,Unit 7 Charity work,Task,译林版八年级下册 英语,She did _.,charity work,Name:,Han Hong,Country:,China,Family:,live with grandma,not rich,In the past:,used to be a singer,felt lonely after,her grandma died,found life meaningless,wanted to do nothing,One day:,earthquake happened in Wenchuan,not only,donated money to Wenchuan but also went,there to help people there many times,Now:,make up her mind to,set up charity to help,people in need,donate many medical things and,money to people in Wuhan,Future:,make her charity open and clear,help more,people in need,What was Dianas job?,She was a,secretary,of a company.,sekrtri,Which d,id,Diana like better,travelling by car or by plane?,By car.Because she,was afraid of,travelling by plane.,Something about ORBIS.,Which programme was she watching?,So she,trained as,a nurse.,What did she want to do after watching the programme?,She wanted to join ORBIS.,How does she work for ORBIS?,Maybe she has to travel a lot by plane because OBIS is a flying eye hospital.Maybe,What does Diana think of her new life?,She enjoys her new life very much because she can help people see again.,What do you think of her future life?,Name:,Country:,Family:,In the past:,One day:,Now:,Future:,Diana,?,America,?,live alone,a secretary of a company,lived in a comfortable flat,drove to work,was afraid of flying,seldom travelled by plane,saw a TV programme about ORBIS,learnt about the flying eye hospital,wanted to help people with eye problems,more details,more details,work for ORBIS,travel a lot,get used to travelling by plane,more details,enjoy her work,be happy to help people see again,find her life more meaningful,more details,Amy wrote a report on Diana and her charity work.Read Amys report and,answer some questions,.,Paragraph 1:,What was Dianas life like in the past?,Paragraph 2:,Paragraph 3:,Paragraph 4:,What changed Dianas life?,What is she getting used to now?,What does Diana think about her new life?,Main idea of each paragraph,details,Topic sentence of each para,life in the past,changes,life at present,feelings,work,lifestyle,way of travelling,11/16/2024,Write step-by-step,Choose a topic,Collect details,Write a draft,：,a beginning+a middle+an ending,Improve your writing,Check for mistakes,Write a final copy,How to write?,Choose a topic:A report on the work of UNICEF,She used to work on the farm.,He came and learnt about the conditions of the local people.,She entered a school.,She hopes to become a teacher.,She can read and write.,She couldnt,read or write.,Collect details,：,Write a draft,Beginning,Middle,Ending,Opening sentences,In the past,she.,One day,.,Now,she.,Closing sentences,She hopes to become a teacher.,Mandeep.,Details,Write a draft,Mandeep is a girl from India.She,used to,work on the farm all day.Her family had many children.She was very poor.She could not read or write.,One day,a UNICEF offficer came to Mandeeps village and learnt about the conditions of the local people.,He wanted all the children in the village to learn to read.,Three weeks later,Mandeep entered a school.,Now,she can read and write.She goes to school every day.,She enjoys school and is grateful to UNICEF.,Improve your writing,Mandeep is a girl from India.She,used to,work on the farm all day.Her family had many children.She was very poor.She could not read or write.,One day,a UNICEF offficer came to Mandeeps village and learnt about the conditions of the local people.,He wanted all the children in the village to learn to read.,Three weeks later,Mandeep entered a school.,Now,she can read and write.She goes to school every day.,She enjoys school and is grateful to UNICEF.,She really wanted to change but she didnt know how.,She says that she hopes to become a teacher and help more poor children in the future.,Its important for children to receive education.,Transition,words help connect events.,First,then,next,Before,after,finally,Now,then,soon,As soon as,at last,in the end.,Check for mistakes,Grammar mistakes,Capitalization,Punctuation,Spelling,Mandeep is a girl from India.She was used to work on the farm all day.Her family had many children.She was very poor.She could not read or write.,One day,unicef officer came to Mandeeps village and learnt about the conditions of the local people.He wanted all the children in the village to learn to read.,Three weeks later.Mandeep entered a school.Now she can read and write.She goes to school every day.She enjoys school and is greatful to UNICEF.,Write a final copy,Mandeep is a girl from India.She used to work on the farm all day.Her family had many children.She was very poor.She could not read or write.,One day,a UNICEF offficer came to Mandeeps village and learnt about the conditions of the local people.,He wanted all the children in the village to learn to read.,Three weeks later,Mandeep entered a school.Now she can read and write.She goes to school every day.,She enjoys school and is grateful to UNICEF.,She really wanted to change but she didnt know how.,She says that she hopes