单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达系列讲练,之,赢取高分策略,高考英语作文常用连接词,书面表达系列讲练,NMET,对书面表达的要求,要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇,100,个单词左右的短文 情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。,本部分满分,25/30,分，所需时间约为,30,分钟。,NMET对书面表达的要求 要求考生根据所给情景，用英,NMET,书面表达评分原则,1,、先根据文章的内容和语言初步,确定档次,。,第五档,.2125,分,第四档,.1620,分,第三档,.1115,分,第二档,.610,分,第一档,.15,分,0,分,NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,2,、主要内容：,内容要点；,词汇和语法的数量和准确性；,上下文的连贯；,语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：应用了较多的语法,3,、,拼写和标点,是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的,4,、词数,少于,80,和,多于,120,的，从总分中减去,2,分。,5,、如,书写较差,，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.,覆盖了所有的,要点,2.,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,3.,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有,书面表达如何写？,五个步骤,1,、审题,文字信息,图画信息,题材、人称、时态、要点,2,、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3,、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。,4,联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾,语篇衔接,5,、检查修改，规范抄写,书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading,点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性,2.Body,中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending,小结；呼应主题,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading,技 巧,1.,使用较高级的词汇,3.,使用恰当的连接词,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,2.,使用较丰富的句式,技 巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接,1.,Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.,2.We all,think he is a great man,.,3.,Suddenly I thought out a good idea,.,4.,The students there neednt pay for their books,.,5.,As a result the plan was a failure,.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all,think highly of him,.,A good idea occurred to me.,/A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,1.Because the weather was goo,6.,When she heard he had died,she went pale with sorrow.,7.She went to Austria,in order to study music,.,8.,When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.,9.,In our school,there are twenty-six classrooms,.,10.,You can find my house easily,.,She went to Austria,for the purpose of studying music.,At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.,The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,6.When she heard he had died,丰富的句式：,(,常用到的句型结构）,利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，,能增加文章的文采。,1.,感叹句,e.g.,How,happy I was,when I,received your letter!,What,a kind boy,he is!,How,disappointed,he was!,2.,强调句,e.g.,It was,this young boy,that,helped the old granny.,I,do,hope you can come if,possible.,丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）,3,、倒装句,e.g.,Only,in this way can you,solve this problem.,There,comes the police car,.,Hardly,had,they got to the station,when,they met the young man.,4,、省略句,e.g.They read,while,walking or,riding on a bus.,Come to me,if,necessary.,5,、,with,短语,e.g.I saw a young lady walking,slowly in the street,with,a,handbag in her hand.,3、倒装句 e.g.Only in this wa,6,、定语从句,e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes,should be a place,where,we can,find much useful information.,Lets come to the main teaching,building,at the back of,which,stands,the school library.,7,、各种名词性从句,e.g.,Thats,what,I should do.,We should do a favour to,whoever,needs help at present.,6、定语从句 e.g.In my opinion,c,8,、各种状语从句,e.g.,Time passed quickly,before,we knew it.,The moment,we reached the farm,we,got down to harvesting.,So long as,we work harder at our lessons,well catch up sooner or later.,Do call me before hand,so that,I can meet,you at the airport.,They had to wait,because,the rain was,getting more and more heavily.,8、各种状语从句 e.g.,1 When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.,（使用,V-ing,形式）,.,2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.,（使用名词性从句）,3.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(,使用倒装句,),4.He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),5.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(,用虚拟语气）,On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.,What,surprises him,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,It was,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,that,he knew what had happened.,I,couldnt have passed,the physics exam,but for,your help.,1 When he arrives,please give,6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(,使用过去分词,),7.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(,使用,V-ing,形式,),8.I wont believe what he says.,（使用状语从句）,9,.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.,（用并列句）,10,He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,(,使用倒装句,),No sooner had he come,back from Beijing,than,he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,Study hard,and,youll make rapid progress.,6.She walked out of the lab a,高考大纲中常用的,连接词,1.,表示递进,;,在同一话题上补充内容,另外，还有,：,what is more;besides;,also;moreover;in addition,2.,表示转折关系,但是，然而，相反,：,but;however;yet;,instead;on the other hand;,on the contrary.,高考大纲中常用的连接词,每个时代，都悄悄犒赏会学习的人,触新的教材相信不管是对于同学自己而言还是对于家长朋友们而言，可能都还需要一定的时间去适应，但学习