单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,The background of Terri Schiavo case,The background of Terri Schiav,The Terri Schiavo case is so far,the most famous and notorious(,臭名昭著,)end-of-life case of the 21,st,century.,The Terri Schiavo case is so,Should people in comas be kept on life support machines?,Should people in comas be kept,Para A:,Recently,an American woman was taken off her life support machine after 15 years in coma.And this aroused a heated debate on whether people in comas should be kept on life support machines.,introduction of the topic,Para A:introduction of the top,Para B:,They know:,(1)what might cause comas,(2)the state of coma patients,They dont fully understand:,comas,the process of recovery,what doctors know about and dont know about comas,Coma patients often seem to be asleep all the time.Although some may seem to be“awake”at times,their brain remains unconscious and cannot be woken up.,The doctors dont fully understand comas and the process of recovery,so they cant cure the disease.,Para B:what doctors know about,Para C,chances of recovery,The chances of recovery are really low.Even though the patients may return to normal,they will suffer from loss of memory or other brain function.In some severe cases,even with modern treatment,the patients may never return to normal.,Para Cchances of recoveryThe c,Para D,conclusion,Thinking:,Losing their beloved one,Terris parents and friends may feel terrible pain.,There are some ones who are against the issue.They may claim that life is,sacred,which no one has the right to end.,Para D conclusionThinking:,Recently,an American woman was taken off life support machine after 15 years in coma.And this aroused a heated debate on whether people in comas should be kept on life support machines.,_,coma patients often seem to be asleep all the time.Although some may seem to be“awake”at times,their brain remains unconscious and cannot be woken up.,_,the doctors dont fully understand comas and the process of recovery,so they cant cure the disease.The chances of recovery are really low._,even though the patients may return to normal,they will suffer from loss of memory or other brain function.In some severe cases,even with modern treatment,the patients may never return to normal.,_,losing their beloved one,Terris parents and friends may feel terrible pain and misery.There are some ones who are against the issue.They may claim that life is sacred,which no one has the right to end.,_ people in comas should be taken off their life support machines.,The layout(structure)of a discursive essay,First of all,Next,Whats worse,However,All things considered,I believe that,Introduction,A list of arguments“for”,A list of arguments“against”,Conclusion,A list of arguments“against”,A list of arguments“for”,Recently,an American woma,Taken from“News Express”,Taken from“News Express”,In the U.S.A,the state of New Jersey has put a ban on the use of mobile phones in public.,In the U.S.A,the state of New,Should the use of mobile phones in public be forbidden?,Para 1:Introduction,Para 2:A list of arguments“for”,(A list of arguments“against”),Para 3:A list of arguments“against”,(A list of arguments“for”),Para 4:Conclusion,Layout,Should the use of mobile phone,Para A:Introduction,Recently,_ is becoming a more and more serious problem.The whole world are trying to solve the problem.In the USA,the state of New Jersey even _.And it aroused _.,the use of mobile phones/phubbing,put a ban on the use of mobile phones in public,a heated debate,Para A:IntroductionRecently,A list of arguments“for”/“against”,For,Against,1.,2.,3.,1.,2.,3.,A list of arguments“for”/“a,Conjunction words or phrases,even though,although,however,therefore,while,above all,next,then,whats worse,whats more,all things considered,Conjunction words or phrasesev,Checking in groups:,Layout:,How well does your essay flow?Look at the paragraphs again and check the structure of your argument.,Style:,Have you used words or expressions that are too colloquial(,口语化的,)?If so,try to express the same ideas in a more formal way.,Linkers:,Have you used linkers and linking expressions?Can you add any linkers to join sentences or link ideas?,Grammar and spelling:,Check your essay for mistakes of grammar and spelling.,Checking in groups:,“We Chat”Group,“We Chat”Group,Show Zone in the Book Bar,Show Zone in the Book Bar,Thank you!,Thank you!,