单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,必修1,必修一,Unit 1 Friendship,Writing,如何写建议信,how to write,letters of advice,必修1必修一,1,如何写建议信,how to write,letters of advice,如何写建议信,2,写作三步曲,说明写信目的提出建议以及改进措施，忠告表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。,注意！,语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。,写作三步曲说明写信目的提出建议以及改进措施，忠告表达希望,3,建议信,三段式：,第一段：点明主题,第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由,（是什么，为什么，怎么样）,第三段：总结全文，表明希望,建议信三段式：,4,适当运用模板,适当运用模板,5,Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.,In your letter,you said+你碰到的问题.,My suggestions are as follows.,Firstly,_,because_.,Secondly,you should_,because_.,Thirdly,youd better,_.,Only in this way can you,_.,Whats more,_.,I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.,Best wishes.,Yours,xxx,Dear Li Hua,6,建议信重点,第二段：,说明,建议的内容,；（是什么）,提出具体建议的,原因,；（为什么）,指出采纳建议的,益处,。（怎么样）,注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,建议信重点第二段：,7,Opening sentences 开头句,I am very glad to hear from you.,Thank you for your letter.,3.You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some suggestions.,4.I am writing in reply to,5.I am sorry to hear that,Opening sentences 开头句 I am ve,8,表示,建议,的句子,You should/must,Dont,What/How about,trying a new method?,Why not,find a new way?,Youd better,change your former plan.,Id like to suggest,you make a new plan.,If I were you,I would,Id like to suggest,I strongly recommend,You might as well,表示建议的句子,9,学会用,not only but also,表示并列含义,亲爱的朋友们，去参加课外活动吧，这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩，还会改善你的学习。,Dear friends,please,take part in,after-class activities,which,will,not only,make your school like colorful,but also,improve your learning.,学会用not only but also表示并列含义,10,Closing sentences 结束语,I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful.,2.At last,I hope I will be your best friends forever!Good luck to you!,3.Lets keep in touch.I do hope to hear good news from you.,Closing sentences 结束语 I hope y,11,Read Xiao Dongs letter on page 7 and answer:What is Xiao Dongs problem?,Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are required to do.,Hes not good at communicating with people.He finds it hard to make friends with his classmates.,I Lead in,Read Xiao Dongs letter on pag,12,To ask people their likes and dislikes,To join in discussions,To show interest in others ideas,To share his feelings with others,II Brainstorming,Your advice for Xiao Dong,To ask people their likes and,13,How to write,a letter of advice,Step,What should be written,Part I,Part II,Part III,Presenting the problem,Proposing the solution,Conclusion,How to writea letter of advice,14,Dear Xiaodong,Im sorry you are having trouble in making,friends.However,the situation is easy to change,if you take my advice.Here are some tips to,help you:,First,why not?If you do this,Secondly,you should/can,Then/That way,Thirdly,it would be a good,idea if By doing this,I hope you will find these ideas useful.,Yours,Miss Wang,Outlining,Dear Xiaodong,Outlining,15,建议信重点,第二段：,说明,建议的内容,；（是什么）,提出具体建议的,原因,；（为什么）,指出采纳建议的,益处,。（怎么样）,注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,建议信重点第二段：,16,Firstly,why not go and talk to people standing alone.I agree that this is difficult but that student may be lonely too,If you do this,Im sure you will soon have new friends.,Secondly,you should begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,That way,you will soon find people with the same interests,because that is a good way to find new friends.,Thirdly,it would be a goos idea if you try to join in a discussion.,You may feel that is right.By doing this,you are letting people know how friendly you are.So there should be no problem.It should provide you with some new friends.,17,即时训练,你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。,1.娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。,2.最好在学生的课余时间开放。,3.尽量不要收费。,4.,即时训练你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休,18,写作分析：,第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，想提建议。,第二段：建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。,第三段：建议课余时间开放，能使其得到充分利用。,第四段：免费开放，有些学生经济困难。,第五段：简单总结。,写作分析：第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，想提建议。,19,Dear Mr.President,Its come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisure center.Im writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions.,Firstly,Id like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court.I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton.,Secondly,could the center open in our spare time?If so,we will have enough time to make full use of it.,Thirdly,we will be more than happy if the center is free.As we all know,not every student can afford the extra expense.,Thank you for reading my letter.I hope you will consider my suggestions.If the center is built,it will greatly enhance student life here on campus.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,范文,Dear Mr.President,范文,20,建议信模版,Dear _,You have asked me for my advice with regard to(关于)_,and I will try to make some conductive(建设性的)suggestions here.,In my opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建议的内容).,I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.,Good Luck wit