单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How to improve a letter?,How to improve a letter?,全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准,1.,篇幅：,词数80,120,否则,减去2分。,2.内容：,内容要点,齐全,注意,词汇,的数量,语法结构准确性,上下文的连贯性。,3.拼写与标点符号准确，,不影响,交际,。,4.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准1.篇幅：词数80 12,书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整,审题较认真，写作内容基本覆盖文章信息点,Shortcomings:,Good points,语言需要加强，基本表达错误较多。,书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整Shortcom,第二节：书面表达（满分,25,分）,假设你是李华，你为你校校报英文栏目主编外籍教师,Mr.Smith,担任了半年的助理编辑，你现在决定辞去这个职位。请你根据以下内容给他发一封邮件。,1,）告诉他你的决定；,2,）陈述你的理由；,3,）表达你的谢意和歉意。,注意：词数不少于,100,。,_,第二节：书面表达（满分25分）,A good,letter,Content,Mood,Form,Handwriting,Language,A good ContentMoodFormHandwrit,书写有较大进步，,总体来说书写认真，,字迹较工整,Good points,书写有较大进步，Good points,高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课ppt课件,高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课ppt课件,高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课ppt课件,Dear Mr.Smith,，,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Yours sincerely,，,Li Hua,称呼（,Salutation,）,文章一般会给出,正文,(Body of Letter,）,起首语,-,亮明身份，开门见山说意图,(,注意：英文书信不要写一些,hello,hi,之类的问候语,),正文部分，严格按照文章的提纲写,(,注意：如果内容较多，可以考虑分段,),结尾礼词（,Complimentary Close,）,感谢客气不可少，期待回信成老套,签名（,Signature,）,(,文章一般都会给出）,书信写作的格式及其要求：,Dear Mr.Smith，称呼（Salutation）,Organization,Organization,Mood,In a moderate mood!,Content:,Cover all the information,Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.,1,）告诉他你的决定；,2,）陈述你的理由；,3,）表达你的谢意和歉意。,Content:Cover all the informat,开篇要直入主题,开篇要直入主题,高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课ppt课件,Content,内容要完整,注意内容的适当性,Content内容要完整,Focus on“your”feeling,when you want to resign.,Content,内容要适当,Its a chance for you to choose a fresh man,内容要适当Its a chance for you to,Language:,No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes,In accordance with the requirements of the composition,With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns,Language:No chinglish or gramm,Language,单词拼写需要加强：,teach _(p.t),limit _(p.t),write _(-ing),study _(n.),taught,limited,wri,t,ing,study,Language单词拼写需要加强：taughtlimited,I have to quit this job before it and some reasons as follows.,Id like to try my best in this year and gain a satisfied result.,3.,So Im afraid that I havent enough time to be your assistant editor.,4.,.but I have to quit the position for those reasons.Firstly.,5.,I want to learn a various of knowledge.,6.,And its obviously that I can still learn more if I continue to work.,Correct the possible mistakes in the following sentences.,are,satisfying,dont have,the following,variety,obvious,I have to quit this job before,I will never forget the wonderful moments we have worked together.,Ill appreciate it if you could agree my request.,But I supposed to concentrate on my study now.,Correct the possible mistakes in the following sentences.,when,on,am,I will never forget the wonder,好的信件：,Comfortable,读起来舒服,Persuasive,有说服力,好的信件：,Polish the following sentences.,I dont think I can succeed in this job any more.,I am writing to tell you a decision that I have been struggling to make.I have made up my mind to quit my job as your assistant.,Since I am a senior 3 student now,I have only one year left before I graduate and enter the university.,I dont think I can be qualified as your assistant any more.,As,graduating and entering,Polish the following sentences,A.,第五档,(,很好,),：,(21-25,分,),1.,完全完成了试题规定的任务。,2.,覆盖所有内容要点。,3.,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。,4.,语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,;,具备较强的语言运用能力。,5.,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,6.,完全达到了预期的写作目的。,高考作文评分标准,A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)高考作文评分标准,B.,第四档,(,好,),：,(16-20,分,),1.,完全完成了试题规定的任务。,2.,虽漏掉,1,、,2,个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。,3.,应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。,4.,语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。,5.,应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,6.,达到了预期的写作目的。,B.第四档(好)：(16-20分),Comment on the given composition according to what you have learned in the class.,Peer assessment:,Comment on the given compositi,Sample,Dear Mr Smith,Im writing to tell you my decision to quit my job as the assistant editor of the school newspaper.,As you know,I hope to pass the college entrance examination to be held next June,so I will,have to,spend more time studying.,Im afraid I cannot,concentrate on the work any more.,SampleDear Mr Smith,Sample,Having worked as the assistant editor for half a year,Ive learned a lot from you-not only English but also the attitude towards work.,I find it hard to convey my gratitude in words.,Thank you very much.,I am very sorry for,making the decision and apologize to you for the inconvenience I might cause to your work.,Yours.,Li Hua,Sample Having worked as the,Outstanding,works:,Outstanding,Outstanding,works:,Outstanding,Assignment,小黄皮Page,24,书面表达。,Assignment小黄皮Page 24书面表达。,Thank you!,Thank you!,