,返回目录,话题,2,居住环境,返回目录,话题,2,居住环境,*,*,命题探索,三阶攻关,目录,写作练兵,话题,2,居住环境,话题思维导图,命题探索三阶攻关目录写作练兵话题2 居住环境话题思维导图,话题思维导图,话题思维导图,命题探索,分析福建近7年中考书面表达可知，关于“居住环境”相关的话题共考查过3次。考查角度均为：,介绍家乡基本情况,。主要涉及：(1)地方或场所介绍：如2017年福建介绍福建省情，2016莆田介绍莆田地方信息；(2)介绍家乡著名景点或景观：如2014福州介绍福州三坊七巷。,分析全国中考真题可知，也会从“,介绍居住环境的变化,”和“,介绍城乡生活异同,”这两个角度进行命题。,命题探索 分析福建近7年中考书面表达可知，关于“居,典例剖析,(2017,福建,),你的美国朋友,John,计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在,QQ,中给他留言，,介绍并推荐你的家乡福建,，,词数,80,左右。,审主题：,介绍家乡福建,审人称：第三人称,审时态：一般现在时,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,典例剖析 (2017福建)你的美国朋友John计划暑假,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,一二,要求：,1.,必须包,含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；,2.,意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；,3.,请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,要求：一二,Hi,John,I,m glad to hear that you,re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation.I,d like to invite you to my hometown Fujuan for a visit.,Fujian lies _,_,I,m looking forward to meeting you!,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,Hi,John,Im glad to hear,1,角度,介绍家乡基本情况,好句范例,1.Fujian Province,lies,in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city.,2.Xiamen is my hometown,where,I was born and grew up.,3.The,places of interest,like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island,are well worth,visiting.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,1角度介绍家乡基本情况好句范例1.Fujian Provi,4.There are,various of,delicious food in Fujian,such as,spring rolls,Fuzhou fish balls and so on.,5.,Surrounded by,mountains on three sides,the small village faces a clear river on the east.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,4.There are various of delici,句 子 仿 写,1.厦门位于福建省的东南部。,_,2.厦门有许多名胜古迹，它们值得参观。,_,Xiamen lies in the southeast of Fujian Province.,There are many places of interest in Xiamen,and they are worth visiting.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,句 子 仿 写 1.厦门位于福建省的东南部。X,3.此外，您还可以品尝各种美味的食物，如虾面、花生汤等等。,_,_,4.厦门是一个全年气候宜人的好地方。,_,Besides,you can taste various kinds of delicious food,such as shrimp noodles,peanut soup and so on.,Xiamen is a good place where the climate is good all year round.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,3.此外，您还可以品尝各种美味的食物，如虾面、花生汤等等。,2,角度,介绍居住环境及变化,6.The park is,the best place,on weekends,because,almost everyone goes there to see the street performers.,7.,About thirty years ago,it was a small village,but today it is a very big city.,8.It is,getting bigger and busier,.The streets are,wider and cleaner,.,9.Some people think life in the past was simpler and healthier than today.,More wealth sometimes means less health,.,好句范例,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,2角度介绍居住环境及变化6.The park is the,句 子 仿 写,5.图书馆是镇上最好的地方，因为那里有很多书。,_,_,6.大约二十年前我的家乡还是个小镇，但是今天已经变成了一座大城市。,_,_,The library is the best place in the town,because there are a lot of books.,About twenty years ago,my hometown was a small town,but today it has become a big city.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,句 子 仿 写 5.图书馆是镇上最好的地方，因为,7.我的家乡正在变得更加美丽和干净。,_,8.总体而言，我认为今天的生活更好了。我们吃得更好，活得更长久。_,My hometown is getting more beautiful and cleaner.,Generally speaking,I think life is better today.We eat better and,we live longer.,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,7.我的家乡正在变得更加美丽和干净。My hometown,速记,俗语谚语,10.There is no place like home./East or West,home is best.金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。,11.A good neighbor is better than a brother in the next village.远亲不如近邻。,一,阶,审,好,题,二,阶,写,好,句,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,速记俗语谚语10.There is no place li,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,练语段,语 段 练 习,1,介绍家乡基本情况,Fujian Province _(地理位置).It is both modern and beautiful.It is popular with tourists _,_,_(介绍受欢迎的原因).It,s a beautiful place with many places of interest,_(列举名胜古迹).Many schools,hospitals,cinemas and theaters have sprung,lies in the southeast of China,not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air,such as Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island and so on,一二练语段语 段 练 习 1介绍家乡基本情况 F,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,up one after another.The life of the people has greatly improved.I love my hometown and its people.They are,_,_,_,_(介绍当地人的品格).,working hard so,as to make it still richer and more beautiful,一二up one after another.The li,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,语 段 练 习,2,介绍居住环境及变化,Five years ago,people in my hometown _(以前的生活条件).The traffic here _(以前的交通).The children _(以前的上学条件).,lived a poor life,was inconvenient,walked a long way to go to school,一二语 段 练 习 2介绍居住环境及变化 Fiv,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,Today,I see a lot of changes in my hometown.People _(现在的生活条件).A lot of them live in the buildings.They have mobile phones and TVs.They have built a new school and children _(现在的上学条件).They also have free lunch._(现在的交通条件)also have come through the village.The traffic is very convenient now.,live a rich life,go to school for free,Wide roads,一二 Today,I see a lot of ch,一,阶,审,好,题,三,阶,练,语,段,&,成,篇,章,二,阶,写,好,句,成篇章,（针对,“,典例剖析,”,的优秀范文）,Hi,John,Im glad to hear that youre planning to travel around China during the summer vacation.Id like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.,Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city,.It has a population of over 38 million.,Because of the nice environment,its known