单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/5/22,#,话题写作,(,三,),休闲活动,第三篇话题写作妙解,话题写作(三)第三篇话题写作妙解,1,【,典型例题,】,2019,包头,假定你是李华,请给你的笔友,Alan,写一封邮件,告诉他今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩,并制定了旅行计划,你想征求他的意见,同时询问他是否可以接机。,邮件还应包括以下内容,:,典例分析,Your arrival time,10:30 a.m.,July 2,Your travel plan,go to a concert,go camping,Means of transport(,交通方式,)during your visit,by bike,by bus,【典型例题】2019包头典例分析Your arriva,一、审,圈要点、定时态、定人称,假定你是李华,请给你的笔友,Alan,写一封邮件,告诉他,今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩,并,制定了旅行计划,你想,征求他的意见,同时,询问他是否可以接机,。,邮件还应包括以下内容,:,Your arrival time,10:30 a.m.,July 2,Your travel plan,go to a concert,go camping,Means of transport(,交通方式,)during your visit,by bike,by bus,一、审圈要点、定时态、定人称Your arrival t,二、列,列短语,尽可能为习惯用语,go to your city to travel this summer vacation,arrive at 10:30 a.m.,on July 2,meet me at the airport,made a travel plan,go to a concert,go camping,visiting some places of interest,going by air or by train during my visit,please give me some advice,二、列列短语,尽可能为习惯用语,三、加,定人称,(,第一人称和第二人称,),、定时态,(,一般将来时,),形成句子,(,因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语,),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。,Dear Alan,How is it going?,Im going to your city to travel this summer vacation.,I will arrive at 10:30 a.m,on July 2.,Can you meet me at the airport?,I have made a travel plan.,I will go to a concert.,三、加定人称(第一人称和第二人称)、定时态(一般将来时),I will go camping.,Im going to visit some places of interest.,I dont know if Im going by air or by train during my visit.,Please give me some advice.,四、连,添加过渡句、连接词,;,上下文要连贯,保证基础平均分,上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序,(,时间或空间,),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。,I will go camping.,Dear Alan,How is it going?,Im going to your city to travel this summer vacation.And I will arrive at 10:30 a.m.,on July 2.Can you meet me at the airport?At the same time,I have made a travel plan.Firstly,I will go to a concert.Then I plan to go camping.Also,Im going to visit some places of interest.But I dont know if Im going by air or by train during my visit.Please give me some advice.,Dear Alan,Im sure I will have an unforgettable trip with your help.,Yours,Li Hua,五、美,表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活,避免,Chinglish,现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。,Im sure I will have an unforg,及时体验,Dear Alan,How is it going?,基础句,Im going to your city to travel this summer vacation.,升格句,Im thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation.,发展句,Because its such a beautiful place that,I dream for a long time.,基础句,And I will arrive at 10:30 a.m.,on July 2.Can you meet me at the airport?,升格句,I wonder if you will meet me at the airport at 10:30 a.m.,on July 2 since its my first time to visit there.,At the same time,I have made a travel plan.,及时体验,基础句,Firstly,I will go to a concert.Then I plan to go camping.Also,Im going to visit some places of interest.,升格句,Including enjoying music at a concert,going camping and visiting some places of interest.,基础句,But I dont know if Im going by air or by train during my visit.,基础句,Please give me some advice.,升格句,Would you please give me some advice?Either traveling by bike or by bus would suit me fine.,Im sure I will have an unforgettable trip with your help.,发展句,Do you have any plans for the coming vacation?,基础句Firstly,I will go to a con,六、查,典型病例,(,参见话题一,),七、洁,书写定天下,!,Dear Alan,How is it going?,Im thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation,because its such a beautiful place that I dream for a long time.I wonder if you will meet me at the airport at 10:30 a.m.,on July 2 since its my first time to visit there.Besides,I have made a travel plan,including enjoying music at a concert,going camping and visiting some places of interest.,六、查典型病例(参见话题一),Would you please give me some advice?Either traveling by bike or by bus would suit me fine.Im sure I will have an unforgettable trip with your help.Do you have any plans for the coming vacation?,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,Would you please give me some,2019,泰州,为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。,活动内容,1.,上午游览人民公园,:,欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念,;,2.,下午参观市民广场,:,观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡,70,年巨变。,你的感想,1.,师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助,;,2.,倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习,报效祖国,;,3.,(,考生自己发挥,),。,实战演练,2019泰州为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一,要求,1.,词数,:100,左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数,;,2.,所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥,;,3.,不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。,参考词汇,市民广场,Civic Square,In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life,our school organized a social practice activity last weekend.All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it._,要求,One,possible,version,:,In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life,our school organized a social practice activity last weekend.All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it.We are all happy to have a chance to know more about our city.Everyone had a meaningful day.,In the morning,we visited Peoples Park in our city.We enjoyed the beautiful view there.Moreover,we had a song and dance party.Most of us took a lot of photos to remember the exciting moments.,One possible version:,