,join their discussion if you,Dear Xiaodong,16,know something about the subject they are discussing.But if you dont,you shouldnt feel afraid to say,for example,“That sounds interesting,what is it about?”Once you start talking to one person,it will get easier to talk to others.,Find one person you have something in common with,and once you become friends with him,his friends will start talking to you too.,Good luck!,Yours sincerely,Mr.Zhang,know something about the su,17,