单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Proof Reading,短文改错,Proof Reading 短文改错,1,Learning Objectives,After this period,youll be able to:,know the steps of correcting a composition.,know the common types of mistakes appeared in proofreading.,be sensitive to these kinds of mistakes while correcting a composition.,Learning ObjectivesAfter this,2,How to correct a passage,下面短文中有,10,处,语言错误。请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。,增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在,其下面,写上该加的词。,删除 把多余的词用斜线（,）划掉。,修改 在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词,下面,写上修改后的词。,注意：,1,、每处错误及其修改均,仅限一词,。,2,、只允许修改,10,处，多者（丛第,11,处起）不计分,The rules,How to correct a passage下面短文中有,3,I like playing piano.,I can,return to,home,now.,I major at accounting.,the,in,I like playing piano.thein,4,Steps of correcting a composition:,1.,g,o through,.,for a general idea,.,2.sentence by sentence,.,for details,3.check,.,for perfection,Steps of correcting a composit,5,Our English teacher begin to teach us,last year.She have been teaching,English for more than twenty year.,She likes we,and she is very,strict in all of us.Although she is,a bit old and not so beautifully,but we consider her as our mother.,She is really good teacher.,We loved her very much.We,re,sure we,ll get in well with each other,began,has,years,us,with,beautiful,a,on,cooperation,love,Our English teacher begin to t,6,1.,通读全文，把握大意,2.,细读全文，仔细斟酌,3.,再读全文,复核审查,The method of correcting,改明显错误,对照,考点,，排除法,Note,:,1.通读全文，把握大意2.细读全文，仔细斟酌3.再读全文,复,7,例题,错误点归纳,动词时态,主谓一致,名词,代词,介词,形、副,连词,冠词,动词,习惯用法,例题错误点归纳动词时态主谓一致名词代词介词形、副连词冠词动词,8,动词形，名词数，,还要注意形和副；,非谓语，细辨别，,代词格，细领悟；,介词短语常常考，,习惯用法要记住；,句子成分多分析，,逻辑错误须关注，,冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,动词形，名词数，短文改错口诀：,9,一、动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的,时态,和,语态,错误，以及,主、谓不一致,的错误。,四川卷：,When he gets home,he saw the animal waiting at the door,still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket.,天津卷：,In Grade Eight I took physics.In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.,got,got,一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误,10,安徽卷：,Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.,安徽卷：,You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers,magazines and the other books,but you are not permit to take them out.,wishes,permitted,Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.,likes,安徽卷：wishespermittedNot only th,11,二、名词数,指,名词单、复数形式,的用法错误。,陕西卷：,Personally,I found most,lesson rather uninteresting.,浙江卷：,A nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on evenlope.The pay were 10 cents per envelope.,lessons,evenlopes,二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。陕西卷：,12,三、还要注意形和副,注意,形容词和副词,在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。,浙江卷：,I got to the finishing line first.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.,福建卷：,We can hear birds singing happy all around.,proud,happily,三、还要注意形和副 注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用,13,四、非谓语，细辨别,这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有,现在分词、过去分词，动名词,和,不定式,错误。,浙江卷：,I could not to run very fast and,fell behind.,宁夏卷：,Li Meng came see me every,day.,to,四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一,14,辽宁卷：,We all enjoyed this precious day greatly,remember the time we spent together and the people we were familiar with.,remembering,辽宁卷：remembering,15,五,、,代词,格，,细领悟,五、代词格，细领悟,16,全国,II,：,I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement,.,陕西：,Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!,our,myself,全国II：ourmyself,17,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：,多词、少词和搭配错误。,in Sunday afternoon,catch a sight of,lose my heart,in hurry,a,on,六、介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形,18,七、句子成分多分析,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,2008,年安徽卷,:,She looked at me and started to laugh.,“,How are you laughing?,”,I asked.,天津卷：,I was lucky enough to have a,teacher which didn,t take my,bad grades as a judgement of,my abilities,but,who/that,Why,七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词,19,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的,张冠李戴,。,NMET 2005:,Some students may also save up for our college or future use.,their,For example,when he bought a chocolate cake,he put them in a secret place that I couldn t find.,it,八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相,20,常考的错误形式有：,连词,but,however,and,or,because,so,when,before,after,的用法错误，以及,冠词,的用法错误等。,全国,II,：,I meant to write long letter and tell,you all the things Im doing at the,school,四川卷：,An Australian farmer found the,kangaroo caught in the fence around his,farms.,a,a,九、冠词、连词常光顾,常考的错误形式有：连词but,however,and,21,浙江卷：,Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.,辽宁卷：,She always made sure that our homework was finished on time,but she marked strictly on our actual performance.,when,and,浙江卷：Today I was having a PE le,22,改错命题,统计,简便记法：,一增一减八修改,改错命题统计简便记法：一增一减八修改,23,1.,通读全文，把握大意,2.,细读全文，仔细斟酌,3.,再读全文,复核审查,The method of correcting,改明显错误,对照,考点,，排除法,是否满足“一增一减八修改”，,题量分布是否符合命题规律,Note,:,1.通读全文，把握大意2.细读全文，仔细斟酌3.再读全文,复,24,Consolidation,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sitting.room.Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light.The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment.There was a fire burning in the fire place,but the