单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,会考模拟作文练习,会考模拟作文练习,1,Tips,表达方式,9,:,0011:30,We,began,our work,at,nine oclock and,ended,at,half past eleven.,We worked,from nine to eleven thirty,.,结尾的感受要联系文章内容。,描述活动的形容词,a meaningful experience,an unforgettable experience,a beneficial experience,Tips 表达方式 9:0011:30,2,Last Saturday,my class,organized,a volunteer activity.My classmates and I,went,to the city park near our school,where,we,did,some volunteer work.,We got there at nine oclock.,As soon as we,arrived,there,we,were divided into,three groups,and then we,began,to work.,Some,helped,water trees and flowers.Some,cleaned,the benches and,picked,up litter.,Others,cleaned,the childrens playground,.,Last Saturday,my class o,3,Time passed quickly.Before we knew it,it had been 11:30 and we had to go back.,We didnt finish the work until 11:30.It was time for us to leave.,Time passed quickly.Before we,4,All of us were happy because we did something good to others and to the environment.I believe,this activity can increase peoples awareness of environmental protection,.Protecting the earth is protecting ourselves.,All of us were happy becau,5,Last Saturday,my class organized a volunteer activity.My classmates and I went to the city park near our school.As soon as we got there at nine oclock,we were divided into three groups.Some helped water trees and flowers.Some cleaned the benches and picked up litter.Others cleaned the childrens playground.,Although we were very tired,we felt very happy because we did something good to the environment.(73 words),12-14,分,Last Saturday,my class,6,上周六我们班组织了一个志愿者活动。我和我的同学们去了学校附近的城市公园。九点我们到达那个公园。一到那儿我们就被分成三组,然后开始工作。有的帮忙浇树和花,有的擦长凳,还有的捡垃圾。,时间过得很快,不知不觉,就到了,11:30.,我们该回去了。,我们所有人都很高兴,因为我们为他人和环境做了好事。我相信这个活动可以提高人们环保的意识。,上周六我们班组织了一个志愿者活动。我和我的同学们去了学校附,7,节水周志愿者作文,-tips,认真审题,,“,请参考以下信息,完成你的个人简介,并说明你申请成为志愿者的目的。”,确定以下内容,内容:,个人简介,+,目的或原因,时态:,一般现在时,结构:,2,段或,3,段,节水周志愿者作文-tips认真审题,“请参考以下信息,8,应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯,条理清晰,For one thing,For another thing,whats more/besides/in addition/furthermore,in a word/in short,节水周志愿者作文,-tips,应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯,条理清晰节水周志愿者作文-,9,在所给的每一条要点后,可以有适当的展开或补充,以达到丰富内容的目的。,节水周志愿者作文,-tips,在所给的每一条要点后,可以有适当的展开或补充,以达到丰富内,10,对,有兴趣,sb.be interest,ed,in,sb.be,keen,on,sb.be,enthusiastic,about,sb.,have/show/express,an,interest,in,正确的语言表达,对有兴趣正确的语言表达,11,我想要成为一名,志愿者。,Id like to,become,a volunteer,of,Id like to,work,as,a volunteer,for,.,Id like to,take part in,as a volunteer.,正确的语言表达,我想要成为一名志愿者。正确的语言表达,12,我擅长说英语,因此我能够和外国人流利地,/,自如地交谈。,I am good at,speaking,English so I can,communicate/talk,with,foreigners fluently/,freely,.,正确的语言表达,我擅长说英语,因此我能够和外国人流利地/自如地交谈。正确,13,我有,的习惯。,I,am in,the habit of doing sth.,I,have,the habit of doing sth.,I have,a good,habit of doing sth.,养成,的习惯,form/get into,the habit of doing sth.,摆脱,的习惯,get rid of,the habit of doing sth.,正确的语言表达,我有的习惯。正确的语言表达,14,阐述做某事的原因,I want to do,because,+,句子,The reason,why,I do is,that,+,句子,I want to do .Thats,why,I want to do,正确的语言表达,阐述做某事的原因正确的语言表达,15,阐述目的,I want to do so that I can do,I want to do in order that I can do,In order to do,I want to do,正确的语言表达,阐述目的正确的语言表达,16,为,做贡献,make contributions to,sth./doing sth.,将自己致力于,devote,oneself,to sth./doing sth.,将自己的时间,精力,金钱贡献给,devote,ones,time,/,energy,/,money,to,正确的语言表达,为做贡献正确的语言表达,17,正确的语言表达,介绍姓名,身份,来自何方,My name is .I am a Senior 2 student,from,.,I am Li Hua,a Senior 2 student,studying,at .,I am a Senior 2 student called Li Hua,studying,at/,who study,at,正确的语言表达 介绍姓名,身份,来自何方,18,TIPS,文体:,议论文,时态:,现在时,结构:,3,段,:一方的看法;另一方的看法;我的看法,TIPS 文体:,19,议论文常用句型,开头句,:,Different people have different opinions on the problem/the matter.,陈述一方观点:,Some people think/consider that,Sb.are in favor of the idea that,Sb.are in favor of doing sth.,Sb.hold the idea that,议论文常用句型开头句:Different people ha,20,陈述另一方观点:,The other people are against this idea/opinion/view.,Sb.dont agree to the idea.,Sb.dont think that sb.should do,陈述自己的观点:,In my opinion,As far as I am concerned,议论文常用句型,陈述另一方观点:议论文常用句型,21,连接词,首先,其次:,on one hand,on the other hand,for one thing,for another thing,递进关系,:,also,besides,whats more,in addition,furthermore,moreover,转折关系:,but,however,on the contrary,连接词 首先,其次:,22,Different students have different opinions on it.,Some students,think it is,a good idea to keep,pets,Pets can,comfort old people who live alone.,Besides,pets can,make our life interesting.,Example writing,because,Pets can company people and bring,happiness to them.,Different students have d,23,On the contrary,the other students,are against,the idea.If too many people keep pets at home,its bad,for the environment.,Also,pets,may be,noisy and even attack people.,What more,they spread diseases.,Example writing,be noisy,吵闹;喧杂,make noise,制造噪音,On the contrary,the othe,24,In my opinion,we can keep pets at home.But meanwhile we should pay attention to the environment when walking pets.,Only in this way,can we enjoy the pleasure with pets and protect our world.,Example writing,In my opinion,we can keep,25,改错,They think keep pets is bad for the environment.,They think,keeping,