写作训练,Unit 7 Its raining!,写作训练 Unit 7 Its raining!,满园春色关不住；映日荷花别样红；碧云天,黄叶地,秋色连波,波上寒烟翠；忽如一夜春风来,千树万树梨花开。同学们,在这不同的四季里,你和你的家人、朋友在做些什么呢？,满园春色关不住；映日荷花别样红；碧云天,黄叶地,秋色连波,波,假如你是李华,请给你的美国朋友,Lucy,用英语写一张明信片,给她介绍你和你的家人在海南度假的情况及此刻你们正在做的事。,提示：,1.,天气晴朗,有点炎热。,2.,我和家人去海滩游玩。,假如你是李华,请给你的美国朋友Lucy用英语写一张明信片,给,Dear Lucy,Hows it going,？,_,_,See you soon.,Yours,Li Hua,Dear Lucy,1.,谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。,1.谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。,2.,遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。,(1),我现在在海南度假,我在这里玩得很开心。,Now Im _ _ _ in Hainan and I _ _ _ _ _here.,(2),现在是夏天,天气晴朗,有点炎热。,Its _.The weather is _ and _ _ _.,on a vacation,am having a good time,summer sunny a,little hot,2.遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。(1)我现在在,(3),这里的许多地方很美,我和家人这些天正在游览它们。,Many places here are _ _,and my family and I _ _ them these days.,(4),现在是下午,我在海边散步。父亲在海里游泳。,Its afternoon right now.I _ _ _ _ _.My father _ _ _ _ _.,very beautiful,are visiting,am walking by,the sea is swimming,in the sea,(3)这里的许多地方很美,我和家人这些天正在游览它们。ver,(5),我的弟弟在高兴地玩沙子。妈妈在给他拍照。,My little brother _ _ _ _ happily.My mother _ _ _ _ _.,is playing with sand,is taking photos,of him,(5)我的弟弟在高兴地玩沙子。妈妈在给他拍照。is,3.,完美衔接：利用连词,使句子意思连贯。,通过现在进行时描述现阶段正在发生或进行的活动,使全文语意具有明显的统一性和连贯性。,3.完美衔接：利用连词,使句子意思连贯。通过现在进行时描述现,4.,佳句妙用：添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。,(1)The weather is not either hot or cold here.,这里的天气既不热也不冷。,(2)Its a good place to relax.,这是一个休闲的好地方。,(3)There are many places of interest here.,这里有许多名胜古迹。,4.佳句妙用：添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。(1)The we,5.,连句成篇：,Dear Lucy,Hows it going,？,_,_,See you soon.,Yours,Li Hua,5.连句成篇：Dear Lucy,【,品读范文,】,【品读范文】,人教版七年级下册英语-Unit-7-写作练习ppt课件,假如你是王林,住在北京。请阅读,Louis,给你发的这封电子邮件,然后根据邮件内容用英语给,Louis,进行回复。,假如你是王林,住在北京。请阅读Louis给你发的这封电子邮件,Dear Wang Lin,How are you doing these days?Its cold in Australia,and its snowing outside.So I have to stay at home and watch TV with my brother.What about the weather in China?What are you doing these days?,Yours,Louis,Dear Wang Lin,要求：,60,词左右；电子邮件的格式和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear Louis,_,_,I miss you.,Yours,Wang Lin,要求：60词左右；电子邮件的格式和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,_,_,_,_,_,_,Dear Louis,，,Im feeling really good these days.Its summer in China and its really hot in Beijing.Im on a vacation.Im taking piano lessons and Im also taking swimming lessons,so I also have fun with my friends.Oh,its 5 oclock in the afternoon.Its time for me to help my mother cook dinner.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,My life is relaxing and fun,isnt it?,I miss you.,Yours,Wang Lin,_,