单击此处编辑母版标题样式,编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,江苏省义务教育教科书,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Welcome to our class!,Welcome to our class!,1,Taught by Gu Guangcai,9A Unit 4 Task,The person who has influenced me most,江苏省义务教育教科书,Taught by Gu Guangcai 9A Unit,Influence,our country,Free talk,Influence our countryFree talk,Influence,our life,Free talk,Influence our lifeFree talk,Name:Spud Webb,Although,he was very short,he proved that size and body type,do not matter.,He has,influenced,a lot of young people.,hard-working,Personality:,never give up,Influence,our spirit,Free talk,Name:Spud WebbAlth,Common people,Great people influence us a lot.,Common peopleGreat people infl,Who has influenced the writer most?,How old is her father?,What is her father like?,What does the writer think of him?,Her father.,He is in his fift,ies,.,He is kind and helpful.,Listen and answer,He has a heart full of love.,Who has influenced the write,Read for details,age,In his_,working place,A_factory,1.My father has always been_,_,_.,2.He gave our TV to a family who could not_,_,_one.,3.He _ for the children who have lost their parents.,4._he has some money left,he gives it to someone _,_.,5.He has _ many times since 1990.,6.He has donated_,_,_ to people with _,_,_.,7.To my _,_,_,he has decided to donate his,_,_ for _,_,_after his _.,He has a heart full of _,.,fifties,local,kind and helpful,afford,cares,Whenever,in,need,donated blood,blood cells,blood cancer,body,surprise,love,medical research,in ones twenties/thirties/forties/,血细胞,血癌；白血病,医学研究,Para1,Para 2-3,Para 4,死亡,death,Read for detailsageIn his_,Main idea of each paragraph,age,In his_,working place,A_factory,1.My father has always been_,_,_.,2.He gave our TV to a family who could not_,_,_one.,3.He _ for the children who have lost their parents.,4._he has some money left,he gives it to someone _,_.,5.He has _ many times since 1990.,6.He has donated_,_,_ to people with _,_,_.,7.To my _,_,_,he has decided to donate his,_,_ for _,_,_after death.,He has a heart full of _,.,General information,Personality&,Examples,Opinions,fifties,local,kind and helpful,afford,cares,Whenever,in,need,donated blood,blood cells,blood cancer,body,surprise,love,medical research,Para1,Para 2-3,Para 4,Main idea of each paragraphage,be,ready,to,help anyone,donate blood and blood cells,have a heart full of love,give TV to,care for children/,give money to,decide to donate his body for medical research after his death,Use,examples,to,support,the main idea!,be ready to help anyonedonate,general information about the person,personality&examples,your opinion about the person,not anything unusual until,work in a local factory,in his fifties,kind,helpful,give money to,care for children,TV,donate blood and blood cells,decide to donate his body for medical research after his death,a heart full of love,P1,P4,P23,Pre-writing:,1.Introduction,3.Conclusion,2.Main Body,general information about the,牛津英语译林版9A-Unit4Task公开课课件,人物,方敬,基本信息,连云港市赣榆人，,80,多岁，退休教师,性格,和蔼、乐于助人、关心儿童、一旦有剩余的钱就会帮助需要的人等。,主要事迹,1.,为汶川、玉树地震幸存者捐款约,5,万元；,2.,免费为教师和学生开办书法班；,3.,自退休以来，共捐助,200,多万元资助,260,多名学生进入大学学习；,4.2016,年荣登“中国好人榜”。,你的看法,(,至少两点,),retired,退休的；,offer calligraphy lessons,开办书法班,win the Award of,“The Best Person in China”,入选“中国好人榜”,While-writing:,人物方敬基本信息连云港市赣榆人，80多岁，退休教师性格和蔼、,look/age/job,Example1:,Example2:,Example3.,general information about the person,personality&examples,your opinion about the person,1.Introduction,2.Main Body,3.Conclusion,Qualities:,look/age/jobExample1:genera,kind,helpful,care for,donate;,help someone in need,offer for free,a heart full of love,in his eighties;,a retired teacher,Fang Jing,Discuss in groups,kind,donate;a heart full of lo,1.is the person who has influenced me most.,2.is in his/her twenties/thirties/forties/,3.,.,has always been kind/helpful,4.To my surprise,Useful expressions:,1.is the person who has inf,人物,方敬,基本信息,连云港市赣榆人，,80,多岁，退休教师,性格,和蔼、乐于助人、关心儿童、一旦有剩余的钱就会帮助需要的人等。,主要事迹,1.,为汶川、玉树地震幸存者捐款约,5,万元；,2.,免费为教师和学生开办书法班；,3.,自退休以来，共捐助,200,多万元资助,260,多名学生进入大学学习；,4.2016,年荣登“中国好人榜”。,你的看法,(,至少两点,),retired,退休的；,offer calligraphy lessons,开办书法班,win the Award of,“The Best Person in China”,入选“中国好人榜”,While-writing:,人物方敬基本信息连云港市赣榆人，80多岁，退休教师性格和蔼、,1,.Work out your points.,3,.Find out the best one in your group and show it to others.,2,.Find,out the mistakes in your articles and correct them.,评分标准,满分,得分,文章结构合理，要点齐全,10,分,语言,（句子结构、语法、用词）,8,分,行文连贯、逻辑,3,分,字数、大小写、标点等,2,分,书写,2,分,总分,25,分,Post-writing:,1.Work out your points.3.Find,Sample,Post-writing:,The person who has influenced me most is Fang Jing.He is from Ganyu,Lianyungang.Now,he is in his eighties.He is a retired teacher.,Fang Jing has always been kind and helpful.He is ready to help anyone and care for children.Whenever he has some money left,he gives it to someone in need.,After Wenchuan and Yushu earthquakes happened,he donated about 50,000 yuan to the survivors.He often offers teachers and students calligraphy lessons for free.To my surprise,he has donated over 2 million yuan to help more th